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[N]eto
06-04-2005, 01:44 AM
There’s always been a song
That I’ve always tried to write
But every time I’d hold a pen
I’d lose my train of thought
And all the words would be
Drained from me and lost

And everything inside you knows
Says more than what you’ve heard
And you can’t deny the words
That speak inside of you

And here is my final stance
To show you all I’ve learned
And tell you that I love you
No matter how much we hurt

Everything inside of me looks like
Everything I hate
You are my only hope
I have for change
And you are the only chance
I’ll take

And everything inside you knows
Says more than what you’ve heard
And you can’t deny the feelings
That speak inside of you

Just take a look at me now
I’m so blind without you
By my side
And even though I lied
To you
I fell to learn to fly

Just give me one more chance to see
Give me everything you are
And one more chance to be
The only one for you

© Gabriel E. Ibarra

No, I don't have an official title for this, but "a song for a heart so big" is my message to the person I dedicated this to. I hope you like it.

Pixels
06-04-2005, 03:27 AM
Its very deep, Seems to have a lot of meaning to it :)

Btwm Thankyou alot Neto for showing me Thomas Newman :D

HRBEK
06-04-2005, 08:54 AM
Well written [N]eto. I agree with Gray Fox, very deep and hearty. Very emotional that one.....

Thanks,
HRBEK.

Soba
06-04-2005, 03:56 PM
Why don't you keep that as your title?

It's beautiful, Neto.

HRBEK
06-04-2005, 04:00 PM
That kind of name would match it.....

Thanks,
HRBEK.

Laguna Loire
06-04-2005, 05:43 PM
Nice one Neto, very deep and emotional... :D

HRBEK
06-05-2005, 03:43 AM
Who's it for??? Nah I don't want to be nosey, lol.

Thanks,
HRBEK.

inter
06-05-2005, 10:44 AM
I like it, alot of heart and thought has gone in to it.