Writing contest 2

[Element Lord]

ok since for now nobody has any credits (i dont count) this contest is open to all categories. ok go!

[Dead Or Alive]

*ahem*

Louis in Muffinland: Part One (Of 3)

It was a very warm day, and Louis was reading a book (about muffins *sigh*) There were all types of muffins. Big ones, small ones, fat ones, chocolate ones, blueberry ones etc. Suddenly, a giant chocolate chip muffin jumped out of the book he was reading. "Muffins!" blurted Louis. The muffin jumped into a small hole... a rabbit hole. Without realising, Louis jumped into the hole. The muffin serch has begun.
He was falling... falling down the hole which was now much bigger then it first was. He saw lots of muffins on the way down. But none were as delicous and big and fluffy as the one Louis had seen escaping from the book. Then, there was a large 'thump' and Louis realised he reached the bottom of the hole. Suddenly... "Muffin!" The original muffin was now standing in front of him...

The muffin started to run. Louis followed. The muffin ran to a tiny door the size of a pack of playing cards. The muffin jumped... and so did Louis. He caught a small piece of the muffin, right before it turned into a small, miniscule muffin and ran to the small door... and entered. "Muffins!" exclaimed Louis. He tried to put his hand through the door. No good. He decided to eat a piece the small piece of the muffin he had got. He then turned into... a muffin! He was small enough to enter the door now. He ran... as fast as he could, following the muffin

The room was nothing like he ever saw before... There was a giant chocolate waterfall with floating chocolate chips and mini muffins in it. Everything was made of muffin, the ground, the plants, the table that he now saw. Louis had to restrain himslef from eating himself. There were people at the table. Louis ate more of the muffin he got. It was the best he ever tasted. He turned big again, and ran to the table at top speed. "Hello!" Came a weird voice from the table. It was a weird tall man with a mad hat. There were other weird people there too. Then the man said, "Im the..." "Muffins!" said Louis. "Yaaa..." said the man. "Anyway, do you want to join our tea..." "Muffin!" Louis cut in. "Yes, everything is made out of muffins"... Louis shot the man dead. For Louis saw the muffin at the table... he tried shooting the muffin, but it was too skilled...


Thanky you and it's not done yet, there's 2 more parts to come in the next competition. Oh, and if you're smart, you would have realised this is based on alice in wonderland. I named it Louis in Muffinland

[Laguna Loire]

^ Lmao! Hahah, nice one man! :D

I'll enter this contest, just need to find time to write a story of some sort...also need to get the ideas factory in my brain workin' again. :)

[Dead Or Alive]

I jst edited some of it to make it longer. I have a good idea for part 2 now lol..

[Element Lord]

dude it's like a ripoff of alice in wonderland and willy wonka!
save parts 2 and three for future contests.

[Dead Or Alive]

Ya, it as differnt stories. I'm writing part 2 now.

[MORSN417]

Ya, it as differnt stories. I'm writing part 2 now.


if u do part 2 & 3 for this contest then it might be to long.........save them

and, will it be a continueation??

[Element Lord]

like I said save part 2 and 3 for the next two contests

[PøinŦ Çataclsym]

PIE WARS: EPISODE 1, REVENGE OF THE PIE!!!

Once upon a time, there sat a little french kid, in America. His name was frank, or Francisco, whatever you felt like callin him. He lived in a box. yes, a PLASTIC box. not a cardboard one. Then one day, a magical pie comes and takes him away to a world full of...PIE! He is trained in the frost (force :D ) and is told he is a Pieful Knight, the defenders of Pie Land. He is told to attack Pastry Land, or land of the pastry (sad, isnt it?). He went there, and came back with thousands of custards impaled on his pole. yes a pole. he didnt have a pie sword or anything. Then he ate them. He got fat, and had to get suctioned. So he got suctioned. Then he had to attack Custurdia, then Muffinia, the even...Frostovia (the land were all Frostings come from.) Then finnaly, he had to attack Bakedgoodsia. The cupcake, brownie, and ice cream cake defenders where hard to defeat, but he defeated them. Then, the pies betrayed him and exploded him by feeding him to much pie. Then they found Henry, and the same happened to him, then Bob, and so on....The legend of the pie continues forevuh!

I was VERY REALLY BORED when i did this, so it doesnt mattuh what you say. :D

[MORSN417]

wuts with food in this writting contest.......anyway, nice star wars ripoff

[PøinŦ Çataclsym]

Hey, this is completely original *stares around making sure no one from Lucas Arts is spying on him* but anyway, about the food, i dont know, we just like muffins and pie. They are natural attractions (about 200 of the 757 people in my school are addicted to one of the following: Bunnies, Rabbits, Muffins, Pie, Cheese)

[Element Lord]

its also a bit of a muffin ripoff

[PøinŦ Çataclsym]

what does PIE haf to do with muffins?

[HRBEK]

It doesn't matter! Just post a story!

Thanks,
HRBEK.

[Sesshy]

PIE WARS: EPISODE 1, REVENGE OF THE PIE!!!

Once upon a time, there sat a little french kid, in America. His name was frank, or Francisco, whatever you felt like callin him. He lived in a box. yes, a PLASTIC box. not a cardboard one. Then one day, a magical pie comes and takes him away to a world full of...PIE! He is trained in the frost (force :D ) and is told he is a Pieful Knight, the defenders of Pie Land. He is told to attack Pastry Land, or land of the pastry (sad, isnt it?). He went there, and came back with thousands of custards impaled on his pole. yes a pole. he didnt have a pie sword or anything. Then he ate them. He got fat, and had to get suctioned. So he got suctioned. Then he had to attack Custurdia, then Muffinia, the even...Frostovia (the land were all Frostings come from.) Then finnaly, he had to attack Bakedgoodsia. The cupcake, brownie, and ice cream cake defenders where hard to defeat, but he defeated them. Then, the pies betrayed him and exploded him by feeding him to much pie. Then they found Henry, and the same happened to him, then Bob, and so on....The legend of the pie continues forevuh!

I was VERY REALLY BORED when i did this, so it doesnt mattuh what you say. :D


oh no you didnt talk about my custard.

[Sesshy]

heres my story

Custermania Part1

Once upon a time on Planet Custard,The planet was at war with the Pies.Half the population was gone.Half of the pies were gone.So then the prince(me)order
the CIAs(custard intelligence aency of spies)and the best of the best to defend the planet at all cost.So the custards fought day & night to kill the pies.Then one day.the maharajah(ma-ha-rah-ja)princess camt to aid.Then one day the prince decided to organize a plan to find the pies weakness.Then one dy they found it.The peis were afraid of being eaten.Then there weaknss was revield...............so thy orgainized a full strike on the pie kingdom.Then the fnal battle came.The pies leader.Point Catylism.This battle would determined the fate of the custard

[HRBEK]

If the Custard really had any intention of winning the war, they should have let me loose on the Pies. Lol, I love eating Pies!!!

Thanks,
HRBEK.

[PøinŦ Çataclsym]

PIES CONQUER ALL! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! GO MY PIE WARRIOS! TAKE THOSE CUSTARDS TO *BEEP* *swears continuely*

[Nanaki]

is there a closing date?
If I don't know how long I have I dont know if I'll enter
If so I'll get going

[Dead Or Alive]

Probaly in 2 weeks or a bit more like teh other one.

[Sesshy]

CusterMania-last Story

While approachiing the pie last stronghold.Prince and princess made a secret a weapon.HRBEk.......he was designed to smell all pies and eat them.At thwe stronghold, custards were eating a gorging there self on pies.So far the pies were 1000 to our 500000,then they leash HRBEk.He teared the pies and rip them to peices.But the pies had a weapon of there own.Sweet potato pie.It didnt bother the custard though,Then Prince and point catylism did a final battle.Then out of now where HRBEk came and ate point catlism in a gulp.The custards won the war

[PøinŦ Çataclsym]

Hey! im not a pie! im a magic muffin !

[Element Lord]

ok this is getting out of hand ill wait like either a few more days or 1 more entry

[~Felly~]

Meh, I'll just vote this time. (Vote and not post, lol! Better watch out!! :P/:D)

[Element Lord]

oh oooh were so scared