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Spark
08-27-2003, 03:36 AM
Fire and Ice

A novel by Saria Lunai (a.k.a. Spark)


The Dreaded Yet Forgotten Day Has Arrived...


Cries of agony and calls of war rang throughout the dark plains. A gray cloud of despair hung over the two armies. The army of the dark one had assembled yet again and was attacking when the lands of the eastern realms had least expected it. A peaceful time had been destroyed yet again. Thousands of humans stood on one side, along with a few elves and dwarves. An army of ghunien swarmed on the other-side. A reckless and hideous race of soul-less beings they were. Their needle-like fangs dripped and their tall, stick-like figures towered above the humans.

Only a couple beams of sunlight peeked out from the dark cloud here and there. The grass of the seemingly endless plain was dry and withered, covered with blood and trampled flat.

The tension between the sides grew as they waited to attack and the ghunien were growing restless and tired of taking orders from the wicked humans that sided with them. Many half-breeds and even a few dark elves were opposing the alliances of the eastern realms, all for one reason: they were being controlled by darkness.

“Ready!” A general from the dark alliance raised his battle-axe in preparation of a charge.

In response a cheer came from the thousands of deceived beings.

“CHARGE!” The words rolled over the plains then general pointed his axe forward.

The dark alliance rushed forward screaming war cries. They flooded down onto the peoples of the eastern realms like a waved of water after a dam had broken. Peoples from the eastern realms also charged forward, the same instant their enemy had broken loose. Swords clashed and warriors fell. Screams of agony and yells of encouragement filled the air.

For hours they fought. Hours soon lasted for days. The days eventually became months. Battles sprung up all over the lands like wildfires during a dry spell. Many fought and lost their lives heroically, and many more were caught and tortured. Even though the eastern realms suffered so, their suffering was not in vain. Little by little they defeated the armies of the dark one. Every wave of evil that was sent became defeated before long. The lust of the evil one was no match for the will of Iuil, or the hunger for freedom of the peoples.

Finally seven months and twenty-two days after the first battle of the war started, the peoples of the eastern realms formed together an army to defend the city of Aegolith, which resided in the land of Finia.

The dark alliances were gathered outside of the city’s large stone walls, awaiting the orders of their leader. Even though they were being defeated, they still had a few tricks up their sleeves.


A large rather burly man walked hastily into a tent in the dark alliance’s camp. He wore a large brown coat and heavy thick black boots. His eyes were dark and cruel as he quickly scanned the other human in the room. He was obviously a half-breed between elf and man.

“You half breed. You’re Kaita are you not?” The man with dark eyes gruffly stated as he glared.

“Yes sir. I was ordered to see a General Tinto?” The half-breed with black hair stated coldly as his eyes quickly shifted to the burly man.

“That would be me. Tell me what you know about project flame?” General Tinto walked toward a small wooden table and sat down. “I heard that nothing has come of it yet.”

“Well sir,” Kaita took a seat across from the General. “We need some elves with knowledge of chanting magic. I cannot proceed any further.”

“Kaita, gather up all the elves or half-breeds in this and surrounding units. We have at least four elven chanters. Dark elven chanters.” General Tinto’s eyebrows lowered into an evil position.

“Yes sir. Right away.” Kaita grinned a most pleasant but disturbing grin. “That will be all?”

“Yes that will be all.” General Tinto muttered gruffly as he stood up and disappeared out the tent door.

The yellowed-eyed Kaita stood up, his ears perked. He enjoyed suffering, and his thirst for blood-shed would soon be quenched. The rather tall half-breed walked proudly out the tent. This was his day, he just knew that something perfect was being put into place.

“Gather all the elven chanters.” He emptily ordered a ghunien standing outside the door.

The ghunien’s long pointy ears twitched and it’s pale skin was covered with blood. Its black round eyes stared in fear at the half-breed that had just given him orders. “Yessss ssssir.” Steam poured from its two holes for a nose as it hissed, and it was off.

Kaita pulled his large brown coat around him tighter. The winter had been cruel to their troops. Many had died from the severe coldness. He walked around for a while, making his rounds for examining the soldiers. He eventually made it to a large clearing that was blocked off by wooden boards and guarded by some rather large muscle-men. Kaita walked past them and stared at a large egg-shaped rock in the middle. The rock was a black color, elven runes written in red covered a small portion of the botton. It sat there, menacingly. So beautiful yet so horrible. Something about the rock made shivers run down Kaita’s spine.

“So magnificent.” He muttered in awe as he drew clo ser, almost as if he were being lured by an enchantment.

“Ssssirs… we have found your elf chanterssss. We hasss him right here with ussss.” The ghunien from before said from behind the wooden boards.

Kaita turned around and saw a young man with silver hair. He had long pointy ears and piercing red eyes. Instead of a brown cloak like most of the humans or elves, he wore a black cape over a gray tunic and black fitted pants.

“Ah my good man. Come here.” Kaita welcomed with a sickening sweet voice.

The man glared in return, but immediately stepped forward, his thick black boots thumping as he did.

“I need you to read this right here for me.” Kaita pointed towards the writing on the rock.

“Beati ni taenu jei. Hitu tie lien tana serila ien toe…” The man kept reading the beautiful ancient language of the Aeli... The Ancients.

All of a sudden, he gasped and stepped back from the rock in horror.

“You must not awaken this…thing!” He yelled at Kaita. “He will… he’s an evil nothing can stop!” His red eyes were terrified.

“But, that’s what we need to end this war is it not?” Kaita expressed amusement and a most mischievous smirk.

“NO! We do not need THAT!” A drop of perspiration fell from his silver hair.

“But we do. A power such as that would be of much use.” Kaita’s eyes narrowed as he walked toward the elf.

“You don’t understa-”

“Sir! The enemy has attacked!” Cries interrupted the nervous elven chanter.

“Young elf. I want you to do as the rock says. Now. Start chanting.” Kaita glared at the elf and pointed toward the rock.

“Y-yes sir.” The elves red eyes dimmed as he stepped next to the rock.

Kaita watched with amusment at the young elf.

The peoples of the eastern realms were attacking on the plains in front of the fortified city. Screams and cries arose. For hours the battle raged on, the eastern realms clearly winning.

Moment by moment, Kaita grew more tense and nervous as he watched the young elf chant. For hours he chanted, his hands raised and facing the rock. The moment their enemy charged into the camp, the rock glowed red. Kaita shivered as the rock glowed a terrible yet magnificent red. The air seemed to be filled with a darker presence than any there had ever felt.

“Sir… I can’t finish. It’ll be terrible.” The young elf looked back at Kaita with worried eyes.

“Finish now scum! We have no time!” Kaita angrily threw his fists in the air.

The elf turned back to the rock, which was still glowing red.

“Eanier… dun ain eatu!” Finished the silver haired elf as he trembled with fear.

The air grew deathly still. All felt it and stopped, shivering at the evil presence they felt. An unnatural silence fell upon every person and thing there. They all were paralyzed with a fear they had never felt before.

Crack.

A beam of red shot out from the cracks that were forming throughout the rock. The rock began melting into lava. Suddenly it burst in a flame of red and orange. A blinding red ball of light shot straight up from the molten rock. It stopped suddenly fifty feet above the armies. Two black demonic wings burst open, causing a rain of fire to fall on the people. Everything was suddenly in flames.

Screams and pleas immediately broke the long silence and everything there began to run in horror. The ball of light shot fireballs at everything. The people and ghunien were running, all aflame.

“Ha! You pathetic fools. You’ve awoken the most powerful being ever. Now, you will pay!” An eerie yet captivating deep voice scoffed from the red light. “Die now!”

A red light enveloped in flame formed into a ball above him. It grew and grew, until it was the size of Aegolith. Screams of terror continued as everyone scrambled, trying to escape the painful fate. The huge red energy ball consumed in flame began to move, slowly at first, but then at almost lightning speed. It crashed into the city of Aegolith with immense force. A flash of light brighter than the sun followed by a bang loud enough to deafen anyone in a five-mile diameter occurred. The whole land went up in a flame of despair and loss.

Spark
08-27-2003, 04:04 AM
The Legend Awakens...

Drip…drop…drip…drop…

Cystal clear droplets fell from the ceiling of the caverns onto the ground, right in front of a young man who was sitting on a large rock. He had hair black as the darkest void, fiery red eyes that seemed to pierce a persons soul. His clothing was that of a black long sleeved shirt, loose black pants, all trimmed in red. His black cape was draped over his shoulders, lying around and behind him.

The man was sitting, with a very bored expression on his face, staring at a large egg-like thing far in front of him. A very large and mystical egg it was. It was a pure white, almost as if nothing was ever whiter, and sparkled like a crystal. A strange glow surrounded it, as well as many treasures of gold, silver, and jewels. This place was majestic in a way. Almost like it should be a great king’s tomb. Little did many know, this tomb was the sleeping place for something much more great and powerful than a king.

Drip…drip…drip…drip…

The constant dripping was starting to get on his nerves. It wasn’t like he wasn’t already very annoyed. For almost a week now, he’d been trying to hatch that stupid egg. More like, break it open. There wasn’t any runes or symbols on it to clue him in on how to awaken the being within. It was starting to really aggravate him.

Quickly, rose with a fluid motion and much gracefulness. He walked over to the egg and placed his hand on it, feeling the softness on his hand, then tapped it with his finger. Surprisingly, no sound came from the tap. He then backed up a few dozen feet, then stopped and stared. Suddenly, with a speed that only the gods could have, he rushed towards the egg, slamming his fists down onto it with so much force, the whole cavern shook. Still, nothing happened.

“Grr… stupid egg.” The word “egg” spat out, like poison on his lips.

Finally, after studying it for another moment, he decided to put his hands out in front of himself, a huge fireball forming. He launched it at the egg, only to disintegrate the second it touched the egg. It went up in a puff of steam, encircling the egg, then slowly vanishing. The man’s eyebrows lowered in frustration and his red eyes seemed to burn with hatred.

“I’ll get you Aquarius.” He glared at the white egg, then flipped his cape behind and proudly walked out of the cavern through a small entrance to the east.

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A young handsome man was making his way through the dark tunnels, his hair a sandy blonde and his eyes a bright blue. He wore a pair of baggy brown pants and a red vest that was left un-buttoned, showing his well-built chest. Behind him was a rather large and burly man, very built, wearing similar attire as the first. This one’s hair was a raven black and his eyes a bright yellow. The last fellow was behind both the others, nervously shuffling his feet and keeping up the first two. He was rather scrawny, and his red hair and beard was matted and drenched with perspiration.

“Eh, Bradley. Wot are we doing ‘ere anyways?” The burly man’s deep voice boomed down the stone halls, echoing with much force.

“Well, remember what the Captain said? He told us there’s treasure in these parts.” The young blonde grinned as he turned around to look at the other two.

“Yes…yes! We’ll be bloody rich men that we will!” Exclaimed the last one, rubbing his hands together. “Garret, you got you’re sword now don’t you?”

“Of course I do, Took! What would I do without it now?” The dark haired man gave a glare back at the redhead.

“Alright alright! No need to be hasty!” Took, the redhead, backed up with a faint look of fear in his eyes.

“Alright you two. Let’s hurry up with it. We’ve got to be hasty.” The young blonde, Bradley, said, continuing on his walk down the dark passageways.

The other two followed, Garret walking proud and confident, and Took slinking here and there. A strange bunch they were. They were pirates from the seas of the Aquidor. Aquidor was a large ocean of the east-coast of the western realms, also known as “The Ocean Between” as it lied between the continents of the eastern and western realms. These particular pirates were part of one of the most ruthless pirate groups known on Neanien. Known for their very sharp fighting skills, they were feared by many. Most had not been able to cross the sears of the Aquidor. It was a risky thing to go across to the other realms.

“Bradley, ain’t this the chamber o’ the frozen ancient?” Took asked with much restlessness.

“Oh well if it is. It’s only a myth. Even if it is true, he’s been asleep since the ancient times. We have nothing to worry about.” Bradley said, turning a sharp corner and then stopping in his tracks.

“Wot is it Bradley?” Garret raised his sword for action.

“Listen… it’s dripping. I hear it very clearly. Its echo takes a while. There must be a large chamber ahead.” Bradley said excitedly, tightening his bandanna that was around his head. “Let’s go!” He drew his saber in case something would happen.

The other two nodded and followed their leader, finally stopping in front of a large entrance opening to a huge chamber. They all gasped. Never before had they seen such riches. Gold, jewels, precious metals, beautifully crafted items, and even enchanting swords and armor were piled in the room before them. In the center, a strange glowing light was radiating from a large, pure white, egg-like rock.

“Oh my…gods! Sweet Idaen! Holy Piniliae!” Garret stuttered. “I’ve…never seen anything like this.”

“We’re going to be filthy rich!” Took rubbed his greedy hands together, with a grin from ear to ear.

Bradley just stared with his mouth wide open. Took and Garret rushed into the pile of riches, excitedly picking up random objects and stuffing them into their pockets like the greedy men they were. Suddenly, Bradley thought he heard whispers, and stopped and listened very hard.

::Come::

For some odd reason, Bradley couldn’t take his eyes off of the large white egg in the center. It was luring him; enchanting him. Every fiber of his being wanted to find out what this was.

::Awaken me::

Bradley started walking slowly to the egg, reaching his hand out in enchantment. The egg must have been made out of a million tiny ice crystals, for it shimmered as he got c***** to it. Farther away it seemed like a huge pearl, getting c***** it changed to a ball of crystals.

::The scepter::

The blonde looked down and a scepter with a beautifully carved creature on the end was lying beneath him. A strange creature it was, having the head of a dragon, body of a snake, and wings of an angel. Gently, he picked it up, staring at it with amazement. By now, the other two had noticed their companion’s dream-like state.

“Bradley? Wot’s wrong ol’ chap?” Garret asked.

“Must be awe-strucken.” Took chuckled and the two went back to their pocket stuffing.

::The kunati is the key::

That’s what that creature was… a kunati. One of the ancient, mythical demi-gods. Bradley raised the scepter so the kunati was directly in front of his face, studying it was amazement and wonderment.

::The seal must be broken::

Slowly, Bradley looked up. Something he’d not noticed before was there. It was a sort of keyhole, in the shape of a kunati. Bradley dropped the scepter in fear, but immediately the keyhole disappeared. His eyes were wide and scared, but he picked the scepter up again in curiosity.

“You guys…there’s a hole…and the egg is sleeping. There’s something inside asleep.” Bradley blinked, walking up to the egg and putting his hand on it.

“Wot?” Took and Garret turned around and gave Bradley a strange look.

They didn’t know what he was doing, but they somehow felt scared beyond anything they’d ever felt before.

::Unseal me::

The whispers echoed in Bradley’s ears.

::You’re the one::

Slowly, he raised the scepter and fitted the end of the scepter, the image of the kunati, into the hole.

::Go ahead… push::

Bradley pushed it in with as much force as he could, and the caves started shaking immediately.

“Wot did ya do, idiot?!?” Took hollered at Bradley, but couldn’t say anymore, as the caves started shaking even more violently.

Stones from the ceiling fell, and Garret had already dodged a few. Something else was happening though. The hole from the egg was visible to all now. A bright ice-blue coming from it, beaming with a brightness they’d never seen. Slowly, the egg began to crack, the blue light beaming from each tiny leak in the egg. The caverns still shook, even more violently, and a chilly winter wind blew throughout the chamber. Suddenly, the egg burst open and froze into a brilliant ice. Someone had burst out of the shell and flown to the ceiling of the cave on enormous angel-like wings. They were still folded in half, and the person, or thing, was enveloped in a blue light.

“You’re been very kind to Aquarius, that you have.” A calm, tenor voice came from the winged one.

“A-Aquarius? Ya mean… you’re… the ancient…myth?” Took trembled, falling to his knees.

“Quite right you are my good man, indeed you are.” The voice said, this time the winged creature flew down and landed in front of them.

He was more visible now… his body was wrapped in an icy-blue smoke. His hair was a frozen snow-white and his eyes were an ice-blue. The man’s face was fair and he wore a joyful smile on his lips.

“You’ve awoken Aquarius that you have. For that, Aquarius must thank you.” He bowed towards Bradley.

Bradley couldn’t speak. He stared with curious, wide eyes. Breath-taken and scared beyond belief was the young pirate thief. Fear was put into the others as well. They had just awoken one of the most powerful beings to ever exist. This was Aquarius, one of the ancient legends who fought until death.

Spark
08-27-2003, 04:08 AM
The Young Handsome Hero...

A young man sat behind a wooden desk with a very thoughtful look on his face. He had been looking over reports from the past battles for a week now. How much more boring could a General’s duties get? His raven black hair messily fell into his face as he looked down at the next report. Hurriedly, he picked it up, a look of weary growing in his violet eyes. This man was known as Aiden Takani, leader of the eastern realm’s Takani unit and the whole 2nd division of their army. He was considered the most able and strongest General they had, which was an honor for a humble young trader’s son.

“Five victories and one defeat.” He smiled. “We’re doing well. I can’t help but wonder about the Aegolith incident though…” The young General’s smooth tenor voice trailed off as he went into deep thought again.

Aiden wore a long sleeved, button up white shirt. Its sleeves were full and a gray, fitted vest tied up his chest over that. His black fitted pants were slightly dirty, showing signs of battle. Over all this he wore a long sleeveless tunic-like vest, in which he left unbuttoned. It was a deep red, almost the color of dark blood.

Knock! Knock!

Someone was knocking at the door. Aiden gave a sigh as he looked up. “Come in.”

A middle-aged man with blonde hair walked in with a stack of papers on his arms.

“So sorry to interrupt General Aiden, sir… but here’s the reports on the Aegolith incident.” The man told him as he set the papers in front of Aiden.

The man wore the same attire as the General, minus the blood red over vest. He had a look of worry and anxiety on his face.

“That’s alright Lieutenant Kalri.” Aiden nodded. “The Aegolith incident… I was just thinking about it.”

The black haired General started reading over the reports for a moment, his face looking very intrigued. Suddenly, his eyes widened and he looked up with extreme surprise.

“The area within a 3 mile diameter was-flattened and burnt?” He gasped. “Is this true?”

“Yes sir. I was even there myself two days ago.” Lieutenant Kalri bowed his head in sorrow.

“THREE miles? What kind of sorcery WAS this?!” Aiden was now very upset. “This isn’t good.” He got up and left the papers scattered on the table. “Where is General Mahony?” He asked Kalri, an honest and worried look in his eyes.

“He’s over in the stable’s, sir.” Kalri responded.

“Thankyou Lieutenant.” Aiden disappeared out the door, leaving the Lieutenant in his office.

The young General walked as speedily as he could through the crowded and busy fortress, finally coming to the outside and started to run. He had to talk to General Mahony as soon as possible. After turning the corner of the fortress, he came upon the horse stables. The large wooden stable stood to the side of the huge dark gray fortress. Gently, he opened the door and looked inside.

“General Mahony, sir. I need to talk to you.” Aiden’s voice was still very hasty and worried.

“Yeah, son. Come in.” A gruff voice called from a stable nearby.

Aiden closed the door to the stable and walked towards the stall he heard the voice come from.

“Uh, I just got the reports on the Aegolith incident.” General Aiden stated nervously.

“Aye, you did? What’d you think?” A tall dark haired man with soft brown eyes came from the stall, folding his arms across his chest and staring at Aiden.

“Sorcery…of the worst kind.” The young general’s eyes filled with sorrow and worry. “Either that or the awakening of the strongest elementals we’ve ever seen in history. But I doubt that.” He shuffled a foot anxiously. “In either case, we’re doomed unless we can find an equal to what that was, and convince it to join us.”

“Young man, you worry too much.” General Mahony let out a weighed breath of air as he closed his eyes and stood there.

“I’m sorry sir, I can’t quite help but at least wonder about this... it’s.. just so strange and horrific. So many lost their lives... and... everything. EVERYTHING within a 3 mile diameter, was completely destroyed.” Aiden looked to the ground as he spoke.

“Look son. We’ll be fine. We always have... every war against the dark ones have been won.” The buff man gave his very calm and serious reply.

“No offense sir... but there have been wars not won against the evil ones.” Aiden looked back up, his violet eyes met the General’s brown ones. They stayed in a locked gaze for a moment as the older General searched the younger one’s eyes.

“I suppose so. I don’t know that much about history.” The older General shrugged, turning back around to tend to his horse yet again. “By the way, General Takani. You are being assigned to finding out what caused that.” At those words, Aiden’s curious violet eyes widened.

“What? I... am?” He asked very softly, almost not even audible.

“Go to my office. You’re mission information will be in there on the top of my desk. Nothing else is there so you won’t pick the wrong thing up. Here.” Mohany tossed Aiden a set of keys. “It’s the silver one.”

Aiden nodded and walked off, fingering the keys in his gloved fingers. He had to find out what had caused that. . . this job wasn’t going to be easy. Something that had completely annihilated and was burnt... everything within a 3-mile diameter. They’d not seen anything like this for possibly several millenniums. The raven-haired man walked slowly and thoughtfully to the office, just pondering the situation. He’d need to get a small but reliable force to join him and handpick the men himself. This was the first of these types of missions he’d been in charge of.

“Hmm...” He murmured thoughtfully, rounding the corner to the General’s office. Without thought, he unlocked the door and walked in, looking around for General Mohany’s desk. Not to much searching was needed, for he found it almost instantly, and also spotted a small stack of papers on the desk.

“I’m so glad he’s not like General Adeswick.” The violet-eyed Aiden breathed a sigh of relief as he picked the papers up and walked out, making sure to lock the office as he left.

Soon, he found himself back in his own office, reading over the mission. He was to find a small group of men, handpicked by him. Good. That’s what he wanted. Stealth and speed were necessary in situations like these. After he picked the men, he was to report to His Majesty in the castle of Denton.
Aiden blinked. The King was now involved with this? After such short period of time? Amazing...
This really must be a matter of importance. The King was a very shrewd and tactful man, but he usually left exploration and spying for the military Generals to take care of. He had the best spies on his hands. And even though mercenaries were plentiful these days, good ones were extremely rare. Yet, somehow he had managed to find them and recruit them. General Takani sat there, just staring at the paper. Something told him this mission wasn’t going to be easy.

After Aiden had read his mission assignment, he picked it up and burnt it in the fire. It was a classified mission. He’d have to find his companions very quietly and with much caution. The men he’d pick... how would he do it? Never before had he picked men this... well secretly. Usually he had something posted, men showed up, tried out, and either got in or didn’t qualify.

“Wait.” He muttered, looking around his office towards the fireplace. An idea sprang to his mind. The stealthiest and quickest men, might not be the most loyal. . . but for a good ammount of pay they’d be loyal enough.

“Gypsies... and pirates.” Aiden’s lips turned slightly upward in a sly smile. Perfect. And the assassins spot. They were all extremely stealthy, had amazing senses, and very good skills at most everything that he needed. All he would need now was someone that could use magic and a scholar. Everything was coming together. He’d go to Adigon City and look for the pirate’s hideout. The gypsies he was thinking of were a day or two away from that. This time of year they lived out near the forests of Ganaza. After that, he’d just need to find where the assassin he was thinking of was located. That would be the trouble. The Black Tigris was extremely difficult to find. She was almost as good as The Shadow Hawk had been. But as for the scholar, he’d look for an old friend of his. The mage or summoner was the most difficult of any of these to find. They were harder to find than even The Black Tigris.

The young General’s eyes were scanning the map that was secured to his wall. Adigon City would take a three day journey. Going to the forests of Ganaza would be two days tops from that. He’d have to remember that it’d probably take a while persuading the best men from both of these groups. His friend lived in Haikos, which was an almost seven day journey from Adigon City. An irritated sigh escaped the man’s chest. This would take a while... time he didn’t have. But oh well. He had quite a while to get this together. Not only was he to find the cause of the Aegolith Incident, but he was to pin-point it and possibly track it down.

“I leave tomorrow.” With those words uttered, the General left the office, locked it, and disappeared down the hallways.

cHilli
08-27-2003, 07:27 PM
ooh, long, havent finished it all yet, but good work from what i have seen,

inspired by LOTR i assume..

Anubis
08-27-2003, 08:52 PM
*claps loudly* VEry good!!! I like a lot!

hmmmm i`M WRITIN A STORY BUT I DOUBT ITLL BE GOOD...

darn caps......sorry bout dattoo lasy to change it.......

lol
okay welll done!

id give u three thumbs if i had 3 but *grabs someone els`s thumb* heres three! :tup: :tup: :tup:

Spark
08-27-2003, 10:39 PM
Actually, no .. not inspired by LOTR...

My brother gave me the beginning battle-idea... And Aquarius and Phoenix are his characters XD
Just to let you know so he doesn't kill me for pretending they're mine... But yeah. This is probablly going to be my best story. And hey! Hot, tightly-clothed assassin elf girly coming later on! *grins* Bet you guys will like that! Haha.. she's cool though. The Black Tigris they call her... ^___^ Well, i havn't written anymore so far, but i'mma be working on it... kayness?

LEGOLES
08-27-2003, 10:39 PM
good im trying to print it:tup: :tup: :tup:

cHilli
08-27-2003, 10:59 PM
Originally posted by Spark
Actually, no .. not inspired by LOTR...

My brother gave me the beginning battle-idea... And Aquarius and Phoenix are his characters XD
Just to let you know so he doesn't kill me for pretending they're mine... But yeah. This is probablly going to be my best story. And hey! Hot, tightly-clothed assassin elf girly coming later on! *grins* Bet you guys will like that! Haha.. she's cool though. The Black Tigris they call her... ^___^ Well, i havn't written anymore so far, but i'mma be working on it... kayness?

Hmm, the idea's somewhat match..


Anyway, get writing:)

Spark
08-28-2003, 11:35 PM
Lol, okay *looks for her muse*

Abaddon
08-29-2003, 12:53 AM
hey spark thats excellent you should get your work published man I'd buy it :D very very good :D

Spark
08-29-2003, 08:56 PM
I'm going to get this one published... at least try to anyways

Gavo
08-29-2003, 09:03 PM
Depens wot u like

LEGOLES
08-29-2003, 11:21 PM
i like it

Spark
08-30-2003, 12:25 AM
Lol, glad y'all like it *will try and work on her stuff tomorrow and sunday*

<~Darkshadow~>
09-02-2003, 09:00 PM
I'm workin on a story for my language arts class...It's about evil penguins taking over the world. I might post it on the boards when I finish it.