Poems part 2

[[N]eto]

Good job, Jesus (that's so wrong).

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Internal Conflict

I lay here thinking,
Wondering and predicting,
What my very mistakes may be creating.
And my emotions conflicting,
With my own desires,
Wishing all to have been a lie.
A simple dream,
Nothing more than a shadow,
That ceases to exist,
Once light is shun upon it.
I lay here thinking,
Wondering and predicting,
What it is you are day-dreaming.
It never stops,
My heart keeps beating,
As I hear your name echo through my mind.
Oh, how much has this grown?
My love for you,
Expanding like the universe,
From the day of its birth.
To tell you a lie,
Is like the sin I will not deny,
I cannot be untruthful,
Because I would rather die.
You deserve my full devotion,
You deserve to know my emotions,
I love you, and only you,
No matter what I may have done.

© Gabriel E. Ibarra

[<~Darkshadow~>]

dude....neto, your poetry is awesome....I love it...great work ;)

[jesusbot3000]

dude....neto, your poetry is awesome....I love it...great work ;)

agreed.

Slow Motion Explosion

your mind like an ocean,
overwhelming, overbearing.
slow motion explosion,
for the sailor wayfaring
your eyes like rough charcoal,
cold before their ignition.
your eyes lead to your soul,
your soul gives admission.

i dont know if i can breathe,
i dont know if i can hear.
i dont know if i can see,
i dont know if i can

thieves creeping in my mind,
its not a republic.
too many words left behind,
its not a republic.
this isnt a game,
people's lives on the line.
this is a damn shame,
its not that hard to define.

slow motion explosion,
i dont know if i can live this anymore...

copyright jesusbot3000

[[N]eto]

Jesus, another really good poem. It reminds me of a song (a strange song, at that) called "Slow Motion."

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Forgiveness

You believe in only yourself,
Your pride has swallowed your being,
Your ignorance has clouded your judgement,
And you lack the will to fight it.
Mistakes are made in life,
Not to create hate between two beings,
But as a test to gain experience,
And help you along the path in life.
You need not an enemy,
You need not to hate,
Why must you base your present,
On the past that can be forgotten?
To forgive and forget,
Is one of life's gifts,
Never take it for granted,
Because a friend is worth more,
Than the hate between two enemies.

© Gabriel E. Ibarra

[jesusbot3000]

eto']Jesus, another really good poem. It reminds me of a song (a strange song, at that) called "Slow Motion."

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Forgiveness

You believe in only yourself,
Your pride has swallowed your being,
Your ignorance has clouded your judgement,
And you lack the will to fight it.
Mistakes are made in life,
Not to create hate between two beings,
But as a test to gain experience,
And help you along the path in life.
You need not an enemy,
You need not to hate,
Why must you base your present,
On the past that can be forgotten?
To forgive and forget,
Is one of life's gifts,
Never take it for granted,
Because a friend is worth more,
Than the hate between two enemies.

© Gabriel E. Ibarra

nice...
"slow motion"- the rap song?!
also, i did think about making SME a song (in the veins of Modest Mouse and The Falming Lips). do you think it would work?

[London_Calling]

As I stood there watching,
For a glimpse of your divine beauty,
And contemplating the ways to declare my love,
It dawned on me the futility of my desire,
As my love is not returned,
Then i ponder am I being used,
Do I mistake friendship for passion?
And greed for love?

Trapped in sleep dreaming of you,
Seeing but not touching,
Eternally searching, searching for a way to embrace you,
But always in vain,
And in my waking,
All I find is a sick parody of my dream world,
And life doesn’t make sense to me,
The pointlessness of it all

[jesusbot3000]

All I find is a sick parody of my dream world,


great line!

[London_Calling]

Thanx lol compliments are allways welcome. Befor u post ur poem give some "constructive criticism" about the last poem posted. I personally would find it helpful.

[Anubis]

Reflection Of One's Own Mind

Our eyes meet
One by one

I notice you surround me
Yet i feel so alone

Much Like thee
Yet very Apart

A Refletion i must say
Is what dwells in your heart

It seems your here to stay
So i sit down

You do the very same

Follow my movements
I dont put you to shame

In creeps the silence
It feels all so strange

Something so Tense
My heart can not take it

"Speak!"
As i say!

Speak to your heart's content
it will do thee no harm

Yet you stay so silent
Follow my charm.

I Feel so alone
No one around

I look to a mirror
Not even a sound

It is my reflection
Nothing more

Now you get up!
And walk through the door!


©Michael J. I. Downs
...

Reflecting Amongst One's Own Mind Brings The Inner Beuty (!?) Or One's Own Inner Emotion To Life

It Is what Animates Our World Alike, Emotion.

This Poem Is Me, Reflecting amongst Me.

I Am:

Confused
Wondering
My Mind Is Free.

[[N]eto]

Very good, Anubis. Reminds me of one of my earlier poems. Here's another, dedicated to the special person in my life.

Dear Angel

Dear, oh dear person above the heavens,
He who watches over the stars,
Tell me, please tell me that I am awake.
I am living a reality,
I am being sincere and honest,
Not only because of this feeling,
This feeling that brings tears to my eyes.
This sweet emotion,
Greater than the vast space of the universe,
That fills my entity with a purpose,
Never allowing myself to seize that which is unreal,
Continuing to strive for a better tomorrow,
With he, the best gift life has laid upon me.
Dear, oh my dear Angel,
How much I love you,
Simply incomprehensible,
Uncontrollable like the aging of our vessels.
Our souls have spoken,
Bittersweet, yet truthful words,
That engulfed my mind with a shimmering light of hope.
We both feel,
This sweet emotion,
We both know,
It will never end,
Because you and I are bonded,
Like no other grain of sand,
On the shore of the ocean,
Waiting to be carried on across the sea of love,
Under a glimmering night sky.
I will hold on to you,
No matter how much we are pulled apart,
Since from this day on,
You are my only one.
Dear, oh dear person above the heavens,
He who watches over the stars,
Tell me, please tell me,
I am awake,
And he's more than a dream,
Sweeter than summer and spring.
Dear Angel, tell me...

© Gabriel E. Ibarra

[<~Darkshadow~>]

awesome poems guys....you guys are awesome....and i thought my poetry was good

[Sister of Metal]

guuuuuh....prettyness....

No title

Follow your heart
Enter your vains
Live throught this night
You will come to me

Feed your mind
Passionate lies
Closure will come
You will come to me

Angel eyed
pale white skin
hair like silk
Come to me

For I am you
I am within
look at me
Face your truth

Face your sins
Face your flaws
Face your desire
Face me...
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Tieke (c)

first poem since AGES damn...>_>

[Aqua]

guuuuuh....prettyness....

No title

Follow your heart
Enter your vains
Live throught this night
You will come to me

Feed your mind
Passionate lies
Closure will come
You will come to me

Angel eyed
pale white skin
hair like silk
Come to me

For I am you
I am within
look at me
Face your truth

Face your sins
Face your flaws
Face your desire
Face me...
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Tieke (c)

first poem since AGES damn...>_>
Whoa! Pretty^^ But scary <_<

Here's one of my poems, I wrote it a few months ago or something :P

Together

I wish to give my tears to you
So that you are free to cry
So that your voice
May echo all the way
From your soul to mine
As if they are one
Together...

I wish to take away your pain
So that you are free to laugh
So that your smile
May conquer many hearts
Including my own
So that our hearts can melt
Together...

I wish for you to go right now
So that you'll get a new chance
So that your happiness and joy
May be passed on to everyone
But I won't forget you
Because our hearts and souls will be
Together...

© E.J.G van der Drift

[<~Darkshadow~>]

very nice, Kaia! ;)

[London_Calling]

These are actualy songs but owel

Lyrics.


I find myself away from you,
Longing for the sight of your body,
Yet again you turn away, cast me away,
And once again I find myself *pause* living in shadows.

Each day passes by,
With the ticking of the clock,
And all I have left is the thought of you,
And once again I find myself *pause* living in shadows.

I watch you,
I want you,
I need you but I find myself left alone,
And once again I find myself *pause* living in shadows.

I have only memories,
I’m out of site and out of mind,
Living on the edge of sight,
And once again I find myself *pause* living in shadows.

Often in the corner of an eye in some forgotten place,
I’m seen but then forgotten,
Left with a crumbling effigy of my former self,
And once again I find myself *pause* living in shadows.

I find myself away from you,
Longing for the sight of your body,
Yet again you turn away, cast me away,
And once again I find myself *pause* living in shadows.














If you could feel (then you to would cry.)


If you could feel the pain I feel,
Then you to would cry for me,
My friends are finding there’s,
And I am left floundering and rejected.

If you could feel the burden I carry,
Then you to would cry for me,
I am a keeper of secrets,
But no one wants to hear mine.

If you could feel what I feel,
You to would cry for me,
What I feel and what I will,
Is instantly ****ed out by those around me.

If you could feel things I am forced to know,
You to would cry for me,
The pain and hurt of others,
Just adds to the pain I already feel.

If you could feel how I do,
You to would revel in others pain,
And as the tears fall from your eyes,
I would laugh with satisfaction.

If you could feel the pain I feel,
Then you to would cry for me,
My friends are finding there’s,
And I am left floundering and rejected.











She was easy.

I needed something good,
I needed a change,
She was easy and she did it for free,
This is the kinda fun I needed.

Let me see it,
Let me touch it,
Let me screw it,
She was so so so ****ing easy.

You wanted it good,
You wanted it hard,
You wanted it fast,
I gave you all three.

She was so ****ing easy,
She was horny she was dirty,
But I’d **** her again,
And she was so easy.
SO ****ing easy.












Pain.


It slashes through like a knife,
Everytime leaving deep wounds,
And its even worse on the inside,
Pain

Cuttin through you,
Sliding through your defences so easily,
A killing blow
Pain
Pains a **** head I wish I could get him back























**** i no it wnt let me get rid of big gaps

[Sister of Metal]

we asked poems, not lyrics, so please keep it own work aiight :rolledeye

[London_Calling]

I wrote the lyrics myself

[Sister of Metal]

aaah...I see...scuse me they just looked too professional I guess :P
keep it up then..

[London_Calling]

Feelings of joy cyphered away,
For the joy of others i hold my burden,
and i hold theres,
but my laughing exterior is a mockery of the feelings,
that scar me on the inside.