Story Contest!

[Vipershark]

Post your best stories here and compete with other writers!

[banzaii.03]

I accept.

OK then...heres a taster of a new book ive written based on the game Max Payne.
I have changed the storyline though, but this chapter opens right into the action.

[SpartanKid]

its really corny when you copy someones idea. better to be original. no affence but that was stupid..... i'm just being real with you so u know wats up!

[banzaii.03]

fine....ill post the whole thing ( when ive actually written it lol )

[SpartanKid]

Did i not just tell you I DONT LIKE YOUR WEIRD COPYCAT ZEEROX COPIE MACHINE STORY!!!!!!! So dont post the whole thing, that would just be a flook, no one would read it. Make a new story that you made up!!! GEEZE!!! constructive critizisem!

[[N]eto]

That isn't constructive critizism, you know...

Why don't you post your work, Spartan?

[[stick-jây-tee]]

ahh but to a 9 year old, it's always constructive as long as you say "no offense."

Just like saying "I'm not racist but..." saves you from being so horribly falsely accused of being a racist.

[Peppage]

Well then sorry to say I think this whole thread isn't going to work out...