Poems part 2

[Soba]

I don't know about you all, but i managed to let my thoughts out in writing poems...again. i'm not going to repost the ones that was in the first poem thread. so...here i go...

My Thirteenth Year

As I stare out the window,
Watching the birds fly free,
I usually wonder,
What is in this world for me?

I long to fly
With those wondrous birds,
To feel Free,
And to be heard.

I’ll fly with a smile on my face,
Thinking about the past,
About my cage,
Because Freedom never lasts…


By Whitney Dañíer H.

[shadowfox3]

Youre really good poet.:cool:

[Contained]

I don't have a peom for you guys but i just wanted to say my grandma has poems in the hall of congress or something its called Will You?

[Sister of Metal]

I have written a poem on vacation, just for fun....If I can post it? ( if anyone actually wanna read it...)

[Anubis]

go ahead post it.


i have a poem but it curses so no i wont post it.

heres 1...the others were a bit brutal the ones i posted last they ehhh had to do with death so heres a normal one.

unnamed

Edit: ehhh forget it i cant rhyme as u can see all me other poems arent rhyms so forget it.

okay this is simple

unnamed

Voices, Do you hear them? Voices, i musnt fear them. voices, It echos through my mind its like a person i cannot find! Voices, It follows me its taunting me!, it tells me where to go i cannot run alone i must find a friend! It screams my name am i insane?! Theres a room within my dream as i follow this path the voices get louder but i never finish. I must see who it is! The dreams are back i go deeper within, the air takes a sudden drop i feel as though I had been shot. I get to a door The doors open wide a Jakal and a man appears i fear but than i see the form, the lights turn on i see the creature standing in front of me! a shrill of terror runs down my back, but i do not scream. i must hide my feelings inside of me, The Anubis speaks in a deep and unmistakeable tone, Egyptian, but somehow i can understand, it says ''Do not Fear for i Am your Gaurdian, I will be your guide. You will be endowed with all my powers you will be the ruler of the Dead. By midnight I will be your soul and you will become fused with me. The Dream collapsed in a terrific explosion awoke me. i jump to find half of my room disolving in to midair, Am I dreaming? No, The darkness swalows me Ifear it is the end, but no a voice speaks to me it says ''The end of your life means the beginning of Anubis.'' i didnt understand till a clock hand shone above me, ! minute till twelve midnight, i fall, i see a dead end, I am going to crash. than all of a sudden a Jakal appears, it saves me. than i see a light a dog in the form of a ghost appears i see it than i fall i see my soul run away than the Jakal enters my body and i feel like i have died.


ehhh i forgot 2 write the rest down soo ehh i don remember. lol hehehe

[Soba]

lol, just like the other one.
go ahead, Mizz, i know i like reading poems from others, see what they've been thinking about.

here's another one...


I can see it,
But then again,
I can't.

He just walked out of the fog,
Yet,
He stayed where he was.

Every night,
He'd visit me,
Would just sit there and watch.

But when i wake up,
In the morning,
It was like he was never there.

A few nights before,
He said his first words to me,
Just a simple 'hello'.

It got to the point,
That'd I thought i dreamed,
But then it started happening in the day.

One second,
I'd be talking to Mum,
The next, to him.

I told my friends about it,
How he would visit,
And then disappear.

That's why I am here...
In this place...
They thought I was going insane...

Maybe it was a dream,
Maybe I was insane,
Maybe...no...

He still talks to me,
Appearing at night to talk to me,
Telling me that i was perfectly sane.

I just had to keep quiet,
And i'd be out...
But i just couldn't...

I'm just here...
Maybe I really am insane...
Maybe...

okay...uuummm...i need more thought on this.

[Anubis]

ahhh Harry potter. i`m almost done with the 5th book.

okay ummmmmmmm.......i`m out right now an don know any soooo uhhhh i`ll think on it...

[GohanX]

Originally posted by Mizz_Bennington
I have written a poem on vacation, just for fun....If I can post it? ( if anyone actually wanna read it...)

come on mizz_b I wanna hear it.

I'll give ya guys a poem later though

[BloodRunsCold]

im not a poet goes against ma honor code just dont like poems but i dont like them ur guyses are the bast poems ive read

[Soba]

your honor code??? oi, thx...
i'm sorry if this poem makes anyone uncomfortable, if it does, i'll put up a different one...or rephrase it.


Haunted

As I walk down the street
A house catches my eye
Its paint job was horrible
And smelled as if someone died.

As I walk up the walkway,
Weeds and sticks grab at my jeans,
And the wind whispers in my ear,
About something unseen.

The rotting door opens with a creak,
And I step inside,
The house moans its terrible fate,
Laying where the dead lie.

I start to back away,
The door closes with a slam,
The floor shakes a little,
Oh no…the lion has just captured the lamb.

I feel around for a light switch,
My fingers brushing over something cool and damp,
Aha! I found it,
Darn, out went the lamp.

Lightning flashes outside,
Threatening to awake the dead.
Fear rises to my throat,
Dreading what Fate has said.

I shiver uncontrollably,
Eyes adjusting to the dark,
Then the lightning flashed again,
Giving me a start.

My eyes widen with horror,
Staring at the man before me,
He raised his knife and disappeared,
Making me not believe what I see.

I look down as I see something,
He was lying face down,
A knife in his back,
My ears blocked off all sounds.

He was pale and damp,
And lying in something red,
Wait, what do you know,
I think he’s dead…

Whitney Dañíer H.

[Sister of Metal]

ok, my poem: called: how love left me ( gee, promising)


here I am,
standing alone again,
abanedoned by you again,
You pushed me away again,
and now I'm crying here....again

Why can't u be satisfied with what you have?,
so you can hold me in your arms again,
so we can be togather again,
so u can love me again,
but you just left me here....again

I wish you'd understand me the way I understand you,
so you can talk to me again,
so you can cre about me again,
so you can express yourself to me again,
But you turned your back on me.....again

And now you are a plague to me,
I'm trying to get you out of my head again,
Pretend I hate you so much again,
I don't want you to send the feelings back again,
But they did and they still do, over and over again....

wha,yeah I know, lot of agains....

[GohanX]

nice poem mizz_b.

[Unrealdimensions]

Wanna hear mine ok here it tis!

Eat me,
Beat me,
Bite me,
Blow me,
Suck me,
**** me,
Very Slowly,
If you kisss me dont be sassy,
Use your tounge and make it nasty!

:lmao:

LOL

Alright a real poem made by, who else? me

Whats that taste, in the base, of the coca-cola can.
Watch it not, of the pow, of the coca-cola in the can.
If you can take your hand and rink the coca-cola in the can.

Its always good if its coca-cola yeah :D

[GohanX]

man you got issues lmao

[Unrealdimensions]

Yep i love teh coke :lmao:

[mlj2k]

lol nice one unreal! ;)

@mizzb: and you used all those agains to make a point ye? we learnt that in class, well sumin about repeating words in poems!:tup:

@unreal: an what coke is that? ;)

[Sister of Metal]

actually, I was having a lot of fun....I heard a song with a lot of agains, so I thought: I can do that too, but in poem form^^ I've got lots of other poems that way.....but thats another story...till then, just think of it what u want ^^

[Anubis]

Originally posted by Mizz_Bennington
ok, my poem: called: how love left me ( gee, promising)


here I am,
standing alone again,
abanedoned by you again,
You pushed me away again,
and now I'm crying here....again

Why can't u be satisfied with what you have?,
so you can hold me in your arms again,
so we can be togather again,
so u can love me again,
but you just left me here....again

I wish you'd understand me the way I understand you,
so you can talk to me again,
so you can cre about me again,
so you can express yourself to me again,
But you turned your back on me.....again

And now you are a plague to me,
I'm trying to get you out of my head again,
Pretend I hate you so much again,
I don't want you to send the feelings back again,
But they did and they still do, over and over again....

wha,yeah I know, lot of agains....

very good! nice i like!

hmmm i have an idea for a poem but i havent put it down in words yet....this is an old one some mayalready seen it...


Death

Death is a person, a devil, a slave, a demon. It doesnt controll you but it is you who controlls it. He waits till the right moment than when you fear him the most that is when he gets you, he is a shadow, a demon, a spirit, a Reaper of death, He is me! I am who you call the Reaper, the bringer of death you cannot see me but i multiply I am behind you, infront of you and i am youre shadow in the day, I am here there evrywhere in the night, but most of all I am youre friend, slave and your Trator. I am a person, Devil, slave and Demon all in one, i am the bringer of death. I am death.

[Sister of Metal]

thnx^^I'm making some more ^^

[Anubis]

cool post em when u fnish

i need some time to think

[Popa§murf69]

when apples are ripe the should be plucked
when a girl is sixteen she should be F*****

i toss you toss we all toss for applesuace :)

lol i suk

[GohanX]

I can't feel myself I don't want nobody to ever love me you are my shining star my guiding light my love fantasy theres not a minute hour or day or might that i don't love you your at the top of my list cuz I'm always think of ya. i still remember in the days when I was scared to touch you how I spent my days dreamin when and how to say i love you. you must of none that I had feelins deep enough to swim in thats when you opened up your heart and you told me to come in.

its kinda stupid

[Sister of Metal]

NO ITS GOOD! look at mines.....:

what is it with me and love?
its like a bad shoe
a non-fitting glove....
I meet a guy
he leaves me in a lie
and I start to love

he loved me, he told me so!
all the time I believed
but then I see him with a girl,
I realise: I was decieved.

over and over again this pain
please god let it end here
Im circling around in disaster
all I want is my mind clear!

I guess I have to stand this all
my prears aren't being heard
my mind is stuck...my feelings crushed
and my life's being disturbed.....

man what a dramatic thingeys...I should really get on the happy side, but ok......never mind the spelling, I'm dutch so...

[Anubis]

Very nice!!! good i like!
very good! Dramatic but good!
(need more time to think)

[GohanX]

very nice poem mizz_b

[Sister of Metal]

Thank u all....but its just another stupid poem of me, and u guys are very good too! come on ppl! post post post!:crazy: sorry I'm freaking.....

I felt them last night again...
the sparks over my back
I fellt them spread over my body
and thought :"what tha heck...
let them go and do their job
whatever that might be
all I know is I'm here with you
and you are here with me..

ogod, I'm getting romantic...

[Anubis]

hey thats a good poem! noice! i like!

[Popa§murf69]

why does everbody rite those sissy sappy love poems and stuff??? i wouldnt call minbe poems id call em ryhmes :)

[Soba]

remember that jealousy i felt in the first poem thread? huh?..........it's come back -.-;....


i have just hurt myself,
I meant it to be quick,
But when I came to stick
The poison arrow in my arm,
The tip slipped.

It went to the thickest part of my leg,
Maybe i wanted more time to think,
To let it sink.
I am sitting here under my favorite tree
Thinking about...nothing


it's not complete, but there you go...my idea came from a book i'm reading...

[Anubis]

ahhhhh a poem finaly!


Aloha

You may say Hello or Goodbye but no matter what you say it comes out the same, Aloha, you may be straight and just say this is it, goodbye, but it will always come out as Aloha, You cannot think if this is Hello or Goodbye but it will always be Aloha. If you say Hello my friend it will only be Aloha, Aloha can mean so many things but yet so little of a word, Aloha, This may be the end of my little poem but its just the start of a new beginning, Aloha my friend, Aloha.

by
Michael John Isaac Downs

[Lesjordans]

Nah smurfs rocked the best!

[Sister of Metal]

Originally posted by Popa§murf69
why does everbody rite those sissy sappy love poems and stuff??? i wouldnt call minbe poems id call em ryhmes :)

whats wrong with sissy sappy love poems?^^

[Nitrous]

Some lads like myself find love poems sad.

:tup:

[Sister of Metal]

but love IS sad, dont u think? I never get lucky in Love so.....but maybe this time....

[GohanX]

I think your pretty lucky right now

[Sister of Metal]

U think so? ^^ I really hope so ^^ I had enough trouble with love..last few years ( come on, how desparete do u have to be to like a 24 old singer?) ah well.....just like my poem said....love just doesn't fit me, but I'll keep trying^^ well, getting a bit off topic here so, I promise the next post will be on topic^^

[Nick Hyral]

Okay... my first of probably millions of posts... or at least hundreds... This is meant for someone close to me...

Fly to Your Side Under the Midnight Sky

As I look at the midnight sky,
I begin to wish that I could fly,
Fly through the night and to your side,
For my love for you I cannot hide,
To you I truly I must confess,
How I long for your warm hands loving caress,
On this night to you I pledge my heart,
And from your side I will never part,
As I look upon the midnight skies twilight hue,
All I do is think of you,
Wishing that you to are looking upon the same star dotted night,
Bathing in the pale glowing light,
Wanting to be with me as well,
With feelings for me you wish to tell,
As I whisper the words of my heart into your ear,
Just to have you with me for I hold you dear,
Waiting for the morning light,
Just you and me in each others arms under the canopy of the night.

[GohanX]

yo son that was deep

[Sister of Metal]

yeah, what he (^) says....

[GohanX]

want a translation?

[Sister of Metal]

No, I can handle it thank u...I'm not stupid u know ^^

[GohanX]

I know

[Sister of Metal]

and besides, u couldt even if u wanted ( at least not in a way I could understand) * crosses arms* U cant speak Dutch...MUAHAHAHA ^^:lmao:

My feelings......... Deep
My senses.......... Gone
My body.............. Numb
My mind............... With you...always...
( ok thats no poem, but ok)

[Nick Hyral]

My might continue to post more poetry... I'm not sure... that is still debateable to me right now...

[Soba]

okie dokie!!!

Uknown...
this is something my aunt felt once, and i felt like a few months ago...

Can’t you hear my pained cries?
Every single night?
When you start to annoy me,
I don’t put up a fight?

Can’t you see how tired I am,
When you wake me up in the day.
How I never have,
Anything to say?

Of course you don’t,
You’ve never felt this pain.
But you will,
After many will be slain.

But then again,
It’s not the same.
No, to you,
It’s like a game.

Well it’s not,
I’m very serious with this.
You had better start noticing,
Or here comes Death's Kiss.

I haven’t gone insane,
Not in this say.
But the pain inside me,
Is tearing me away.

Whitney D. H.



it's not good, i don't like it...

[Popa§murf69]

Originally posted by Tyrant
Nah smurfs rocked the best! damn straight

[Sister of Metal]

ok, I guess...ok her comes the worst fukin love poem I ever wrote ( and I'm NOT gona write ANY love poem EVER again...)

Erase my mind from all its thoughts,
because I only want to think of you..
Erase my eyes from all the things they've ever seen,
because all I want to see is you..
Erase my ears from all what they've ever heard,
because all I want to hear is you..
Erase my lips from all the other marks,
because I only want to be marked by you..
Erase my bodyfrom all the other wounds,
So the only scar will be made.....by you...

ok its not a poem....but....still...YUCK! I disgust myself... :argue: :tdown:

[Lesjordans]

Originally posted by Mizz_Bennington
ok, I guess...ok her comes the worst fukin love poem I ever wrote ( and I'm NOT gona write ANY love poem EVER again...)

Erase my mind from all its thoughts,
because I only want to think of you..
Erase my eyes from all the things they've ever seen,
because all I want to see is you..
Erase my ears from all what they've ever heard,
because all I want to hear is you..
Erase my lips from all the other marks,
because I only want to be marked by you..
Erase my bodyfrom all the other wounds,
So the only scar will be made.....by you...

ok its not a poem....but....still...YUCK! I disgust myself... :argue: :tdown:

:tdown:
Right ok lay off the Reality altering drugs lol j/k

[JoshMan]

one of my poems

I'm skating down the ice so fast,
The hockey finals have started at last.
But I'm just glad I'm here now,
We almost didn't make it; want to know how?
On our way here our truck had to stall,
So we almost didn't make it at all.
And then if that wasn't bad enough,
Our truck hit a fence post, the crash was tough.
But somehow, someway we made it back,
And our truck only suffered a crack!
We made it back in time for the game,
Today I could go to the Hall of Fame!
After the second period no-one had scored,
And everyone was getting bored.
Then I got a breakaway,
I could be the hero of the day!
But I accidentally missed the shot,
We win the game there?, I think not.
"Man!" I yell, "I just can't score!",
My chance had just slipped out the door.
The rest of the game looked rather bad,
"This game is cruddy, enough I've had."
But then I got the puck again,
Hallelujah, we could win.
Their defenseman then made a theft,
The clock is ticking, 30 seconds left.
We pulled our goalie, 6 men on,
This is such a risk, the game could be gone.
We got the puck and dumped it in,
It looked as if, we would win.
I skated towards the front of the net,
I whispered to my friend, "we'll win I bet."
Then the puck came to my stick,
We could win the game just with a flick.
I shot the puck over the goalie's shoulder,
And as it did his blood grew colder.
The benches cleared with joy and shame,
As my whole team shouts my name.
"Josh!, Josh!, Josh!", they shout,
"Without you we'd all be out".
I hold the trophy high and proud,
The crowd's cheer is long and loud.
This game had to be my absolute best,
From my struggle to get here to...well, you know the rest.

[Sister of Metal]

Originally posted by Tyrant
:tdown:
Right ok lay off the Reality altering drugs lol j/k

....... not funny.....I was serious...what are reality altering drugs? I dont use drugs...not even asperine....and nice poem Joshman! were u the one that said he couldn't write??

[JoshMan]

no, i was the one who said i couldnt draw but could write poetry

[Soba]

what are you talking about B? i liked the poem...i had to reread it twice though since i'm slow at understanding. -.-;

@Josh, and you sure as well didn't prove yourself wrong...though...everyone can draw, just put your mind to it.

i quit, i'm not writing any poems anymore

[Sister of Metal]

twice? Gee Ice, u must really have a strong stumach...Its like this: I just really dont like love poems( except the ones wrote for me :P)and now I'm writing them myself....and that makes me really really sick....wha...u must understand this: I'm trying to change the image ppl have of me: at school I'm always a nice, ugly, but very unguilty and nice girl...and I'm sick n tired of that!! wha!! I wanna be a rough girl!!I even shocked ppl by saying I loved Linkin Park, now..they all were stunned and sayd: U actually KNow that band? and...Aren't u a too nice girl for that kinda music? and..what did ur mommy say of it? * grumble* I really want to get rid of that image....wha....but ok ^^ this was kinda :offtopic:

[Sister of Metal]

NO dont die this tread!! come on you poets what are you waiting for??!??
heres another one:

Why leave
when you can stay with me?
why lock the door
when you know I have the key?
why Hide
when I know all the places you could be?
Why blind yourself
when I'm still able to see
It has no use
don't you agree?

But why hold you here
when you want to get away from me?
why open the door
when I could just destroy the key?
why look for you
When you're far away, where you want to be?
why be able to look
when I'm too blind to see
how glad you are
to be rid of me?
......
Tieke (c)

lol..wrote this one during history..how talking about the industrial revolution inspires me ^^ ( sorry for teh double post)

[Nick Hyral]

Little background history on this poem.. it was written in loving memory of my first gf Lisa Bales.


Lost Loves Bond

As I look upon the grave,
Of the one I could not save,
The first one that love did truly start,
Of the girl who stole my heart,
Everyday I cry endlessly,
I miss you and I hope you miss me,
Everynight and sit and pray,
Hoping we will meet again another day,
Always thinking of you all the time,
Death is such an awful crime,
Especially since your life barely began to start,
You will forever have a place in my heart,
God needed an angel on that day,
On the very moment he took you away,
When I think of you I begin to cry,
For I never wanted you to die,
I sit her thinking of you everyday,
To be back with you again is for what I pray.

[Soba]

oi...

@ MB....hhheeeyyy, that's cool...*cough*thoughithinkitmatchesmeeverydaywhenimatschool*cough*

@Nick, deep (to me)...i could almost just almost feel that...


n.n i guess just one more...so i'm breaking my code of honour..oh well..


I could not speak of what I felt
I understood it was fear,
My heart was pounding so fast…
I dreaded my persecutors would hear it
The sweat pouring down my body
Surely it would make me slip and fall
In my grasp,
I was making my track only too clear for them.
Crawling wall by wall,
I moved silently
through the filthy narrow streets of Tokyo,
Kusari-kama always at readiness.
Just in case…
Just in case…
Failure.
But how was I
An assassin about to be assassinated
To speak of an emotion
So delicate for my apprehension…
I went on fleeing from my unseen pursuers.
Only a year before I was one of them.
Now, all those I had joined them in doing,
Hunting, stealing, slaughtering,
Were targeted upon me.
I was to be executed…
What to do…
I can only run for now…until I see my savior.
But until then…
“There she is!”

[Sister of Metal]

nother poem, yes, again the indusrial revolution inspired me...* cough*...ah well...

When you left
my heart went to stone
my feelings froze
down to the bone
The world kept turning
But mine was gone
destroyed forever
again I was alone

Love makes blind
I could not see
the beauty of the world
floating around me
My heart is locked
yes I have the key
somewhere in my mind
but where could it be?
------------
Tieke (c)

Hey guys, I lost my key ! did anyone see it? lol...* starts digging in mind and after an hour holds up a mini-lil-priegel key... look ^^ found it ^^//

[Nick Hyral]

I won't let this thread die :P
I'm going to give a try to a new technique of poetry I created.


The day you said you loved me was a day I will never forget,
You were the sweetest girl that I had ever met,
I will never forget the moment when I died as you passed away,
My heart had broken and I cried every single day,
My soul had become a frozen wasteland that none did dare to cross,
I still don't except that you are gone to me you were my greatest loss,
The cold winds of suffering whip and lash at my bare and broken heart,
Now I suffer endless pain but the day I lost you was the day it did start,
In my heart I don't want you to leave I wish for you to stay,
And those who feel my loss say they are sorry and that Lisa is as well,
I overlook them all as I suffer in my own personal Hell,
I then look at them and sigh as I tell myself "I couldn't hear her, heaven is just to far away."
On that day you did not die alone for on that day too I had died,
I walk a path of chaos and pain the burden is to much to bear inside,
Wishing to be freed of the life that I now lead,
Emotions I once felt in my heart have now become so hard to read,
Every night I stare out into the starlight sky,
Remembering the times we spent together now taken from me all I can do is cry.

[Sister of Metal]

O.O WOW Nick....thats a deep one....I didnt understand all of it but....O.O

another....

love can be like sun
but for me its the moon
Love can be like a rose
but mine just won't bloom
Love has torn me apart
and has kept me together
She just won't understand
I can't hold this forever
Love is like a beautiful necklace
perfect of some kind
but there is a kink in the cord
and only that I can find
after a while the kink grows, it destroys the perfection
totally, until there is no left
It's like a chain reaction
it just keeps going and going
but you know where it will and
and on that very moment
you will realize love isn't your friend
it will rip your mind apart
and you know that I'm right
but you don't have to expect mercy
because love you can't fight.....
-------------
lets all hear an applause for our history teacher :P

[Soba]

you two are starting to make me cry...i'm serious, when i read something, i put it into a first person point...and then i can feel...

poem, but not complete, just started...

As the world turns,
My knowledge grows…
As I get older,
I begin to know…



and that's it...but it's not finished

[GohanX]

nice stuff everybody:tup:

[<~Darkshadow~>]

Here's two songs I wrote...If I could I would post the music itself but I have nothing to connect my guitar to my computer or wutever it is. They're both kinda Linkin Park style guitar and stuff...I'm always makin new songs too...


My Life

Rapped:
My Life - I just don’t understand why I am so screwed
You already know I’m never in the mood
It sucks - what I’m going through
I just can’t control all the things that I do

Chorus:
I can’t be who I wanna be
You freaks will never see what the hell is wrong with me
I can’t stand what I’m going through
It’s not that hard to see, I’m the worst part of you

Rapped:
I don’t know what’s worth fighting for
I just keep wanting more
I don’t wanna be ignored
So just go - go far away
Leave me alone everyday
Let me go somewhere I can stay

-chorus-
---guitar solo---
-chorus-

That's my best one yet...The chorus sounds a tiny bit like Faint from Linkin Park but not much.

Here's the other one:

The Rock Life

Chorus:
Rock Stars, They’re all the same,
They start to do drugs then lose their fame,
They screw up their lives because of it all,
Then everything begins to fall

Intro to chorus:
Everyday is just the same,
You sit on your ass and just complain
You yell at your wife about your fame
Then you live your whole life full of shame

-chorus-

Rapped:
You wonder why your life treats you bad,
You’re feeling ****ty and kind of sad,
You’ve filed divorce because you’re mad
Your kids don’t wanna call you dad

--intro to chorus--
-chorus-
---guitar solo---
-chorus-


lol...that one's kinda lame...I did it at like 3am one day...

[Nick Hyral]

Good this thread is starting to revive a little. I should have some more poetry to post tonight.

[<~Darkshadow~>]

I was wondering if somebody could write a short poem...five lines max. for a sig I'm making...The sig is basically black with a cresent moon and a few white dots for stars....try to make something that you think would fit that sig...thanks...:D

[Sister of Metal]

well, its indeed a bit revived...here is a HAPPY poem ( for change, happy and NOT about love :P)
Titel; the Unicorn

When the sun shines on
The leaf covered ground
The forest wakes up
And is filled with sound
I open my eyes
And look at the sun
I stand up from the ground
And I start to run
My white manes are floating
On the rhythm my body moves
And the earth is trembling
Underneath my hooves
Where am I going?
Well, who will say
I’ve been to many places
But I’ll never stay
You have to seize freedom
When it comes to you
Only one can make that choice
And guess who?
Yes, I took the chance
And now I feel
Like I exist
Like I am real
I am a unicorn
A fantasy creature, they made me look like that
But some people believed
And those people I met
They were like: WHAOH! (:eek: )
And ran far away
Only their stories remain
Up to this very day…

I'm going happy tour ^^

[Anubis]

Nice Poem!

still dry because i`v been wriin this book....

[Sister of Metal]

WHAAAAah its getting silent again!!

Where are you now?
U are silent inside
with me always
tough I'm trying to hide
the feelings I once had
nothing of that was real
I'm just burrying them
and try not to feel
the pain I held this long
It messed up my mind
I try to think clear
but all I can find
Is even more mess
of the years before
I loved you so much
I had someone to adore
but then SHE came
and coquerd your heart
and I don't know now
where I can start
I wanted you back
but you didn't want me
and now you're in my mind
where you'll always be....
see, no real love
has ever touched my mind
I can't take it
and if you would be so kind
to get out of my head
I would recover
and you would be glad
I don't think about you
so all of your heart
can belong to HER
I can take my part
that once belonged to you
back into my life
so I can live once again
so I can revive......

Actually deticated to Roeland....
My first real love...
Yes I have feelings too ( not only for Chester :P)

[Anubis]

Nice Poem!:tup: :tup: :tup: very nice very nice!

[Soba]

*sniffs*......*cliku, save*
wwaahh!!!!


I know what you know,
But you don't know what I know,
So i wouldn't know what i would know,
To know what you know,
You do know what i know,
I know what you know,
You know everything i know,
I know nothing...


just a little thought....

[Sister of Metal]

aah no I didnt make u cry again...?...darn it..but its really the way I feel about him..I sent it to him, and told him that was the way I felt..he just said: 'O.O Sorry.....'..* sigh*...ah well...
anyways..u have confuusing thoughts!! lol, but its nice ^^

[Anubis]

Nice poems!:tup: :tup:

lots of people have confusing thoughts........you have some confusing thoughts..but thats in a good way..not a bad way.

[Sister of Metal]

thats true..I have confusing thoughts..and I think too much (example: whats the use of thinking: why is a table called a table?...I keep myself awake all night until I find out...thats why I didnt sleep :P..)
a poem: Love can...

Love can make
and love can break
love can be real
and can be fake
love can fight
and love can pray
love can leave
and love can stay

Love can lift you up
and make you fall
love can make you walk
and force you to crawl
love can see
and love can be blind
love can clear
and poison your mind

Love can make you depressed
and make you obsessed
but what love will never do
is dissapear
and that is why love is my greatest pride
and my worst fear.....
------------------------------
Tieke (c)

well, hey, I was depressed, and what do you do when ur depressed? just, write a poem :P

[Anubis]

my thoughts are confusing too...like once i asked myself, Why do we need to think? Why is the earth round?

well they were sytupid questions but i dunno why i asked em....


anyways thats a gr8 poem!:tup:

[Soba]

*puts down too many compliments and comments so i had to make this right here*.......and thanx.........*sigh* coonnfffooozzziinnggg




You ain’t my daddy,
So get out of my face.
You ain’t my daddy,
You can never take his place.
You ain’t my daddy,
Though you married to my mom.
You ain’t my daddy,
You ain’t gonna treat us wrong.
You ain’t my daddy,
I’m watchin you,
You ain’t my daddy,
Your every move.
You ain't my daddy,
Man, you talk to me like that again.
You ain't my daddy,
You'll regret it till the end.


not finished.....-.- my mum is getting married...this guy is gonna remember us forever....maybe in a good way, maybe in a bad way...depends on how he treats us.

[Sister of Metal]

good one! did ur mom read that one?
here's one I wrote when I was happy ^^

My ears are tired of listning
to all the word you say
every letter you speak every word you make
every centace, all betray.
But also why should I listen
when this world is full of sound?
close you're eyes and listen
noise is allways around.
But your voice, its too strong
no barrier can fight
So your traps will pull me down again
and your ropes will hold me tight.....
-----------------
Tieke (c)

lol...* thinking about whats she writes when she is depressed* ^^

[Soba]

no way! i'd never show her!.....i sing it instead!

depression...ai...


As i sit out here,
Starin at the sky,
The words in my head,
Form into 'why'.

Why am i here?
Why not on Guam?
Why in Chicago?
Where everything feels wrong...

I miss the sunny skies,
The sounds of our native tongue,
I miss my cousin Timothy,
Who always had it goin on.

I definitely miss those practical jokes,
And i surely miss Aunt Gitiona,
and I miss all the legends,
Especially of the Taotaomona...

I miss the schools,
Even though they didn't teach much,
And i miss the wife of Uncle Frank,
Who made a lei and such...

I miss Guam altogether,
Everything there.
I wish i could go visit,
Guahan, the fair...

[Anubis]

nice!

finaly i have one!!!!!!:P
k here it goes...

Hidden Questions.

My mind races with every blow i take.
my heart, it beats within the confines of my soul.
A hidden face screams my name, he is calling me to my doom.
a darkness grows and questions follows.
So many questions but no answers.
Its like a dream but no ending.
A face appears, it screams my name.
It`s all clear,
My fate is death but yet i live.
I want to scream, my soul, it gives
It screams my name,
I feel more pain,
I see it now, the pains inside,
My heart, it screams, my soul it aches.
My mind, it races with every blow I take.

a bit stupid and pointless but ahh well. kinda reflects on meh feelins somtimes.

[[N]eto]

Maybe this will let you know a bit more about myself...

-
I am but a simple-minded fool
Wondering what will become of me
I search the truth to the nothing
Because I cannot comprehend this world

I am like no other
I rather be myself
I hate being told what to do
I will not be like you

I am an artist
I draw
I believe
I do as I see

I am blind
I let myself be driven
Controlled I may be
But I can see you are not the one to be

I am a high school student
Growing up in twilight
Accepting what I witness
Appreciating what I experience

I am not what you see
I hide myself within
I am wearing but a mask
Yet you fail to distinguish myself and I

I am exhausted
I cannot take another step
Destiny will not come to me
I must go on

I am arrogant
Though I am told I cannot
I will not take those words
And stride on

I am someone
Searching for destiny

-

Erm, if you find it confusing, read it again. I wrote it in code words or so to speak, but you should understand it.

[Sister of Metal]

wow Gabriel, thats a whole new side of you!...I read it 6 times before I understood -.-' but now I get it...it goes deeep...

I feel....
I feel like going down
and never coming back
I feel like I'm gonna drown
in the ocean of your eyes
open them and tell me..
what do you see?
a troubled mind
who refuses to be set free
Love has turned her back on me
for the last time......
---------------
Tieke (c)

m'eh...not a good one, but I was bored so... ^^

[Soba]

hm....i have to keep rereading it, neto........n.n; yes, i am slow with codes..

MB....DEM YOU!!! *sniffs* your poems...*glare*...i'm gonna find out your secrets......EVEN IF IT ISH THE LAST THING I DO!!!!! *scans poems*


A Another Way

Last night, I made up my mind,
to change my life,
gonna go another way.

I thought about all the times,
when i was so strong,
when i was so brave.

I'm gonna turn myself around,
I'm gonna hold my head up high,
I'm gonna start a brand new day,
I'll never be teh same,
I"m gonna be all I can be,
I'm gonna do what's best for me,
There's nothing that can hold me down,
I'll never be the same


.....-.-.....demmit.....

[[N]eto]

Very nice you two!

Well, I updated my previous poem, it is not yet completed. Revising over it, I will probably change some words and phrases. Each stanza has a certain meaning, so read and think outside the box.

Here are two more:

Encouraging Life
Gabriel Ibarra

Look, I care about you.
You are my friend and I love you.
Don't do anything stupid...
You will regret it!

There is just so much more in life,
So just forget about all those stupid people.
Think about all those who love you,
And how much they would miss you!

-

I Stand By You...
Gabriel Ibarra

I stand beside your shadow,
I lived to be your friend.
Now I am gone,
And you still live on!

You have met others,
And befriended them as well.
Now I stand beside your shadow,
Wondering what has become of me...

I battle an internal conflict,
Thinking, wondering, confused...
Why is it that I no longer live - by you?

-

These were for a school project, so they aren't that good. When I do write something good it's because I'm doing it to express myself. The topic was life and death. The first one was dedicated to a girl friend of mine who cuts herself because of depression...

[Sister of Metal]

oh..that cutting...I know that...its terrible...it really is...
and Ice, you can write very VERY good poems !!! and I dont have any secrets, so it'll take long finding out :P

If you look in my mind
you'll find my soul
scarred with a gap
a non-closing hole
It needs to be filled
but it will never be
until the day I will leave
when my soul will be set free
this world wasn't ment for you
but miss you I will
up to the day that we'll meet again
the time will stand still
I'll never forget you
thats a promise from me
and I always stick to my word
as you will see....
--------------------------
Tieke (c)

deticated to my brother Lucas....
......

[Ansem]

i like all of your poems you guys are really good

[Soba]

xie xie!!!!!!!!

@prince: ooooooo, those are really really.......no words for them...none...-.-; you just had to say that it was an assignment!!!

@MB: ahahahaha!!.....wait.......really.....*pause*....nah........you gotta have some.......*pause*......no?.....demmit!....*sniffs* all the poems get to me...
but you told me you were an only child.......i won't get into that subject if it bothers you, though...


Where did you come from
man of mine
tell me how did you get here
man of mine
you must of been heaven sent
man of mine
cause you filled with so much love
man of mine

time and time and time again
you told me that your love won't end
you said you'd be there through thick and thing
to love and comfort and be my strength

i was so afraid to hold on tight
came of all the troubles due had in my life
but you have put my mind to rest
cause...baby...you prooved to be the best...


i seriously dunno where this came from.....i started writing.....if it's from a song, IT'S NOT MY FAULT, I SWEAR!!!...i was just writing it...

[[N]eto]

Originally posted by iceDragon-Snake
xie xie!!!!!!!!

@prince: ooooooo, those are really really.......no words for them...none...-.-; you just had to say that it was an assignment!!!

Hmm? Bad, am I right?

[Sister of Metal]

get normal! they're not bad! there isn't such a thing as bad poems, they come from the heart, express feelings as you feel them, and try to put them into words..there is no such thing as BAD poetry...
@ Ice: I AM an only child..but I had a brother...he died early, he lived for 5 moths or so, then died...then my parents got me...thats it..

I made one...no..another...^^

Love has found
the path to my heart
the road into my life
and how to take part

Destruction followed
the path made by love
and now holds my life
in the grip of an icy glove

And as the days flew
and the time passed by
A question was made
and asked to me: 'Why?'

Why is there love?
Why is there violence?
this question keeps burning
as I'm drowning in silence....
---------------------------------
Tieke (c)

yeah..why is there love or violence? I asked myself and all I could think of is that without one another there wouldnt be the other....-.-' complicated...

[banzaii.02]

The forest

Huge towering trees stand bold against the wind,
A barrier against the elements.
A natural portal, blocked with a gate ends the path,
Beckoning in with a sense of calmness and tranquility,
Yet underneath, an uncanny feeling of unsettle and fear.
Unseen birds sing into the stillness,
Their sweet voices muffled by the lush foliage.
Spindly branches tug at passers by like poor ghostly children grasping out for food.
Eerie voices whisper in the wind, long drawn out sighs, escaping from the depths of the wood.
Shapes dance wildly, just out the corner of the eye,
Vanishing when looked at directly.
The feeling of having no idea of what is happening in the outside world,
Alone among hundreds of tall giants.

Auron originally wrote one called the Forest which was published in the school newspaper but i thought it was naff, so i did my version on his idea of the Forest.

[[N]eto]

Originally posted by Mizz_Bennington
get normal! they're not bad! there isn't such a thing as bad poems, they come from the heart, express feelings as you feel them, and try to put them into words..there is no such thing as BAD poetry...
@ Ice: I AM an only child..but I had a brother...he died early, he lived for 5 moths or so, then died...then my parents got me...thats it..

I made one...no..another...^^

Love has found
the path to my heart
the road into my life
and how to take part

Destruction followed
the path made by love
and now holds my life
in the grip of an icy glove

And as the days flew
and the time passed by
A question was made
and asked to me: 'Why?'

Why is there love?
Why is there violence?
this question keeps burning
as I'm drowning in silence....
---------------------------------
Tieke (c)

yeah..why is there love or violence? I asked myself and all I could think of is that without one another there wouldnt be the other....-.-' complicated...

I was wondering what she meant, that's all. Hmm, very nice, Tieke, very nice indeed. :)

[Soba]

it was a compliment....the fact that it was an assignment made me sigh disappointedly though

@MB: oh, okay....sry, i'll stop asking questions now...except how in the world do you get the results of your poems....can't compare to that...

@Bonzaii: dude...that's kewlies!!.....what was the original?

[Sister of Metal]

@Ice: result? how do you mean result? oh, and I dont mind questions ^^

Bitter to love
bitter to live
release my soul
and do not fight

Poisoned my mind
A stake through my heart
watching the dark rise
and the sun fall apart

Feel the burning
give in to the flames
destroy forever
till nothing remains

drown in the water
do not call for help
let the liquid take you
and let it develop

Loving me is hard
and you know I'm right
but when love takes me
I will not fight

No struggle from me
I'll let my defense go
but I will never, ever
let my feelings show...
---------------------------------
Tieke (c)

its true...they say I'm bitter to love...:rolleyes:

[banzaii.02]

Originally posted by iceDragon-Snake
it was a compliment....the fact that it was an assignment made me sigh disappointedly though

@MB: oh, okay....sry, i'll stop asking questions now...except how in the world do you get the results of your poems....can't compare to that...

@Bonzaii: dude...that's kewlies!!.....what was the original?

I cant remember what the orig. was like but it wasnt very good. ( just jking Auron !!!) . My brother found his way into my account and changed it, which i thought was good. Here it is:

The Hedgehogs.


Huge towering hedgehogs stand bold against the wind,
A barmaid against the elephants.
A natural snorckel, blocked with a gate ends the bath,
Beckoning in with a sense of claminess and transparency,
Yet underneath, a can feels unsettled rust.
Unseen turds stink into the silliness,
Their feet muffled by the lush foil.
Spindly broccoli tug at passers by like poor ghostly crisp packets grasping out for Fred.
Hairy voices whisper in the wind, long drawn out pies, escaping from the depths of the swimming pools.
Capes dance mildly, just round the corner of the toad,
Varnishing when looking at the telephone directory.
The peelings have no idea of what is happening in the outside owl,
Al Capone among hundreds of small gnats.

[Soba]

can't remember???!!! FUDGE!!...oh well............:tup:

@MB: bitter to love?

I DISCLAIM THIS POEM!!! i just like it alot, my mum told me it


Love, a jip...
Kissing, a game...
Hickey on your neck...
Now you're in shame...


--------------

and i just love Shakespeare (sp?)

To be or not to be: that is the question
Whether tis nobler in the mind to suffer
The slings and arrows of outrageous fortune
Or to take arms against a sea of troubles,
And by opposing them?

------------------------

and this just gets to me:

So we gotta make it on our own..
We don't need yo education,
We don't need no pacifier,
We are the leaders of yo nation,
We gonna make sure the world survives,
There ain't no justice
There's just us
What happened to the meaning of, 'In God We Trust'?
As we get older and our children grow up,
We ain't gonna teach them
What y'all showed us...

*sniffs*..........i'll put up another poem later....gotta do homework..

[Sister of Metal]

yupz Ice, heard me right ^^
oh, we had science, what a SOURCE of inspiration!...

While writing your name
In the oceans shore
The waves play around
And take my words to their core

I can keep writing
But the sea will erase all
Until the tides will turn
And the night will fall

And while the wind blows
I whisper your name once more
And as the wind takes my words
The waves take the shore…
--------------------------------------
Tieke (c)

^^ I like tha sea ^^
oh and guys> I'll be offline for 10 dayz now, I have to go on vacation so..seeya all laterz! I SHALL MIZZ YOU!!! and you...and you....adn you...and offcourse..you...:cry:

[Soba]

yeah...the sea is great.......*frowns*...but now i find it kind of depressing to think of it not being home and all...



The weather is sunny and bright,
Light steps and graceful manners,
Forever we'll be friends,
Only you, my best friend...





p.s..........where'd you get that avvy from?! i've been trying to figure that out for the longest!

[Aqua]

Okay people, I just got started, so my poems aren't really much to talk about, but still, here are some:

Nature

The leaves of the tree,
Fall on the ground,
Just like my memories,
Scattered all around,

The water from the river,
Reflects the sun,
Just like my visions,
From which I will always run,

The dust from the desert,
Is blown away,
Just like my thoughts,
That will never stay,

The clouds in the air,
Move from their place,
Just like I,
Will leave without a trace.

---------------------------
Lost

I’m lost and I can’t be found,
You can try if you want,
But I’m buried deep in the ground,

I’m lost and I’m far away,
You can try to search me,
But I’m gone for night and day,

I’m lost and I’m crying,
Please get me out of here,
And prevent me from dying.

------------------------------------
Maybe

The lights may go out,
The sun may go down,
The darkness may come,
And everything may drown,

The sea may dry up,
The fortress may get burned,
The air may be poisoned,
And the tides may get turned,

But even now,
When everything may be lost,
Love will continue existing,
And stays at any cost.
-----------------------------
Dreaming

My mother yells,
My father screams,
I can only hide,
I have only dreams,

Dreams and fantasies,
That will never come true,
My parents won’t let me,
Dreaming is all I can do,

Fearing others,
Is all I ever did,
I’ve been hiding forever,
Since I was a little kid,

But I will always,
Keep on dreaming,
Until I find the courage,
To wake up and live.
-------------------------------
Day and Night

I sit in the grass,
Waiting for the sun,
To wipe away the night,
To let a new day start,

To forget about my worries,
To forget about my pain,
That’s why I wait for the day,
To wipe it all away,

But when the sun,
Appears in the sky,
I realize my pain remains,
And never leaves my life,

So now I spend hours,
Waiting for the night,
To wipe away the day,
And leave my pain behind.

--------------------------
Told you it wasn't much :P

[banzaii.02]

ur, no. thats not much... wink wink, nudge nudge

[Aqua]

Of course it's not much^^ I have more poems, here they come (oh yeah, and don't mind they depressivity in those poems, I have a bad period behind me..)

Evil Child

Forever wasted,
Forever drowned,
Born in the arms of evil,
‘Til the day you’ll be crowned,

A time of power,
A time of war,
You’ll be their leader,
And you’ll be their scar,

Possessed forever,
Always lust for more,
But they’ll fight back,
And close the door,

Forever wasted,
Forever drowned,
But one day you’ll be free,
And no longer bound.

-----------------------------

Choice

Where evil is,
Will be good too,
To guide people through their life,
To tell them what to do,

At every lighted place,
Will be shadow and darkness,
So that no matter where you go,
You’ll always see some mess,

But at every dark place,
Will be light,
To give people hope and faith,
To give them courage to fight,

So everywhere you go,
You’ll take both sides along,
Only it’s your choice,
To choose what’s right and wrong.

--------------------------

Angels

Can you see them around you?
Can you hear them sing?
Can you feel them protecting you?
Can you sense them in anything?

They’ll save you from disasters,
They’ll guide you everywhere you go,
They’ll be your friends forever,
They were always there, didn’t you know?

Whenever you cry,
Whenever you feel alone,
They are always there to cheer you up,
They are in every flower, in every stone,

Don’t search and don’t hide,
The love of the angels will always rise,
So no matter what you did,
There will always be an angel to give you advise.

--------------------------

Flames of the Darkness

The flames of the darkness,
Light the sky,
They absorb all the life,
They make me feel like I die,

The flames of the darkness,
Wrap their arms around me,
I try to fight back,
But I have no chance to flee,

The flames of the darkness,
Show me hate and pain,
I close my eyes, but I still see,
The evil that the flames drain,

The flames of the darkness,
Slowly go out,
Was this a dream or reality,
What was it about?

------------------------------

Dying Inside

I’m dying inside,
Cause I’m lost in my fears,
I can’t help it you see,
I’m always in tears,

I’m dying inside,
I know you’re trying to help me,
But I can’t hold it any longer,
Why can’t you see?

I’m dying inside,
My heart is falling apart,
You know I love you my dear,
And I know that was just a start,

I’m dying inside,
I’m just crying here on the floor,
I hope I’ll find myself one day,
And be able to open a new door.

-------------------------

That's it for today people^^ (Geez, I'm really becoming a poet...who said I wanted to??!!)

[Sister of Metal]

O.O wow...ever wanna know something bout yer friends poems? look it up on the internet -.-'....ah well...its going great there eh Kaia?..I have my first Poem block ^^..-.-'...
@ ice:...yeaaaaah...I added my avvy myself,..I changed it...^^I'll send you the pic sometimes...godknows where I got it from...I dont remember :P

[Soba]

^.^ the piccy was 'ooooooooooooooooooooooooooo'

same goes for Kaia's poems....ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



When the Halfling Snaps

Stupid
Dumb
Idiot
Fudge as a swear word
Ashtray as a swear word
and a whole lot of other names
have been used in the place of mine

Pfft...do you see
Why I am isolated?
Why I barely talk to anyone?

Because i don't want to hear your ranting!
It's useless to yell at me,
It'll just go through one ear and out the other

What about you, huh?!
When you don't do what you're supposed to do!
Why do you always snap at me,
Calling me names that don't fit my description!!!!
I'M IN FRIGGIN' HAPP CLASSES!!!
I'm smart...

Besides,
Why do you snap at me,
When you do worse than i?
.....
That's what i thought...




okay....i showed that to my family members and they freaked out...

[DayleJ]

Here is my newest pom that i hav only just done:

HERE IS MY GOODBYE DEAR HOME

I have always been aware
Of who I am and that I swear
Knowing my roots
As my home never had a suit
And I will never forget my house
Where I lived from when I was a spouse
When it was colder indoors than out
And how I always went without

But here I am a plane at last
How I must leave my past
But my thoughts will always be there
As I live like a millionaire
You have done well for yourself
My mother says this to herself
And as others tell me to beware
Not to forget them and compare
As the size of the wallet in my pocket
Will replace my wrench and socket

But do not despair my beginnings
As I take my extra winnings
You are my home wherever I am
Next to the lake where I always swam
And my love for my humble start
We always be there deep in my heart
And even though I wave a farewell
To the bricks and mortar I know so well
I also know that when I come home
Will be the time I won’t feel alone
So wait for me don’t have such concern
As my goodbye is my promised return

[Sister of Metal]

poems are aliiiiive again!!! WHOHOO!!! ^.^ nice one Dayle!!

heres one of mine again..

'Living my life'

My life is a cry
echoeing through the night
expressing endless pain
struggle, hate and dispite
moving and flaoting
untill the sound will fade
and silence will fall
until a new cry will be made...
-----------------------------------
Tieke (c)
oh what the hell, I have a little stock of new poems now, I'll just post another ^.^

' Rebirth'

A knife through my throat
a rope round my neck
a jump off a cliff
a break in my back

a sword through my heart
revealing my blood
it covers the street
and mixes with mud

Then the rain starts falling
and tickles the earth
and while my body dies
a new child has its birth

you've lost me
and cry: 'it's not fair!'
but baby, it is
and a new 'me'will be there....
---------------------------------------
Tieke (c)
ok, not so happy...but I wasnt so happy that day after all....:p

[Nick Hyral]

Very nice Dayle. I hope you will post more of your works here. You are very creative, and you have a talent for writing. Everyone keep up the good work.

[Sister of Metal]

ok, how aout reviving it a little?

desperados? ( lol..not the rum-mixture-juicy-thing:p)

I hunger for love
I hunger for care
no I don't need help
I just want you to be there!

I want to be scarred
I want to be healed
I want a life worth living for
and my heart to be sealed

but until that very day
could I just keep my dreams?
or do you want to take those away too?
cuz that is how it seems

Go get your own life!
no please, don't leave me now!
It's just that my love is hard to explain
so don't ask me why, or how!!
------------------------------------------
Tieke (c)

[Soba]

wow, i forgot all about poems.
MB: wwwwwwoooooaaahhhh.................


My Best Friend


My best friend,
Not human,
But shiny,
Sharp,
Deadly...

When others aren't there for comfort
That inanimate object comes to life,
Gleaming in the cruel light...

Humans are so unreliable,
Never there when you need them,
Never there to back you up,
But the knife is always there...

The cool blade seperating skin from blood,
The stinging to take away life's problems,
Bloody hell!
It's better than drugs.

When the blade dies,
A new one is always there,
Cold steel ready to be used,
To bring comfort...
Through pain...


~Whitney Dañíer H.~ (Wikelani)

[cHilli]

I must admit out of all the poems here i think Tieke's are the best, they are really great.

[Sister of Metal]

thank you * blush*I have a few more
@ ice: nice one!! really!..* looks at own dagger*..;p



Nightchild:

When the night is dark
and shadows fall
the light is gone
and night is all
bats come out
ans wolves go play
'it's so dangerous'
is what people say

but I love the night
why? who will tell
I'm addicted to the beauty
the colours and the smell
so I run outside
fall on my knees and say my prayer
wishing for the night to stay
and the light to disappear
-------------------------------------------
tieke (c)

[Anubis]

Ah, very nice Tieke! :tup: :tup: :tup: I like it, it really brings out the feel of what you want it to say.

[cHilli]

That she's evil;):D

Nicehttp://www.cheatingdome.com/forums/images/icons/icon14.gif

[Soba]

thnx MB!

@Matrix:
so true...so true...

[Aqua]

Yup, Mizz_B rulez on poetry^^ I try writing poems, but mine are nothing compared to hers, so I would say: "Keep up the good work Tieke!" Then I have another Sensei to learn from^^

Oh, my poem:

Where is this world going?
You can close your eyes,
But you can't deny what you see,
This world was a failure, a mistake,
Not worthy enough to be,

You can cover your ears,
But you can't deny what you hear,
Screams of terrified people,
Who all live in fear,

You can close your mouth,
But you can't keep still,
The words that bring anger,
And the desire to kill,

You can close your heart,
But you can't deny what you feel,
War is not just a word,
For many people it's real...

*sighs* I have a lot to learn I guess

[Sister of Metal]

* sigh* esther, Your poems are just as nice as mine! and so goes for the rest of the world :p

I'm loving
I'm caring
I'm drinking
I'm swearing
I'm seeing
I'm hearing
I'; m comforting
I'm fearing
I'm blinding
I'm shining
I'm laughing
I'm whining
I'm coming
I'm leaving
I'm promising
I'm decieving
I'm burrying
I'm grieving
I'm falling
I'm believing
I'm walking
I'm flying
I'm living
..but dying...
--------------------------
I'm not sure if I posted this one allready.....but ok...

Fantasy
and reality
spinning around
confusing me

In my mind
you will find fear
what is far
and what is near?

how to discover
truth or betray
how to go
and how to stay?

my vision is clear
but too blind to see
what is truth
and fantasy...
-----------------
both without a title!...>.<

[DayleJ]

Superficial Glory

In time you have felt it and showed it
for whatever reason
In time you have seen others concur it
and watch others only dream of it
The world is God’s glory his creation to many
and it has also been the Glory to leaders
Domination a Glory to the kings embedded by sacrifice
and leadership to control, be in power of the world
or as much as a lords two hands will take as a sin of greed.
And arrogance, selfishness, ignorance his born
because power is there need
And so no longer is Glory a factor but control
Where the world is the greedy mans target
So let me bring a new story
To a world that has lost its glory

© Dayle J. Walker

[Sister of Metal]

wow O.O nice one dayle !! O.o

[Anubis]

Wow! Very nice! i like em both a lot Mizz_B!

And Kaia Thats a great poem!

Keep it up both of you!!:tup: :tup: :tup:

[Aqua]

Words of Pain

Spoken words seem to have more value,
Then they had before when the were kept inside,
Pain was not seen before it was too late,
And now not even time has the power to erase,
Visions could not foresee what would come,
Dreams refused to reveal their meaning as well,
Not even I could know what would be on my path,
And what would keep me from going on…

(c) Esther J.G. van der Drift
--------------------------------------
What the hell? It doesn't rhyme! O.O I never wrote such a poem before. Okay, and this one doesn't make sense anyway...I mean, who writes a poem in half a minute? *blinks*....I guess I did.

[Soba]

gd job everyone! i can't keep up ~.~.


Her pretty face,
Fills our dreams.
Her chocolate brown eyes,
Stare back at us in mirrors.
Her beautiful voice,
Blocks out all other sounds.
The flute,
Do you hear it playing?
The flute,
The owner,
Dear flute player.
Why do you leave us here?
On our own?
To grieve over you?
Your soft footsteps,
Are heard as we walk,
Your soothing words,
Can be heard.
Your laughter,
Rings through our ears.
Your tears,
Mix with our own.
Dear Breana,
Why did you leave us?
Why did you go?
Why were you called,
Away from us?
We miss you so…
Dear Breana,
Please come back,
Our hearts torn apart for you.
Dear Breana,
Please don’t leave us here,
On our own…

~Wikelani~

for a friend that left due to poisoning
*sigh* someone PLEASE teach me how to write poems like you all? especially MB and Kaia

[[N]eto]

Originally posted by Kaia
Words of Pain

Spoken words seem to have more value,
That they had before when the were kept inside,
Pain was not seen before it was too late,
And now not even time has the power to erase,
Visions could not foresee what would come,
Dreams refused to reveal their meaning as well,
Not even I could know what would be on my path,
And what would keep me from going on…

(c) Esther J.G. van der Drift
--------------------------------------
What the hell? It doesn't rhyme! O.O I never wrote such a poem before. Okay, and this one doesn't make sense anyway...I mean, who writes a poem in half a minute? *blinks*....I guess I did.

The only error I found in that poem is that in the second line you wrote "then" when it should be "that," otherwise it wouldn't make any sense.

Of course you know not all poems should or will rhyme. That one has meaning, it's deep. I like it.

-

Ice, you don't need any help because your talent is superb. Don't put yourself down and keep up the good work. Your opinion upon your work is biased simply because it is yours. Just be confident, your poems have real meaning, I love them.

[DayleJ]

Scared Of What May

Frightful thoughts run through the mind
Of what may happen because of words already said
Fears of rejection on my judgement day
Play the part to change my lives way

But could this change of attitude
Only be to save my soul from what I fear
And hope that I pass on my lie
To see me through the gates of heaven

Does my anger still burn inside?
Against the one I see as the traitor of our world
And whatever I changed about myself
This feeling will always be there

And so does this mean even though I do no wrong
My acceptance to a better world will be denied
Because I speak against my God with such words
Or will my honestly over come when I am to be judged

© Dayle J. Walker

[Soba]

*speechless*..........*wide eyes*...

-----------------
something my friend, Ryan, and I sang to everyone before school was out, the teachers couldn't stop us since we were doing it for the talent show....the top part is our verses, the second i took from the internet



Deck the halls with gasoline!
Fa-la-la-la-laaa, la-la-la-la
Barf unti your face turns green!
Fa-la-la-la-laaa, la-la-la-la
Jump out the window and break y'alls *cough*@sses*cough*
Fa-la-la-laaaa, fa-la-la-laaa, la-la-la
Aren't you glad you ditched your classes?
Fa-la-la-la-laaaa, la-la-la-laaa

Deck the halls with gasoline
Fa-la-la-la-laaa, la-la-la-la
Light a fire and watch 'em scream
Fa-la-la-la-laaa, la-la-la-la
Watch the school burn down to ashes
Fa-la-la-laaaa, fa-la-la-laaa, la-la-la
Aren't you glad you played with matches?
Fa-la-la-la-laaaa, la-la-la-laaa

--------------------
then again, we were high on sugar since it was a block party in our school (only a few classes got to participate)

[Sister of Metal]

loollllll thats a REALLY good one :P

stalking panther

you think you've fled
far and save from me
but look behind
and guess who you'll see
run, my dear, far and fast as you can
before you'll know
we'll meet again
I'll follow your every move
no worries, you won't see me
only my eyes will follow you
as long as you 'll flee.....
-------------------------------------------
tieke (c)

for a change, this one I wrote during science ^^

[Soba]

n.n shank shoo!

but you still beat me, demmit!

Sometimes...

Sometimes I lie,
Sometimes I cry,
Sometimes I die,

Sometimes I'm damned,
Sometimes I'm slammed,
Sometimes I'm scammed,

Sometimes I need,
Sometimes I greed,
Sometimes I flee,

Sometimes I yearn,
Sometimes I learn,
Sometimes I earn,

Sometimes I lie,
Sometimes I cry,
Sometimes I.....
Die....?

[Aqua]

*is stunned* that one was beautiful...
I'm kinda losing my inspiration these days, I think I wrote a poem about almost everything! O.O

[Soba]

n.n
write poem about countries!! or....animanimals! or...those cute little bugs that make you just want to squeeze the life out of them...come on, Kaia!

[GohanX]

nice poems everyone. oh and happy new year!!!!



PEACE I'm OUT!!!!!!!

[Sister of Metal]

GOHAN!!! A POST!!!!! GOOD JOB!!!:D:D:D

cant you see...
the pain is inside
unbearable pain....
I try to hide
it chokes me slowly
killing me softly
no I'm not cute
neither I'm lovely
this despise for my self
my back against the wall
resisting to jump
no need for me to fall
but the world of me is ending
and the feelings slip away
the road which is beneath me
I dont need no blade
I can just let me go
and so I did, I gave up
and I'm falling down
realizing the moment I stop
I'll be no longer of this world
but me, I don't care
I'll return to my own heaven
thats good, they know me there....
_________________________________
Tieke

[Aqua]

O.O Wow *nearly faints* That was.......good...well, not really a happy poem, but....beautiful. You ARE okay, aren't you?

[Sister of Metal]

I'm fine, happier then happy, I'm great!! I'm......*...*....never mind :p

[[N]eto]

I'm hoping your speaking nothing but the truth, or I'll hurt you.

...

Not really. But, you have no reason to feel as it shows in your poems.

[Sister of Metal]

m'eh, ......sometimes I'm a bit depressed, but thats kinda all so^^

I guess I just like to write poems actually expressing someting...else its so...empty...and all happy and stuv...I just don't like happy poems :P

a 4 word poem!
loveles
careless
fearless
heartless.....

hah, think about that one :P

[DayleJ]

ONE OF EACH

Kings will come and kings will go
Friends will be there and then they will be gone
Life so young and then your old
Changes that happen which we don’t control

Fairness and kindness in each person’s heart
Cruelty and sin darken each person’s soul
Some act well and live well, others don’t
Rewards for few, gifts lack for others

How life can be so very different for each
Rich and poor, health and disease
Love and hate, hope by prayer or not
Twins different too, everyone loved or not
If one thing each person should know

Is that they are who they are
And that should never change

[[N]eto]

Originally posted by Mizz_Bennington
m'eh, ......sometimes I'm a bit depressed, but thats kinda all so^^

I guess I just like to write poems actually expressing someting...else its so...empty...and all happy and stuv...I just don't like happy poems :P

a 4 word poem!
loveles
careless
fearless
heartless.....

hah, think about that one :P

Erm, I didn't need to... you're describing your moments right there and then.

Dayle, good job. A bit off, in my opinion, but once it reaches the end it becomes clear. Maybe think of words to replace phrases?

[DayleJ]

meh, its my style sometimes

[Sister of Metal]

then keep up your style ^^ I luv it^^

[Pixels]

wow u guys are good :tup:

[Pixels]

Originally posted by Kaia
Words of Pain

Spoken words seem to have more value,
Then they had before when the were kept inside,
Pain was not seen before it was too late,
And now not even time has the power to erase,
Visions could not foresee what would come,
Dreams refused to reveal their meaning as well,
Not even I could know what would be on my path,
And what would keep me from going on…

(c) Esther J.G. van der Drift
--------------------------------------
What the hell? It doesn't rhyme! O.O I never wrote such a poem before. Okay, and this one doesn't make sense anyway...I mean, who writes a poem in half a minute? *blinks*....I guess I did.


poems don't have to ryhme but they have to flow almost like the beats of music...

it just sounds more professiona when it ryhmes, but there is no law to make it... i can't remember what it is called


(sorry for double post)

[Aqua]

Originally posted by Silent Reaper
wow u guys are good :tup:

the only bit i can come up with is:


When I look into your eyes...
Theres nothing there to see...
Nothing but my own Mistakes...
Staring back at me....

Ehm...isn't that a Linkin Park songtext? *blinks* I know all those lyrics so...
*continues singing the entire song* Oh yes, now I remember:
Linkin Park - Pushing me away^^

[Sister of Metal]

indeed Kaia.....weak, sr ....;)

[Pixels]

lol you know mizz b, you should call yourself princess of darkness!:P

[Sister of Metal]

princess of darkness? sounds good :p but Mizz B's fine

Well of souls

Killed by the immortal
filled by the invisible
drowned by the untouchable
lost by the unreachable
---------------------------------
Tieke (c)

duno what that (c) is for though,.....but I made it for sure, during * thinkthink*...yes.,....History was it again ^^

[banzaii.02]

Little Dog,
Crossing Street,
Motor Car,
Sausage Meat.

not my poem you understand....but still O.K

[Pixels]

The tears are falling,
The space is shortening,
The words in my head,
Whilst I lie in bed,
Are revolving round,
Driving me to despair,
Falling, Falling,
Falling....
Falling to darkness....
Until I come to my death,
But its ok,
The place that i'm going,
The world that is there,
Is filling me full,
Banishing the despair...
-------------------------------
SR-

Hunger

The hunger inside,
is spreading slowly,
Unaware of pain,
I still notice notice nothing...


Just a quick, thing i made up in music when i got completely bored:P

[banzaii.03]

Alone, yet amidst a crowd,
People say the world doesn't revolve around you,
But it does,
Your mind,
One unique,
One droplet of water,
Seconds before it hits the surface of the pool,
Alone in yourself,
Inside,
Deep down,
No-one else,
Your world is your own,
A lone city,
In a desert,
Alone, in a world filled with others,
Your mind,
Your world,
Your Actions.
You.




Looking back on this, it aint all too great, but i just wanted to convey the idea......

COME ON PEOPLE!!!! KEEP POEMS COMING!!!!
(and feedback on others poems....)

[Pixels]

Originally posted by banzaii.03
Alone, yet amidst a crowd,
People say the world doesn't revolve around you,
But it does,
Your mind,
One unique,
One droplet of water,
Seconds before it hits the surface of the pool,
Alone in yourself,
Inside,
Deep down,
No-one else,
Your world is your own,
A lone city,
In a desert,
Alone, in a world filled with others,
Your mind,
Your world,
Your Actions.
You.



Looking back on this, it aint all too great, but i just wanted to convey the idea......

COME ON PEOPLE!!!! KEEP POEMS COMING!!!!
(and feedback on others poems....)

sweet:tup:

i'm making loads of poems, i'll post them up soon

:crazy:

ok here goes, a new few i made.......

Questions

As I clench the blade,
Handle or trigger,
The words form why,
gradually getting bigger,

Why do we fight?
Why do we kill?
What is the purpose?
What is the will?

As the blade drops,
I fall to my knees,
Wondering these things,
Will you answer me please,

What do I do?
Where do I go?
Who do I ask?
I just don't know....

Should I strike to kill?
Or save the life?
Who dares to question,
Mans busy knife....

-Robin Smith-

---------------------
Lonleyness

Where am I?
What am I doing?
What is the meaning,
Of me being here?

Where do I go?
From this lonley point,
There is no one here for me,
No one to care,

I'm unsure,
Of where to go,
For this busy world,
Has swallowed me whole,

Its the way of life,
To care for yourself,
But others care,
I'm sure they do...?

But when I die,
And go to my own heaven,
The people there,
Will love and care....
I'm sure of that.........

-Robin Smith-

[~*BeAuTiFuL*~]

Wow! everyone has really great poems! Here's one of mine

Loud Silence

Quiet but screaming
Loud yet still silent
Everyone doesn't want to hear what I have to say
Everyone wants to believe it's all okay
Muffled words spoke to deaf ears
Blood red eyes soothed by the tears
Shaking hands with no one to hold
Quivering body that's still trying to be bold
Trying to make you all see
But no one wants to listen to me
A voice which is ignored and a truth that no one will listen to
I tried to help, but now we'll see what becomes of all of you...


Sam Parsons 2003

[Nick Hyral]

No title for this just yet

On that day you left me behind all I could do was cry,
You are now a memory whose name I hear upon the wind,
Was the happiness you brought me real or merely a foolish lie,
Once I felt happiness until that fateful day,
Now I stand as if lost upon a barren mountain with no more than the wind to comfort me,
Though it has been 4 years I ask why you went away,
But all I hear is the winds mocking laughter that chills my eyes and freezes the tears making it hard to see,
All I have left of you are pictures and the moments together that I hold dear,
Losing hope and a glimmer of light in my heart how I long to again hold you near,
In my dreams I'm with you again my eyes swell up with tears,
How I often listen to the winds mocking laughter as I listen for that voice I long to hear,
Each day anew a part of me dies for I could not save you though you were only a few steps away,
The words that I wanted to hear you speak were silent on your lips the words I wish you could say,
On the day they laid you to rest though there were many there was only really me...
My heart and spirit are broken forever I wish I could end this spiral of pain and we be together again for eternity...

So many nights I've dreamt those thoughts and feelings... so many long days go by that I miss her so.. This is the only way I can describe how I feel right now.. and I guess its not much of a poem but I felt I should have contributed after not posting for so long...

[banzaii.03]

@SR ....dude! good an' all but you dont have to go an put your name on them all!!!

keep it up all!!!

[Pixels]

,meh meh meh meh meh... shut up banzaii

[Surreal]

There once was a vampire named mable
Whose periods were really quite stable
So every full moon
Shed get out a spoon
and Eat herself under the table!

[Nick Hyral]

I take the silence as I either scared alot of you or confused you.. I just can't find the words to describe what I feel inside right now.. Its just beyond my grasp -.-

[Aqua]

@Nick: That poem makes me feel really really sad…

Illusions of the Night
When the day has ended,
And the sun decided to sleep,
The moon drops her tears,
The stars start to weep…

When the day has ended,
The night gains control,
Not only your vision gets blurry,
But also your soul…

When the day has ended,
You start to feel pain and sorrow,
The night opens a gate,
And leads you into the hollow…

When the day has ended,
You will see things you don’t know,
Do not fall for the illusions,
Or you might not see tomorrow…

© Esther van der Drift

Just a poem I wrote last night...

[Sister of Metal]

Nice Kaia..and Nick

alone in the dark
noone will see me
noone will hear me
noone will save me

sitting in the moonlight
staring at the stars
staring at the dark
staring at the moon

and still I need to remember
who do I think I am
who do I want to be
who am I....

the stars don't have the answers
and the moon will remain silence
the darkness is just allways there
disguising my peace and violence....
my questions I'm asking
The answers can't be read
why should I keep on reading all my life
when I could die instead?
---------------------------------------------------
Tieke (c)

unbelievable.....how cheery....

[Pixels]

sweet, mizz_b alot of your poems seem to have alot of rehitorical q's in them:rolleyes:

[Sister of Metal]

yes, actually they do, don't they...ah well.....gives me something to think about

Sick 'n tired of waiting
for something to believe
something that will be faithfull
something that won't decieve

Sick 'n tired of standing
alone, every day's the same
for me, these things are serious
but for you , boy, it's just a game...
---------------------------------------------

the problem is, with my poems, the theme stays the same...

[~*BeAuTiFuL*~]

I find that the themes stay the same in my poems as well. I don't think it's a problem with yours though, mizz_b, they are good!

~** How Can I forgive? **~

How can I forgive you now
My heart you took and broke somehow
You did not mean to do me wrong
You did not mean to love me long
I like the feeling of you I guess
I grew to fond, I must confess
Like you, I dind't mean for this
To think it started with a kiss
Love so rude and painfully so
Can hurt someone more than you know
Then just like that you let me fall
No signs that even I foresaw
You're heart I hope is cracked a bit
To fall in love is just not worth it!
Love's sweetness is sure to die
Now in sorrow, crushed am I
And in this state I shall reside
To live awhile with shriviling pride.

S.P.

[Soba]

Originally posted by Unrealdimension
There once was a vampire named mable
Whose periods were really quite stable
So every full moon
Shed get out a spoon
and Eat herself under the table!

lol, eeewwwww!!

:tup: keep it up, plp!!!!!! mind if i put these up on my website? huh? pplleeaassee??

i can't put the URL yet, it needs some serious fixing up

[~*BeAuTiFuL*~]

EYES

A stolen glance
a midst a haze of chaos
No words spoken
But one thousand understood

My heart soars and
Warmth fills my soul
Yet I cannot speak
And I cannot move

Through my eyes
You glance into my soul
I stand exposed...
My interior invaded!

S.P.

[DayleJ]

very nice! so im gonna do one on eyes to!

*minutes later*

Mysterious Eyes

A life of their own
Where they show no emotion
They don’t cry, and they don’t smile
Dark sinks in, and light is lost
Never seem to blink but only stare
These are mysterious eyes

You can see no mercy shown
As they frown upon your look
And caught by others they do nothing
But put terror in your soul
Even though they never say a word
They just seem to prey on you

And never acting upon what they show
But all they do is look and search
But they still scare such timid lives
And really there mystery can be solved
By another to be brave enough to look
And see that they only want to be loved

[~*BeAuTiFuL*~]

Really good Dayle!
This is one I wrote a long while back, it wasn't the best time in my life...but here it is

~**HATRED**~

For me, myself,my experience,
Isn't a book placed upon a shelf.
Inside, way deep down
There are these feelings of pure hatred.
Always making me frozen.
Same as always, never tell others.
Days pass by
My life is a daze.
I wonder why I can't just crawl
away and hide.
I wish I would just die.
Trust me I've tried.
Others don't see the real me.
I've been defied!

[Anubis]

Nice Sam!

FINALLLY!!!!!!!! i have one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


My Burden

My Life
My Death
My Pain
My Sickness
My Poison
My Hatred
My Compassion
My Anger
My Sorrow
My Burden

hmm i thought a while and came up with this, i was thinking of how we own our own lives, no one should do things for you unless you really need it....

[~*BeAuTiFuL*~]

cool anubis!
Here is my favourite poem I have ever written!

HEART AND SOUL

I saw you again today
And my feelings I can't control
The feelings I have for you
Fill up my heart and soul

Every word you speak to me
I treasure deep inside
And I feel my love grow stronger
A love I no longer can hide

Every little touch you give
Makes my heart beat out of control
And no one knows these feelings
Except my heart and soul

S.P

[Pixels]

hmmmm, alot of these aren't really poems, they're more song lyrics i recon, but still good!!:tup: Keep 'em coming y'all

[London_Calling]

I havn't writen a poem in ages but here it goes


The dead man waits,
Waits for his love,
Her breath like a soft silk,
Her hair like a black waterfall,
Running down a elegant neck,
Her voice like the rustle of leaves,
Her scent that of a rose.

But the dead man can not find heart to free himself,
Free himself of the shackles of his lost love,
Of the hope he had now lost,
The escence of dreams......


Rubbish i know i will return with something better.

[banzaii.03]

The child awakes,
Heart beat,
Heart beat,
Suddenly,
Open eyes,
Heart beat,
Heart beat
No sight,
Gasping for air,
Heart beat,
Heart beat,
Hand closed tight,
Breathing rapid,
Heart beat,
Heart beat,
Unseen attacker,
No breath,
Eyes widen,
Heart beat,
Heart beat,

Silence.....



- Will Hughes -


The scream

Walking through the forest,
Barefoot on moss,
Sunlight streams through,
The vivid green jumps wildly,
A palette of colour....
Suddenly,
A snap,
Colours fade away,
Dark is all,
A Scream...
Far away yet close,
Muffled yet painfully clear,
Tearing the air,
Knife through paper,
A Scream.
Louder, nearer...
It wasn't them.
It was you...

-william hughes-


Jeez, ive lost the art to this poem thing....I know what, give me a subject and ill do a poem on it. That might be good. Ive got an idea.Everyone do a poem and then name a subject for the next person to do a poem on. Good idea? Not all sad dark ones either please

[London_Calling]

Here are some......




Love poem



Your eyes are like opals shining in the night,
And as entrancing as the oceans depths.
Your hair like a rippling river of black silk running down a waterfall on a winter’s eve.
Your lips are like a red gem with a flickering fiery centre.
Your skin is like a full silver moon.
Your teeth like shining white pearls.
Your aroma is that of a freshly bloomed rose.
Your voice like that of falling rain drops.
Your smile saves me from madness.
You are as welcoming as a fire in the deep of winter.
Your soul is not all there but I will make it whole.
You are like a single flower in a barren desert.
Please be with me since you are the elixir of life to me.






The Forest.

Tall solid trees,
Low lying lush green shrubs,
Nipping insects moving swiftly.
Slow pregnant pike in the shallows,
Great towering oaks like roman columns.
Rustling leaves under frosted boots.
The whisper of the trees,
As they talk about the intruder.
The hiss of the wind through the trees,
Hush as the dense forest cushions all sound.
Moving animals in the undergrowth,
Like tiny sprites spying.
Old gnarled tree’s faces staring like petrified people.
Shadowy outlines, are they creatures, elves?
Crow cawing in the sky,
A reminder of the outside world.


The christmas spirit


Snowman frozen, watching, waiting.
Children running, throwing snowballs.
Trees waving there bare arms to rid them of the snow.
Present wrapping strewn across the floor, rustling.
Christmas dinners smell wafting round the house.
Santa happy with his work.
This is the Christmas Spirit.

The Christmas spirit comes in the night filling us With cheer.
Every body red cheeked and laughing.
Crackers pulled BANG.
Sherry drank.
Turkey scoffed.
Stuffing gobbled.
Christmas pudding set on fire.
Brandy butter on all the puddings.
After eight mints politely nibbled.
The Christmas film is turned on.
Everyone laughs at corny Christmas cracker jokes.
Grandad snoring loudly in a armchair.
This is the Christmas spirit.


The wind horse


As the wind races over the land so does the wind horse like a silver bullet,
As the wind races over the mountain top so does the wind horse as a blur,
No matter where the wind goes the wind horse chases,
Like an infinite game of cat a mouse.

As the wind horse races over the land so does the wind like a silver bullet,
As the wind horse races over the mountain top so does the wind as a blur,
No matter where the wind horse goes the wind chases,
Like an infinite game of cat a mouse.

For the wind horse is a guise a dream as it is but a wisp of smoke on the wind.


A Cottage Garden.

I stand in the garden my eyes closed,
And as I smell the scent of roses.
The song of the thrush in the tree.
And as I think of this wonderful place,
I think of my childhood
The happy days spent in the country
Picnicking and Climbing trees
What a place this is to be.









All the colours under the sun.

There are so many beautiful colours
Why do we fight?
And spoil the once peaceful land.
Is it because we are weak minded and power hungry?
Or maybe we are blind to this art of many colours.
You are a human being so why do you fight,
Because you are all the same inside,
In spirit and body.
So get along- please don’t fight,
Or you could all die.






Lonely Lane.

The road lies empty now,
In autumn.
No more children playing.
It lies protected by a wiry hedge,
A barrier against the elements.
It lies portrayed in a frame of orange leaves.
Arms reach out and shadows rise behind you.
Its silent except the soft rustle of boots on leaves,
Except nobody uses the road
how can this be?








Lonely Sheperd.

Lonely Sheperd in the field,
Lonely Sheperd on the hill,
Lonely Sheperd in a ditch,
Lonely Sheperd needs a friend,
Lonely Sheperd.

Lonely collie in the field,
Lonely collie on the hill,
Lonely collie in a ditch,
Lonely collie needs a friend,
Lonely collie.

Sheperd and dog in the field,
Sheperd and dog on the hill,
Sheperd and dog in a ditch,
Sheperds found a friend,
Collies found a friend,
Sherd and collie in front of the fire.

You like not all doom and gloom and my idea for the next person a oxymoronic poem...or...gingerbreadmen.

[banzaii.03]

Auron, what would you know about love you bespeckled nerd....
geez. Blo0dy trainspotters....( no ofense trainspotters....i was insulting you by calling him one of you....)


Nah, just kidding Rob, Your poems are alright s'ppose.......

Ok. Oxymoronic....If that is where everything contradicts......

The sky hangs, clear as emeralds,
Covered with cloud....
The woman walks silent,
Whistling aloud...
She walks among the trees,
In the clearing.....
She wanders aimlessly,
And starts to walk with a purpose....
She trips and falls, but gets back up again,
Lying on the floor, limp. Lifeless.


Next topic........Death ( i know its a dark one but wtf )

[Sister of Metal]

why did you leave
wanted me so bad
you could allmost taste it..
it got to your head...
I know you were faithfull
I know you would've bleeded
to follow me in death, is a sacrifice
I didn' t know you would've proceeded...
together in heaven
the promise was made
if you think earth was that bad?
I'd rather 've stayed...
--------------------------------------
ok, made that up in 5 minz, had to post something as a sign of life...
next subject: animal

[London_Calling]

If you took banzais comment the wrong way i am not a train spotter!!!

Ok a animal...

Tiger in the grass,
Stalking,watching,waiting,
Tiger in the grass,
Tracking,eagle eyed, excpecting,
Tiger in the grass,
Stalking watching waiting.....


Not to good next topic emotions.

[Aqua]

Okay, this is not really much about emotions, but okay:

- no title-
My existance is fading,
My emotions erased,
My heart wears a blindfold,
My will is caged,

My mind is confused,
My eyes are blind,
My sight is getting worse,
My soul is leaving my body behind,

I am lost,
This time it's really too late,
I was not meant for this world,
It just wasn't my fate
--------------------------
Esther van der Drift

....very very old poem, when I was still depressive. Next topic: sword

[banzaii.03]

Sword

I stare at the blade.
A single beam of light,
The air shimmers,
As it slices it,
Knife through butter,
Blade through water,
Plunging downwards,
Vivid light dances brilliantly,
Twirling round,
Expert movements,
As light as a feather,
As deadly as a bulllet,
Graceful as it flys,
It has a life of its own,
Vengeance and power,
Channeling down the blade,
PLunging downwards,
deadly,
silence.


hmmm, a bit of a weak ending, but oh well.
Next topic: Alone in the Darkness.....


see what you make of that....

[Aqua]

Alone in the darkness

I stand alone,
With nothing around me but darkness,
I feel lonely,
Yet I’m surrounded,
I listen,
But there is no sound,
I look,
But my eyes are blind,
I feel,
Nothing but the darkness
I cry,
But no-one sees my tears…

Next topic: friendship

[London_Calling]

A friends like a pillar,
Someone to lean on.

Next topic Love.

[Itaol]

I totaly love poems, especially about love and nature! Can somebody write one for me? I can't write poems! I'm worse! I'm like an angel stuck in ****! (sorry, that didn't made no sense) I'm not good at Englisch! You see?

[Itaol]

I meen: That didn't made any sense

[~*BeAuTiFuL*~]

Here is a poem that Joe wrote for me

Wishing Well

So there you were standing
I tried not to stare
Looking so beautiful
With your flaming red hair

I just had to have you
Held tight in my arms
Free from all burden
And away from all harm

As the night got colder
I pulled you off to the side
There is no more stopping this
I've got nothing to hide

And I said to myself
As I pulled you in tight
If I could have one wish granted
On this cool starry night

My wish was just this
So simple, so true
If I could have anyone
May this wish make it you

[Itaol]

Nice poem!!

next topic: magic

[banzaii.03]

Hey, im glad this poem thing works....

Magic

I stare around me at the swirling lights,
Colours living, Wonderous sights,
As i am engulfed in the perfumed air,
I am transfixed to stand, to stare.
What wonderous patterns hung in time,
The magic echoes, the sound does chime,
The mist is drifting, a ball of fire,
Rises up into a gleaming spear,
The magic turns on me, my soul to take -

I jolt right up. Im now awake.




i HATE dooing rhyming poems. Oh well. Now, next topic: The elements.

[Anubis]

Inside

Live to die
Hate to cry
Can’t hold back
Anger swells,
Live to die
I start to cry
Couldn’t wait
Feel the hate
Pain Inside
Wont subside
I can not hide
What I feel inside


I feel its missing something though....

[[N]eto]

Elemental Hope

A burning passion,
The flaming desire,
To hold you forever,
And love you for eternity.

A watery sight,
I am sheding tears,
Of hope and sorrow,
Praying to see you once more.

A windy breath,
I feel your presence,
I must not let go,
You are so close.

An earthly might,
Pulls you apart,
But I will hold you forever,
And never let go.

© Gabriel E. Ibarra

Just made this up as I posted. I think it's an original way of describing the four elements, so if you wouldn't mind giving me some feed back on phrases/words that could be replaced, let me know. :)

Note: Seems Anubis posted before me. That's a great poem, Anubis.

Next topic, the light in the shadows.

[Sister of Metal]

Ô.o heeeel nice O.o

light in the shadows

Am I alone in here
the darkness of death
only you are here
to remember the life I've led

we, together
swallowed by night
until our souls will surrender..
the last crusade of the light...
----------------------------------------

not bad for 5 minz of thinking...-.-

next topic: ...erm....losing

[banzaii.03]

Alone.


I sink to my knees,
Head bent down,
Staring at my knees,
My hope is gone,
My heart is chrushed,
Anger welling up,
Inflating inside me,
"why did this happen?"
"Why me?"
Sobbing, silently,
No-one to hear me,
No-one to care,
Alone,
Losing on an upwards struggle,
Defeat crushes me.
Losing.




Thats ma poem. Nice topic Mizz.
@Neto, nice enterpretation.
Next topic: The city.

[Aqua]

The city

A bright headlight,
Shines in my eye,
I run to the other side,
Glad I didn’t die,
The driver yells,
Screams I should look out,
If he wouldn’t have stopped,
I’d be dead without a doubt,
I continue my way,
Turn around at the end,
Glad an angel saved me,
That guy was haven sent.

Esther J.G. van der Drift
---------------------
Man I really start to hate doing rhyming poems. Ah well, next topic: Child (or children)

[London_Calling]

When you are old and grey and full of sleep,
And nodding by the fir,take down a book,
And slowly read and dream of the soft look
Your eyes had once, and of their shadows deep.


Not about children but about age sort of to do with children couldn't think of one to do with children sorry :cry:


Next topic looking into heaven.

[banzaii.03]

nodding by the fir? riiiiight.

soz, i cant post a poem by now, ( but theyre all crud anyway...)
see ya later

[[N]eto]

Facing Reality

I can feel the unbearable pain,
Everyday I try to gain,
A new life,
A new purpose.

What has become of me?
Have I forgotten who I am?
I walk down a cold-isolated path,
Watching everyone just pass through me.

I cannot comprehend the ferociousness of this world,
To hate or to love?
One cannot decide what he does not understand,
To be able to decipher our very own destination,
Is there a path one must take,
Or is it a simple thought in one's mind?

Unable to choose from right or wrong,
I would hate to make a mistake.
Therefore I walk down an aile,
Frozen in time and space,
Isolated - from our world.

© Gabriel E. Ibarra

[Sister of Metal]

hubbahubbahubaa...expression high and emotion deeep O.o perfect Neto!

first part is a bit stolen...:rolledeye

I cried out 'Heaven save me'!
but I'm down to one last breath..
and the cry that should've saved me
became the cause of my own death..
----------------------------------------------------
Tieke (c)

who says I'm not there
who says I'm not with you
who says I'm not caring
who says I'm not loving
who says I'm not feeling
who says I'm not dying...
nobody does
thats the point....
----------------------------
Tieke (c)

[Cid Highwind]

End Of Everything? (Spheres Of Madness)
(It's no songtext or anything, I created this on my own with inspiration from a special book and some Death Metal Bands)

See this as a thought of a person, a way of life, an explenation)

In the crown of your own self you preach darkness
Yet would you be able to obey the lack of light?
Darkness....Light.....Word......Existance.......
Could it all be false?
Salvation is nothing.......nothing is salvation?!

Nature calls for a destroyer...she desires..
Holy Zero must come to end everything
Collapsing reality craves for the end
Everything rots in itself....

Maybe it's time to stop worshipping your own image
So in the end non-existence is the only sense?
I rise in spheres of madness
In darkness of something unknown I perish
To see.....to remain in all time
Eternity in seconds......NO! ( I won't give up existence)


I won't believe......existence is needed
A thought........just a thought....

[Itaol]

There's only life in heaven, up in the sky.
You can only come there if you'll die.
I'm in heaven, that's no lie!
I'm dead, that's for sure,
But baby, my love for you is 100% pure!

I love people,
I love art,
I love you, so please don't break my heart!

next: destination

[~*BeAuTiFuL*~]

good poems ppl! I will have to get some more up here soon!

[DayleJ]

Mysterious Eyes

A life of their own
Where they show no emotion
They don’t cry, and they don’t smile
Dark sinks in, and light is lost
Never seem to blink but only stare
These are mysterious eyes

You can see no mercy shown
As they frown upon your look
And caught by others they do nothing
But put terror in your soul
Even though they never say a word
They just seem to prey on you

And never acting upon what they show
But all they do is look and stare
And really there mystery can be solved
Such eyes can be understood
By another to be brave enough to look
And see that they only want to be loved

Dayle J. Walker ©

[Pixels]

pretty sweet dayle, good job!:tup:

[banzaii.03]

hmm, poems seems to have lapsed into silence. LETS KEEP POSTING!!! lol. im not...cos....well- ive got something to do. ( hehehe. im a hypocrite.)

[Cid Highwind]

You can't post peoms just cauz this died out lol
You have to write what you feel
and right now I feel nothing so....

[Soba]

^.^ write a poem of how you feel nothing..just think about it
:P poem for everything, dude
but, no rushes here...

okay, i have many comments.....but the first one i have to give out is O.O
the second: WOAH.......:tup: lotta goodies
does anyone send out their poems to those competition site thingies? try and get them copywrighted!!!

I'm staring out
I'm trapped within
Please let me out
Such a grim end...

I'm suffocating,
Taking shallow breaths,
Oh grace, someone help me!
I can see Death!

My mind, stabbed with sharp blades,
My soul is a glinting bomb,
Will no one miss me,
When I am suddenly gone?

I open my eyes,
With a sigh of relief,
Death whispers, 'I'll get you next time...'
'Next time in your sleep.'

___

Whitney D. H. Iced Tomato j0keR

[Sister of Metal]

nice all!!! I'm back into poems again...

An Angel kissed my tears away
whenever I was sad
I wasn't feeling quite myself
my life had been so bad

I felt a warmth brush by me
that quickly dried my tears
A gentle, kind, and loving touch
that seemed to hold me near.

Immediately, I felt so much better
and my life seemed brighter too
I guess that's just the way you feel
when an Angel comforts you
-----------------------------------------------

yes, finally I m getting optimistic :p

[London_Calling]

Lonley man on a hill,
Watching waitng standing still,
Sentinel across the town,
Loly man on a hill.

by Robert John Thurston.

next topic the dark behind your eyes.

[DayleJ]

Originally posted by DayleJ
Mysterious Eyes

A life of their own
Where they show no emotion
They don’t cry, and they don’t smile
Dark sinks in, and light is lost
Never seem to blink but only stare
These are mysterious eyes

You can see no mercy shown
As they frown upon your look
And caught by others they do nothing
But put terror in your soul
Even though they never say a word
They just seem to prey on you

And never acting upon what they show
But all they do is look and stare
And really there mystery can be solved
Such eyes can be understood
By another to be brave enough to look
And see that they only want to be loved

Dayle J. Walker ©

There you go Auron.

[Cid Highwind]

Copyrights by Darcy ;)

[Pixels]

lol i love aurons name! no offence auron or ote, i didn't make this up it was banzaii! you know what i'm on about robert JOHnny

hehehe

i lost the poems....
:flamer: i made loads, then i acidently dropped them whilst walking past a paper shredder! i know i am really unlucky....:mad:

[Itaol]

a shame.... :stickpoke

[Itaol]

here's one but of course with lots of wrong things in it...
not good at English sorry!!

Forever friendship

Friendship is where life’s all about
You trust, you fight, and laughing out loud
Sometimes the fights are to hard
and the friends fall apart
Eva and Eva are friends but sometimes they have a fight
They never want to see each other again, but that's not right
Next day they're friends and close
And talk about Anne's blew in her nose
Being friends is something special to hold
Lets stay friends and do'nt act bold.

Made by Eva Verleijsdonk.

[Itaol]

just made that one 15 minutes ago...

[Aqua]

Eva, please don't triple post, just edit your existing ones. The poem wasn't too bad I guess. There were some mistakes in it yes, but the message is clear. Friendship is important in our lives. Oh yes, I made one too yesterday:

Bring Back

How come you never listen,
to what I've got to say,
am I making things that hard for you,
what reason do you have to walk away?

How come you never see,
all what causes confusion,
am I making things that hard for you,
why can't you see the truth behind the illusion?

How come you never speak,
the words I needed to hear,
am I making things that hard for you,
why don't you tell me your reasons to fear?

How come you never feel,
that I just can't break through your defenses,
am I making things that hard for you,
why can't I bring you back to senses?

------------------------------------
(c) E.J.G. van der Drift

[Spark]

Nice everyone! I can't rhyme unless i'm particularly inspired... I'm more of a descriptive poet... Lemme find some of the stuff I did do that ryhmed.. .it's all for my novels, by the way... Ahh, there we go! The prophecy for "The Shadows" ... a sort of bookish thing i'm working on...

The Shadows
by Saria Lunai (a.k.a. Spark, or Stephanie)

Sealed away for the time being
Shadows rest in the darkness
Sleeping soundly yet eyes still seing
Where light will become less and less
Waiting and watching for the day
When one will come and unseal the crest
And they will awaken by a sunlit ray
Souls they will take until again they rest

And so was prophesied by The Mystic M’ahli, Lady Salsanea Merin

[Aqua]

A short one, to keep this forum alive :P

Storm in a hurry

Swirling leafs
Mocking laughter
Child alone
Danger ahead
No-one there
Run away
Find shelter
Hide quickly
Storm is coming
------------------------
(c) E.J.G. van der Drift

Well..I had to write SOMETHING!!!

[Nick Hyral]

Left alone cold inside,
Anger and pain I tried to hide,
Living an existance of misery,
Trying hard inside to find me,
Feeling numb day and night,
I finally got tired and gave up the fight,
Yet that ice inside did melt away,
When I met you on that fated day,
No one wade me happier in my life,
when you left me the pain felt as if I was stabbed by a knife,
I will never love any like I had you,
Inside I'm growing cold over a love I thought was true,
And I will return to misery and pain,
I'll never love anyone other than you again....

I'll find a title for this one eventually..

[Surreal]

Heres one for you nick.

Roses are red
Violets are blue
All of my base
Are belong to you.

hahaha

[Itaol]

Like I said last time... Lots of mistakes in every poem I make...

Forever friendship

Friendship is where life’s all about
You trust, you fight, and laughing out loud
Sometimes the fights are to hard
and the friends fall apart
Eva and Eva are friends but sometimes they have a fight
They never want to see each other again, but that's not right
Next day they're friends and close
And talk about Anne V's blew in her nose
Being friends is something special to hold
Lets stay friends and do'nt act bold.

Made by Eva Verleijsdonk.

Sorry for the mistakes...

[Saphire Ice]

my poem i got from a friend
with the key to my heart
you pushed to hard and made me fart:ganja:
lololololol

[London_Calling]

So childish^ :P

[Oddball]

Sonnet

Music is like fuel,
It gives me the energy to go on,
When I listen to music,
It talks to me, motivates me,
The most important lesson music has taught me,
Is to be my self,

Not to conform to everyone else’s trends,
Just be your self, don’t care what other people think,
Music is like a tool,
It can be used to do good to a person,
Or lead someone to destruction,
Although Music can’t listen to you,
It is like a reliable friend,
It is always there.


Dont Steal my work or i'll kill u all. :flamer:

[darso]

U kill me :lmao:

[Aqua]

Birds in love
Once I heard a story,
About two birds in love,
But they had a doubt,
Whether love was strong enough,

So they went to a priest,
Asked him about true love,
But the only thing he said was:
"You'll find the answer in the sky above",

The birds looked up,
And asked: "What's there?",
The priest smiled and answered:
"There you'll find God's lair",

"Is God a bird too?",
One asked confused,
"Does he never fall down,
And get hurt or bruised?"

"No my friend,
God doesn't need wings to fly,
All he needs is a little faith,
From birds like you and I,

So the birds flew home,
And filled their days with laughter,
They trusted God to guide them,
And they lived happily ever after.

(c) E.J.G. van der Drift

[[N]eto]

Sounds very familiar. Good job, Esther. Very nice.

-

That Special Day

I look up to the sky,
The sun shining through the clouds,
A sense of twilight fills the atmosphere,
Where am I?

I continue down the side-walk,
Standing, walking, running, falling,
I look around,
Only to find myself alone.

As I rush through what seems a neverending path,
I fall to the ground,
Lost, lonely, and forgotten,
Have I given up?

About to end it all,
I hear a warming voice,
I look up and see a helping hand,
I take it and hold it forever.

As I stare at your eyes,
I shed a million tears of joy,
For you fill my heart with happiness,
And my soul with a purpose,
To love you,
And only you,
Forever.

© Gabriel E. Ibarra

[Sister of Metal]

its alive?...ok..

I feel like screaming
But there is no sound

I feel like screaming
but it won't come out

I feel like screaming
louder then loud

I feel like screaming
please let me shout.....

( alright..its crap..but I don't care..)

[[N]eto]

It's actually very nice, I like it. Although, it's than not then. You are comparing, not telling two times apart. :)

[Kiwi Dude]

Bring love to me and bring it true.
Bring love to me and make it not blue.

Love of passion,
Is love like a flame.
It burns true in my heart,
And I hope for you the same.

Bring love to me and bring it true.
Bring love to me and make it not blue.

Love of sorrow,
is love like the rain.
It fills my eyes with tears
of joy but yet of pain.

Bring love to me and bring it true.
Bring love to me and make it not blue.

Love for you is all I need.
Love for you is all I heed.
Loving you is breaking me in two.
For I cannot truly have you.

Bring love to me and bring it true.
Bring love to me and make it not blue.

By Josh Kanara.
(One of my favs :))


I am yours,
till my dieing day.
I love you with my entire heart,
for each and ever damn day.
The way you make me feel today,
fills my heart with sorrow but of joy.
As complicated as I may sound,
my one true love,
I love you, I love you, I love you.

In my heart you shall forever stay,
as number 1 for each and every day,
till my final living second.
I can't stop caring or loving you,
for I've fallen just for each and every part of you.

You make me feel so good inside,
just knowing how much you care,
gives me hope and not fear.
Your in my heart and your their to stay,
No matter what you or anyone may say!

For my love I write this down,
so that you may understand,
how I may really sound.
From my heart and in my mind I am yours
forever and ever.

Love Josh.
(My first ever real poem...)

[InnerRelic]

nice poems, but i can't write any, im not so good at making poems, but its fun reading

[Aqua]

Originally posted by Joshie
Bring love to me and bring it true.
Bring love to me and make it not blue.

Love of passion,
Is love like a flame.
It burns true in my heart,
And I hope for you the same.

Bring love to me and bring it true.
Bring love to me and make it not blue.

Love of sorrow,
is love like the rain.
It fills my eyes with tears
of joy but yet of pain.

Bring love to me and bring it true.
Bring love to me and make it not blue.

Love for you is all I need.
Love for you is all I heed.
Loving you is breaking me in two.
For I cannot truly have you.

Bring love to me and bring it true.
Bring love to me and make it not blue.

By Josh Kanara.
(One of my favs :))


I am yours,
till my dieing day.
I love you with my entire heart,
for each and ever damn day.
The way you make me feel today,
fills my heart with sorrow but of joy.
As complicated as I may sound,
my one true love,
I love you, I love you, I love you.

In my heart you shall forever stay,
as number 1 for each and every day,
till my final living second.
I can't stop caring or loving you,
for I've fallen just for each and every part of you.

You make me feel so good inside,
just knowing how much you care,
gives me hope and not fear.
Your in my heart and your their to stay,
No matter what you or anyone may say!

For my love I write this down,
so that you may understand,
how I may really sound.
From my heart and in my mind I am yours
forever and ever.

Love Josh.
(My first ever real poem...)

Great poems Josh ;)

[Aqua]

Eternal Child

I dedicate this poem to all the children in the world without a daddy

He watched her from above,
Saw how she danced under a mighty tree,
Her cheeks colored like cherries,
And how she laughed at a buzzing bee,

He wished so badly,
That she could see him for a while,
Then he would tell her that he loved her,
And play hopscotch together from tile to tile,

He threw down some leafs,
In the hope she would see them fall,
She looked up for just a moment,
As if she could almost hear him call,

"Daddy is with you",
The wind whispered in her ear,
Even though she could not see him,
She felt her father was near.

©2004 - Esther J.G. van der Drift

[steno]

For anyone who wants to feel happy:tup:

you are not an angel
neither are you sweet
cause your the perfect goddess
the best on earth indeed

well, actually, its not anything to be happy about cause it sucks hard time, but I wrote it in 2 minutes cause I wanted too have a poem here too. Quess Im just jealous:rolleyes:

[Aqua]

Originally posted by steno
For anyone who wants to feel happy:tup:

you are not an angel
neither are you sweet
cause your the perfect goddess
the best on earth indeed

well, actually, its not anything to be happy about cause it sucks hard time, but I wrote it in 2 minutes cause I wanted too have a poem here too. Quess Im just jealous:rolleyes:
lol, indeed :P It's short, but I really like it^^ What do you think of my poem?

[Laguna Loire]

I'm not sure whether this counts as a poem or not but I think it's cool so...
The Year? 2097. Written by Anonymous

No room for manoeuvre. The world is shrinking...like a raisin from a grape.

From East to West...from North to South...meeting your shadow and the echo of your mind before you even knew you'd left.

Landscapes curling through space, hewn from rock, cut from ice. Ships blur like the smears of hurled paint. Tracking the globe, soundtracking your dreams and your visions.

Never dwell on past days. Leave those damp brown days alone.

Our future has more colour. More speed. More noise. Our future has more...

From jungle to city to the recesses of your mind. Shake your head and free yourself.

Free yourself.

[steno]

A little poem I wrote during class German
The portal

Every day I pray for you,
Because I love you even more,
More than ever in my life,
Because I stepped into this door.

It's called the portal of love,
This gate will never close,
I love you more than anything,
That's why I bought for you this rose.

This gate might be surrounded,
By evil that's called hate,
But on the other side of it,
There's an army made of fate.

@Kaia: that poem is really nice, but I'm not so excited about it cause its not really "like me", I can't put me in the poem. If you know what I mean:rolleyes: Hard explaining things in english if you dont know the words you wanna use.

[Sister of Metal]

see
fear
run
why can't you understand
flapping like a little fish
helpless in my hand

see
fear
run
your source of living far away
flapping like a little fish
you have no choice but to stay

see
fear
run
you understand now how I feel
living like caged little fish
hoping this world ain't real

see fear run
always stay in motion
but just like that little fish
we ain't got more then the ocean...
-----------------------------------------------

oh god, its getting worse and WoRsE...this is BAD >.<

[Aqua]

Originally posted by Sister of Metal
see
fear
run
why can't you understand
flapping like a little fish
helpless in my hand

see
fear
run
your source of living far away
flapping like a little fish
you have no choice but to stay

see
fear
run
you understand now how I feel
living like caged little fish
hoping this world ain't real

see fear run
always stay in motion
but just like that little fish
we ain't got more then the ocean...
-----------------------------------------------

oh god, its getting worse and WoRsE...this is BAD >.<

O.O NICE!!!

only comment: then should be than :tup:

[Sister of Metal]

damn..aGaIn >.<

[Cid Highwind]

Don worry sis, nothing wrong with making a slip ;)

[steno]

well, that's not a bad thing, the poem is still nice

[[N]eto]

Engulfed in Darkness

I have been torn into pieces,
Broken apart,
Frozen in time,
Isolated in space,
I am growing bitter,
And developing fear,
I can now realize,
My world is seizing to be.

Unable to understand what I see,
I shut the windows to my soul,
Hoping to forget what cannot be forgotten,
I begin to panic,
I am lost in my mind.

The moon begins to rise,
Blocking the beacon of light,
Casting a shadow over my heart,
Slowly beginning to torment my being,
Agitating every critical fault-line,
The pain is excruciating.

At last I fall,
Engulfed in darkness,
Trapped in a cage,
Screaming in agony,
Wishing to find what I once had,
Regretting the wrong turns I had taken.

Shedding tears,
Uncovering memories,
Unveiling emotions,
My soul begins to emit a glow,
Shattering the darkness,
Liberating my being.

© Gabriel E. Ibarra

-

Away From You

Away from you,
I cannot be,
Away from you,
I cannot see,
Away from you,
I am lost and forgotten,
Please come back to me.

My love for you,
Has not seized.
Every time I think of you,
My heart sheds a tear of sorrow,
Ever so tormented,
Than ever before.

I am so sorry,
For making you cry,
I am so sorry,
For being so far away,
I am so sorry,
To have fallen in love,
With a human being,
So special and true,
With a human being,
So honest and pure.

I hope to be with you someday,
Just for a single second,
So that I may give you a kiss,
And close my eyes,
As I give myself to you,
Completely, honest, and true.

My love for you still burns inside me,
My heart will not be crushed again,
My soul will not lose faith,
I will never surrender,
And I hope you do the same.

© Gabriel E. Ibarra

-

My latest ones during the time I was away, I have two more, but I'll post those next time. Comments are appreciated.

[Aqua]

Originally posted by [N]eto
Engulfed in Darkness

I have been torn into pieces,
Broken apart,
Frozen in time,
Isolated in space,
I am growing bitter,
And developing fear,
I can now realize,
My world is seizing to be.

Unable to understand what I see,
I shut the windows to my soul,
Hoping to forget what cannot be forgotten,
I begin to panic,
I am lost in my mind.

The moon begins to rise,
Blocking the beacon of light,
Casting a shadow over my heart,
Slowly beginning to torment my being,
Agitating every critical fault-line,
The pain is excruciating.

At last I fall,
Engulfed in darkness,
Trapped in a cage,
Screaming in agony,
Wishing to find what I once had,
Regretting the wrong turns I had taken.

Shedding tears,
Uncovering memories,
Unveiling emotions,
My soul begins to emit a glow,
Shattering the darkness,
Liberating my being.

© Gabriel E. Ibarra

-

Away From You

Away from you,
I cannot be,
Away from you,
I cannot see,
Away from you,
I am lost and forgotten,
Please come back to me.

My love for you,
Has not seized.
Every time I think of you,
My heart sheds a tear of sorrow,
Ever so tormented,
Than ever before.

I am so sorry,
For making you cry,
I am so sorry,
For being so far away,
I am so sorry,
To have fallen in love,
With a human being,
So special and true,
With a human being,
So honest and pure.

I hope to be with you someday,
Just for a single second,
So that I may give you a kiss,
And close my eyes,
As I give myself to you,
Completely, honest, and true.

My love for you still burns inside me,
My heart will not be crushed again,
My soul will not lose faith,
I will never surrender,
And I hope you do the same.

© Gabriel E. Ibarra

-

My latest ones during the time I was away, I have two more, but I'll post those next time. Comments are appreciated.
I can't give any negative comments about those poems. They're both great, and really touch your soul if you are open to it.

[steno]

hmm the away form you poem, thats how I feel right now, I miss you kaia

[[N]eto]

Wasted Away

Disgusted by my actions,
Petrified by my emotions,
Drowning in a pool of agony,
Taking my last few breaths,
Asking to be forgotten,
As I wash away the misery.

Diving deeper into the abyss,
I realize what I am doing,
Ending a life that has no value,
No hopes, no dreams, no future,
Is this the way it should be?

I close my eyes,
Only to find myself in a mist,
A mist of darkness,
That obscures my surroundings,
And shuts the doors,
Only to swallow my being.

Why did you leave me?
Why am I lost?
Could you not understand,
That without you I am nothing,
But another empty soul,
Without a purpose,
Without any hope.

I allow the shadows to enter my heart,
Consuming my soul,
Draining what I once treasured,
My life, my entity,
Are wasting away.

How could I have been so stupid?
To pass on the greatest of life’s gifts,
To be able to love,
To be able to live,
With someone so special,
For the rest of my existence.

I begin to regret,
As I swallow my pride,
But there is nothing I can do,
For I have been wasted away,
Drained from all emotions,
Consumed by darkness,
Touched by death,
And I have only myself to blame.

© Gabriel E. Ibarra

*sigh*...

[[N]eto]

And to revive this thread once again...

Life Changing Mistake

I’m here now to say good-bye,
For you nor I shall ever come by,
To tell each other how we feel,
And how it truly was once real.

You blame me for lying,
I can’t help but start crying,
Remembering the time of my mistake,
Realizing how twisted became our fate.

Oh, how I regret the moment,
That I allowed myself to fall,
The day I began the torment,
And cease to stand tall.

How could I ever,
I must sound like a hypocrite,
I told you I’d love you forever,
Now we fail to believe it.

I’ve caused you so much pain,
I can’t help but feel ashamed,
We seem to have nothing more to gain,
And I’m the only one to blame.

I’m here to tell you I never lied,
Believe me or not I meant it real,
I regret so much I’d rather die,
Because I hate the way this makes me feel.

Everything I’ve told you,
Has come deeply from my heart,
I just want you to know I loved you,
No matter what set us apart.

I’m here to scream my lungs out,
And cry out all the pain,
In hope you cease to doubt,
What I’m trying to say under falling rain.

No matter where we stand,
You need to understand,
That the only reason we hate each other,
Is because we still love one another.

But I’m here not to say good-bye,
Since I decided to come by,
And tell you how I feel,
To prove my love for you is real.

© Gabriel E. Ibarra

[Giiga]

Very Nice [N]eto! :D your work is great! How do you come up with these pomes? I read the whole thing please post some more when you have the chance! ;)

sorry i didnt see all the pages you had :(

[Pixels]

O.O this is a very old thread guys, your sure we can bring this back? meh, very nice Neto

[[N]eto]

O.O this is a very old thread guys, your sure we can bring this back? meh, very nice Neto

I'm sure, I've done it before. Thanks.

[Pixels]

tcht last time i brought back an old thread i got yelled at by matrix humph.... lol.... :P

[[N]eto]

tcht last time i brought back an old thread i got yelled at by matrix humph.... lol.... :P

This is a thread worth bringing back as it holds other's work. Don't compare two different incidents. After all, I'm sure some people would appreciate the return of this one.

[Pixels]

i was ehh just joking.......... i for one was pleased this thread is back.... Its a shame those who posted in it have mostly left, or not been on for ages.... thanks though dude...

[[N]eto]

Sorry, I was in a mood. ^_^;;

[Pixels]

lol, s'ok, anyway back to the topic of the thread eh?

[Stryker82]

I've got a poem... I wrote it at 4 AM the other night, and it's the first poem i've ever written...

http://www.deviantart.com/view/10088250/

[Anubis]

Very Nice Jeff, very sincere, good job :)

hmm, i wrote a poem, its been a while, a very lonnng time since my last poem..so here it goes...

Darkness Within

Terror Grip Me, Sweet and Pure
Death Consume Me

I Take the Lure
The Trap for all
Chaos on end
I scream To a Wall

Time Shall Bend
Death Consumes all
Knowing not
Of who Shall Fall

Hatred, Anger
Death in sight
A Terrible fright
A Hatred So Deep
It grips the heart

Having no Mercy
It Takes Flight
Death Consume Me
I beg for the end
Death Consume Me
The Light Gets In.

[banzaii.03]

My Mind and other problems



On my own and surronded....
Living with this music in my mind....
Dont need to be perfect....
Im happy living alone behind..

Apologies and forgiveness....
Sorry...Its fine...dont cry
Mindless robots....
Automatic speech- blind in the eye...

Behind me they speak...
Im not looking- i can hear you...
Knive stabs in my back...
Lies that soon become true...

Pain and rejection I take...
I dont care...no-one believes...
Play with your cards to your chest...
Live with your heart on your sleeve...

Rhymes that dont work....
My message is confused...
In the fight to potray my mind...
I cant help but seem to lose...

[Stryker82]

Not bad Banzaii and N00bus :)

[banzaii.03]

cheers...but im not happy with that one of mine...
im working on some more..

[London_Calling]

You live in beauty like a red rose free of imperfection and sweetly scented


As long as night becomes day and wind doth blow i shall love thee



Living in Shadows.

I live in shadows,
Out of site and out of mind,
Fluttering on the edge of sight,
Sighing, looking but not touching,

Often in the corner of an eye in some forgotten place,
Seen but then gone,
Left lying a shadow of my former self,
Left living in Shadows

I know its rubbish but i aint written anything in ages

[London_Calling]

Would peolple please post in here. Sorry for double posting

[<~Darkshadow~>]

yea poetry is great but i think this should be moved to the philosophy precinct now...thats where i've posted my poems in the past...

[jesusbot3000]

i rode my scapegoat to work the other day; the trip was better than the destination. in this case, you might say i lied, or whatnot, but fear not, im off again to other places, seeing other minds and other scapegoats, ridden like slaves to their graves. but these words are hypocritical...

i rode my propaganda to the white house the other day; nice place to visit but i wouldn't want to work there. i killed one bird with two stones and asked myself why, why do political rivers run red with bloodshed of a more cerebral and topical nature? but these words are hypocritical...

copyright jesusbot3000

not too good, but i made it up as i went along... once i find where i put my writing book, i'll post my better work...
EDIT-There, that's a little smoother...