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Old 08-06-2003, 04:34 AM
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Poems part 2

I don't know about you all, but i managed to let my thoughts out in writing poems...again. i'm not going to repost the ones that was in the first poem thread. so...here i go...

[SIZE=3]My Thirteenth Year[/size]

As I stare out the window,
Watching the birds fly free,
I usually wonder,
What is in this world for me?

I long to fly
With those wondrous birds,
To feel Free,
And to be heard.

I’ll fly with a smile on my face,
Thinking about the past,
About my cage,
Because Freedom never lasts…


By Whitney Dañíer H.
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Old 08-06-2003, 04:51 AM
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Youre really good poet.
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Old 08-06-2003, 06:53 AM
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I don't have a peom for you guys but i just wanted to say my grandma has poems in the hall of congress or something its called Will You?
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Old 08-06-2003, 12:20 PM
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I have written a poem on vacation, just for fun....If I can post it? ( if anyone actually wanna read it...)
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Old 08-06-2003, 02:45 PM
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go ahead post it.


i have a poem but it curses so no i wont post it.

heres 1...the others were a bit brutal the ones i posted last they ehhh had to do with death so heres a normal one.

unnamed

Edit: ehhh forget it i cant rhyme as u can see all me other poems arent rhyms so forget it.

okay this is simple

unnamed

Voices, Do you hear them? Voices, i musnt fear them. voices, It echos through my mind its like a person i cannot find! Voices, It follows me its taunting me!, it tells me where to go i cannot run alone i must find a friend! It screams my name am i insane?! Theres a room within my dream as i follow this path the voices get louder but i never finish. I must see who it is! The dreams are back i go deeper within, the air takes a sudden drop i feel as though I had been shot. I get to a door The doors open wide a Jakal and a man appears i fear but than i see the form, the lights turn on i see the creature standing in front of me! a shrill of terror runs down my back, but i do not scream. i must hide my feelings inside of me, The Anubis speaks in a deep and unmistakeable tone, Egyptian, but somehow i can understand, it says ''Do not Fear for i Am your Gaurdian, I will be your guide. You will be endowed with all my powers you will be the ruler of the Dead. By midnight I will be your soul and you will become fused with me. The Dream collapsed in a terrific explosion awoke me. i jump to find half of my room disolving in to midair, Am I dreaming? No, The darkness swalows me Ifear it is the end, but no a voice speaks to me it says ''The end of your life means the beginning of Anubis.'' i didnt understand till a clock hand shone above me, ! minute till twelve midnight, i fall, i see a dead end, I am going to crash. than all of a sudden a Jakal appears, it saves me. than i see a light a dog in the form of a ghost appears i see it than i fall i see my soul run away than the Jakal enters my body and i feel like i have died.


ehhh i forgot 2 write the rest down soo ehh i don remember. lol hehehe
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Old 08-06-2003, 07:02 PM
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lol, just like the other one.
go ahead, Mizz, i know i like reading poems from others, see what they've been thinking about.

here's another one...


I can see it,
But then again,
I can't.

He just walked out of the fog,
Yet,
He stayed where he was.

Every night,
He'd visit me,
Would just sit there and watch.

But when i wake up,
In the morning,
It was like he was never there.

A few nights before,
He said his first words to me,
Just a simple 'hello'.

It got to the point,
That'd I thought i dreamed,
But then it started happening in the day.

One second,
I'd be talking to Mum,
The next, to him.

I told my friends about it,
How he would visit,
And then disappear.

That's why I am here...
In this place...
They thought I was going insane...

Maybe it was a dream,
Maybe I was insane,
Maybe...no...

He still talks to me,
Appearing at night to talk to me,
Telling me that i was perfectly sane.

I just had to keep quiet,
And i'd be out...
But i just couldn't...

I'm just here...
Maybe I really am insane...
Maybe...

okay...uuummm...i need more thought on this.
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Old 08-06-2003, 08:37 PM
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ahhh Harry potter. i`m almost done with the 5th book.

okay ummmmmmmm.......i`m out right now an don know any soooo uhhhh i`ll think on it...
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Old 08-06-2003, 09:08 PM
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[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Mizz_Bennington [/i]
[B]I have written a poem on vacation, just for fun....If I can post it? ( if anyone actually wanna read it...) [/B][/QUOTE]

come on mizz_b I wanna hear it.

I'll give ya guys a poem later though
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Old 08-07-2003, 02:16 AM
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im not a poet goes against ma honor code just dont like poems but i dont like them ur guyses are the bast poems ive read
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Old 08-07-2003, 03:08 AM
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your honor code??? oi, thx...
i'm sorry if this poem makes anyone uncomfortable, if it does, i'll put up a different one...or rephrase it.


[SIZE=3]Haunted[/size]

As I walk down the street
A house catches my eye
Its paint job was horrible
And smelled as if someone died.

As I walk up the walkway,
Weeds and sticks grab at my jeans,
And the wind whispers in my ear,
About something unseen.

The rotting door opens with a creak,
And I step inside,
The house moans its terrible fate,
Laying where the dead lie.

I start to back away,
The door closes with a slam,
The floor shakes a little,
Oh no…the lion has just captured the lamb.

I feel around for a light switch,
My fingers brushing over something cool and damp,
Aha! I found it,
Darn, out went the lamp.

Lightning flashes outside,
Threatening to awake the dead.
Fear rises to my throat,
Dreading what Fate has said.

I shiver uncontrollably,
Eyes adjusting to the dark,
Then the lightning flashed again,
Giving me a start.

My eyes widen with horror,
Staring at the man before me,
He raised his knife and disappeared,
Making me not believe what I see.

I look down as I see something,
He was lying face down,
A knife in his back,
My ears blocked off all sounds.

He was pale and damp,
And lying in something red,
Wait, what do you know,
I think he’s dead…

Whitney Dañíer H.
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Old 08-07-2003, 12:24 PM
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ok, my poem: called: how love left me ( gee, promising)


here I am,
standing alone again,
abanedoned by you again,
You pushed me away again,
and now I'm crying here....again

Why can't u be satisfied with what you have?,
so you can hold me in your arms again,
so we can be togather again,
so u can love me again,
but you just left me here....again

I wish you'd understand me the way I understand you,
so you can talk to me again,
so you can cre about me again,
so you can express yourself to me again,
But you turned your back on me.....again

And now you are a plague to me,
I'm trying to get you out of my head again,
Pretend I hate you so much again,
I don't want you to send the feelings back again,
But they did and they still do, over and over again....

wha,yeah I know, lot of agains....
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Old 08-07-2003, 01:05 PM
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nice poem mizz_b.
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Old 08-07-2003, 01:17 PM
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Wanna hear mine ok here it tis!

Eat me,
Beat me,
Bite me,
Blow me,
Suck me,
**** me,
Very Slowly,
If you kisss me dont be sassy,
Use your tounge and make it nasty!

:lmao:

LOL

Alright a real poem made by, who else? me

Whats that taste, in the base, of the coca-cola can.
Watch it not, of the pow, of the coca-cola in the can.
If you can take your hand and rink the coca-cola in the can.

Its always good if its coca-cola yeah
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Old 08-07-2003, 01:23 PM
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Talking you sicko unreal lol

man you got issues lmao
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Old 08-07-2003, 01:30 PM
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Yep i love teh coke :lmao:
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