View Full Version : Hey y'all...my book?


banzaii.03
09-09-2004, 06:06 PM
who wants to read my story?

i got the idea from school...

the idea had to be " teenage runaway" ..

erm...i know that there are some depressed kids on C/D yeh..but dont get any ideas....dont take that the wrong way cos i know you wouldnt do such stupid stuff y'all....lol...

but anyhoo....constructive critisicsm eh?

( unless you really hate it lol )

Vipershark
09-10-2004, 10:39 PM
yeesh.... that was scary. you gotta write part 2.

banzaii.03
09-11-2004, 05:42 PM
okidoke....im glad someone read it lol

Skeleton Lord
09-11-2004, 05:50 PM
hmmm nice book :)

banzaii.03
09-11-2004, 05:54 PM
cheers...not a book i admit....more a sort of story lol...

but im getting chapter 3 up soon...im writing it now...so unless someone replies now ill be double postin soon lol

SpartanKid
09-11-2004, 07:53 PM
not bad story buddy but like viper said..sheeesh

banzaii.03
09-11-2004, 07:57 PM
lol...cheers dude...i know i dun good if ya say it good...