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Old 07-07-2004, 05:06 AM
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poems from my bad times

i just found some poems from before i started taking my anti-depressants, i will post them.

I look down at the ground,

see a barrel stare up at me,

please god,

let this trigger set me free.


I was alwas a pain to you,

you yelled stuff at me that made me cry,

but know your pain is gone,

because i need to die.


you always hated me,

you pushed me in the mud,

ashes to ashes,

this letter will be signed in blood.

I'm to depressed to go on,

you'll be sorry when i'm gone,

you had your heart locked by a key,

so me no more sha'll you ever see.


i no longer will laugh or play,

i will no longer jump in the mud,

you were always my best bud,

but i shall leave now,

i will paint my wall in blood.





I am all better know, these were the only ones i could post on the site.
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Old 07-18-2004, 05:56 PM
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erm yes. Poetic but depressing.

on a light note, here is a limerick i just made up...

My brother on every occasion,
Uses something known throughout the nation.
And All Agree,
And Argues that he's,
Amazing at alliteration.

just dont ask why im making up limericks ok?? lol
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Old 07-21-2004, 07:03 PM
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heehee. i love that poem
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wow!
sorry im a bit late but thats awesome!
i love that poem!
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Old 09-17-2004, 05:56 PM
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mortal kombats or mine lol....

mine wasnt exaclty what you would call depressing lol
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