View Full Version : Remember those threads about books we were writing? It's back.


Vipershark
09-21-2005, 11:01 PM
Okay here's mine.
I haven't thought up a title yet.

Prolougue

Zero drew his sword. A group of monsters was attacking him. He couldn't escape. A surge of energy ranthrough him, as he got ready to fight. He jumped to slash a monster, but it's speed let it dodge and counterattack. It kiched him hard in mid-air, and he fell to the ground, open to attack. Then it happened. The monsters ripped him to shreds. He saw a flash of light. Was he dead? He wasn't sure. All he could feel was pain going through his body. And then, he blacked out.

Like it?

Laguna Loire
09-22-2005, 04:33 PM
Cool, although it's not really a prologue...at least, I don't think it is...if the story carries on with "Zero" waking up or something, then it's more like an introduction chapter than a prologue...?

Y'know, I have an idea for a book that seriously ties in with all my poems, but I've never found time to type it up...I even had a prologue, but I'm struggling to fully remember it...damn...

PøinŦ Çataclsym
09-23-2005, 01:55 AM
meh...i guess its ok. wathca should do, though, is make it so it starts with someone else, and have that come in some other time. they did that in Halo: Fall of Reach, and ive read it about 50 times now.

Vipershark
09-28-2005, 01:02 AM
Ch. 1
The Game

Takeru Ishiyma was an average kid. He had average friends. He went to an average school in an average city. But there was one thing about him that wasn't so average. He had The Game.

-EDIT- I will add more later.