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I know many of you know what a Haiku is. It is a 17 sylable pem with 5 sylables in the first line, 7 in the second line and 5 in the last line. Ever since reading and writing some in English at the beggining of the year, I can' stop creating them. I can create a Haiku in less then a minute now. I created this thread so people can share their Haikues with others. Here is one I made up today when we were making ice cream in lab.
Once milk becomes cold
It enters the solid state
into good ice cream.
lol i know its wierd but it just poppe din my head since our teacher said we could create a creative poem on the making of ice cream
Sesshy
10-19-2006, 10:45 PM
Life is really harsh
The racist we have today
Never Ending Evil
thats good but last line has 6 syllables
hers i one on c/d
C/D is the best
You can talk all about games
and about cheating
Miror B
10-20-2006, 12:18 AM
I really hate school,
And with all the mean teachers,
My life really sucks!
nerds are never cool
they will never leave their moms
man thats really tuff*
tuff is not in emeans as being tough as being strong. tuff that i used means that sucks
Miror B
10-20-2006, 09:07 PM
That was really good,
You, Marcador31.
I like haikus lots.
lol its new
thing for me, i didnt like
it that much before
Miror B
10-20-2006, 11:10 PM
Neither did I, dude,
But it is really fun, man,
Counting syllables.
~Felly~
10-21-2006, 02:10 PM
Meh, I can't make
Haikus at all because of
The syllables.
Meh, I know the Haiku sucks. I can't make them for anything...
Miror B
10-21-2006, 04:49 PM
Do my haikus suck?
I think they are pretty good.
What's your opinion?
Sesshy
10-21-2006, 05:28 PM
Your haikus are good
fire Element Lords are bad
Whats 2 + 2 fel
Miror B
10-21-2006, 09:35 PM
Your haiku, Cloaked Wisdom,
Has 8 syllables, you know?
On the second line.
Sesshy
10-21-2006, 11:24 PM
Oblivion knows(im not sure if thats one or 2.Somebody tell me)
He coundnt think of nothing
So 8 he did use
Wow im good at this
Miror B
10-22-2006, 04:12 AM
I never realized
That haikus were really fun
FEL is great.
~Felly~
10-22-2006, 05:49 PM
Wow, thank you.
And 2 + 2 is 4, CW.
I'm in advanced math, you know. (I know it's more than 5. Shoot me.)
shoots at FEL
now he just made a murder
now he's in trouble
Sesshy
10-23-2006, 01:54 AM
Fel wanted to die
To meet kakashi for life
I rob her house hah
I found jewels, rubies
and i sold her posters yay
i was filthy rich
~Felly~
10-29-2006, 03:51 PM
Just because
I think Kakashi-sama is
Cool DOESN'T mean I like him...
Flamefist95
10-29-2006, 09:19 PM
i made a story
it was very fictional
but then it came true
the world was chaos
many people died but one
it was me, yeah me
~Felly~
10-30-2006, 11:57 PM
Wow, you've got me beat.
As you can see, I'm not good with Haikus.
I am good with regular poems, though.
As a matter of fact,
I got to make a Halloween one
In class today. ^_^
Flamefist95
10-31-2006, 12:26 AM
lol, i see
i can make haikus, poems
easliy sometimes
Annihilator Knight
10-31-2006, 02:23 AM
Evil cannot die
Sins grow and becomes darkness
Light fades away..
Birth creates child
Child turns into adult
Death consumes adult
Meh.. I am bored..
Boom! goes the rifle
Blood has spilled all over floor
death the anti- drug
Brown Bear
11-28-2006, 07:51 PM
I eat chocolate
Five times every time I
see chocolate pies
Lol, I know its dumb
but when i see chocolate
I think of those pies
I could continue
forever and maybe...
Begin a story?
Sister of Metal
12-03-2006, 12:34 PM
what is so philosophic about this can someone explain please xD
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