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[Stmbuzz]

Hi, my name is stmbuzz and I am a new member here at cheating dome. I have something to share with with you all and that is the creation of my new DBZ characters and Series. Actually I wrote four new charatcer bios and a show to go with them. first I am going to post the characters than the script. I want your Opinions about the characters first than I am going to post the script to go along with.

Right I finish Episode 1: Born into a world of fear

This is basically about what has been going on the first Saiyan home world before Frieza destroyed it.

[Good Ol' Redneck]

damn dude thats perty kool, hope ya can come up with some pics and stuff of'em, or i could try and help ya out with it if ya want me to...

[Stmbuzz]

Well your help would be needed . Actually I need help with trying to find Photos of future villans and allies as well as the characters I started on, Or if you're good at sketching pictures you can create the characters I use.

Oh by the way here is my Character list I generated. And I will try to post my findings tomorrow.

[Good Ol' Redneck]

yea man if u want me to, i can help ya out, my AIM sn is gotenks01234 or MSN is redneck01234@hotmail.com and yahoo is rebel02143, jes send me a message er somethin if ya want man...

[~Felly~]

Maybe I can help too if you want to. That is unless Redneck has it. My AIM is FireElementLord, MSN is FireElementLord@hotmail.com, and Yahoo is sk8ergirl785. Just contact me if you need anything.

[Good Ol' Redneck]

hey im sure he needs all teh help he can get... :D if u wanna help me draw some then be my guest

[BUFF]

thats very impressive!! u must truely be a hardcore dbz fan for u to go to these lengths

[Good Ol' Redneck]

amen ta that...

[Stmbuzz]

I never expected this much feedback and I apperciate the support. I will need all of you to pull this series off.

Now What I need so far is drawings of future villians and allies!

My suggestion is try fusing old villians together to make new ones!
As far as allies go, I will generate a detail characterzation of each character tomorrow.

If anyone has comments or questions feel free to to contact me at Acela2020@aol.com

Thanks again!!!

[Good Ol' Redneck]

I never expected this much feedback and I apperciate the support. I will need all of you to pull this series off.

Now What I need so far is drawings of future villians and allies!

My suggestion is try fusing old villians together to make new ones!
As far as allies go I will generate a detail characterzation of each character later this weekend.

If anyone has comments or questions feel free to to contact me at Acela2020@aol.com

Thanks again!!!

hey man its a good idea, hell im glad ta help, so u only wnat me to start workin on the villians?

[Stmbuzz]

Yeah its best to start on the villians first as well as the characters that have I started already.
Someone can start the baby versions of Raven, and Jor-El

*Note: Here are some photos that I found of what I kinda like my characters to look like. Click on the links below or copy and paste.

1. First link is a fusion of Frieza and Cooler as a new villian( A great example of fanasty fusion)
2. Second Link is a photo is what Jor-El should look like when he turns 18 years old.
(Like the hair style and outfit)
3. Third Link is a photo of What Raven should look like when she turns 18. ( loose the weird hat and change clothes its horrible!)
4. The fourth Link s a photo of what I kinda want Kal-El to look like in his late 20s (The guy in the Photo is too skinny, and change clothes)
5. The fifth link is a photo of what Sky sould look like when he is 16.

http://www.myfavoritegames.com/detail.aspx?i=Fusions%2fFantasy_Fusions%2fFantasyFusion22FriezaAndCooler.gif

http://www.myfavoritegames.com/detail.aspx?i=Fusions%2fFantasy_Fusions%2fFantasyFusion10GohanAndGoku.jpg

http://www.myfavoritegames.com/detail.aspx?i=Fusions%2fFantasy_Fusions%2fFantasyFusion42TrunksAndVegeta.jpg

http://www.myfavoritegames.com/detail.aspx?i=Annin%2fAnninReadyToAttack.jpg

http://www.myfavoritegames.com/detail.aspx?i=Fusions%2fFantasy_Fusions%2fFantasyFusion33TeenGotenks.jpg

Note= These are just examples and honesty these photos is how I created my characters bio except for the first one.

[Good Ol' Redneck]

Yeah its best to start on the villians first as well as the characters that have I started already.
Someone can start the baby versions of Raven, and Jor-El

*Note: Here are some photos that I found of what I kinda like my characters to look like. Click on the links below or copy and paste.

1. First link is a fusion of Frieza and Cooler as a new villian( A great example of fanasty fusion)
2. Second Link is a photo is what Jor-El should look like when he turns 18 years old.
(Like the hair style and outfit)
3. Third Link is a photo of What Raven should look like when she turns 18. ( loose the weird hat and change clothes its horrible!)
4. The fourth Link s a photo of what I kinda want Kal-El to look like in his late 20s (The guy in the Photo is too skinny, and change clothes)
5. The fifth link is a photo of what Sky sould look like when he is 16.

http://www.myfavoritegames.com/detail.aspx?i=Fusions%2fFantasy_Fusions%2fFantasyFusion22FriezaAndCooler.gif

http://www.myfavoritegames.com/detail.aspx?i=Fusions%2fFantasy_Fusions%2fFantasyFusion10GohanAndGoku.jpg

http://www.myfavoritegames.com/detail.aspx?i=Fusions%2fFantasy_Fusions%2fFantasyFusion42TrunksAndVegeta.jpg

http://www.myfavoritegames.com/detail.aspx?i=Annin%2fAnninReadyToAttack.jpg

http://www.myfavoritegames.com/detail.aspx?i=Fusions%2fFantasy_Fusions%2fFantasyFusion33TeenGotenks.jpg

Note= These are just examples and honesty these photos is how I created my characters bio except for the first one.


pretty kool, but the first one of the frieza and cooler fused, thats actually jes cooler man, its jes his like highest form if im right, but it is jes cooler

[Stmbuzz]

Here is the descriptions of the characters.

[Good Ol' Redneck]

aight man i'll work on some of'em later

[Stmbuzz]

Enjoy

[~Felly~]

I must say, this is a pretty good story. As for those drawings, well, it might be a bit longer than expected for me to get the two that I'm doing done as I started one, but you see, tonight.. I accsidentally spilled soda on all of my "important" stuff, so now I have to redo it all. However, the ones that I'm doing first will be done by Sunday night, so if I'm lucky, I'll have the first one done by next Wednesday because Tuesdays, I'm busy. (Then again, when am I not busy? Hm...)

[Good Ol' Redneck]

sounds like you had fun taday...

[~Felly~]

Meh... I actually did... I ordered some new skates which come in Thursday, hopefully, and I went skating with a friend. So yeah. Also, starting on the first one now.

[Good Ol' Redneck]

kool have fun...

[Stmbuzz]

Hope you enjoy number 3! I'm working on #5 right now. I'm having trouble up with catchy villian names. That is where you guys come in! I also provided an Attack guide so keep this handy!

[Good Ol' Redneck]

im gonna be honest with ya man, hell i am not creative at all...

[Stmbuzz]

When I look at all the Dragonnball Z names, I realize that most of the names come from every stuff. All the writers just basically did was flip some of the letters or dropped them!

[~Felly~]

Hm, if I can think up some names, I'll post them. Some of my villans haven't been created completely yet though...*whines about that*

[Good Ol' Redneck]

i could work on mine but im feelin like **** right now...

[Stmbuzz]

You guys might want to toss the old character bios (Not descritions) in the bin because I edited them! ;)

[Good Ol' Redneck]

gah damn, aight man...lol..

[Stmbuzz]

hope you like it so far!

[Good Ol' Redneck]

actually i aint had time ta read them really man... sure theyre good though...

[Stmbuzz]

Enjoy! :)

[Good Ol' Redneck]

i take it you have no life man? lol, jes messin with ya, keep'em comin