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My songs

I write songs....as well as poems...lol....here are a few of my songs...C&C's please...

[B]Lightning Track[/B]

When I walk in the sky,
I feel the blackness under my feet of hail
When I stay in the sky,
I can watch the people being burned in hell
When I decide,
I tell the same thing you already heard before
When I’m mad, I
Roar my words of swords,
Again

[Chorus]
Try to understand
The voltage that I’m emitting to you
I did it for a good thing
That you have to know
That you forgot
That everything wasn’t up to you

The longer you stay there,
I’ll lose my hand of my mind
The more you say there,
I’ll get deafer in my kind
The more you wait there,
My temper will break apart my skin
The longer you wait there,
I won’t wait until my revenge
Even with your apologies
Get away

[Chorus]

You want to know
All the truth that I kept
All I wanted to say
In this accursed rhythm
Stay away from me
Stay away as far as you can
Stay away from me
As further as you can
Stay away from me
As faster as possible
Stay away from me
As fearful as possible

[Chorus]
X2


[B]Love is Pain[/B]

Black roses kept falling again
When darkness came into an end
Loneliness haunted my heart
Nothing could be used to ward
I have nothing left to remember you…

Illusions of reminiscences played my visions again
The constant memories confused me until the end
The joy and conflict kept destabilizing my heart
I wonder when I can get out of the dark
I have nothing left to remember you…

Constant feast of love devours my hope
When patience bleeds affection in the cold
Solitude kept wounding my thoughts
As I wait in the sinister of the dark
I have nothing left to remember you

[Chorus]
Why love cannot heal the pain we have?
Is the wall of fate separate us?
Is the cliff of hate segregate us?
Answers can’t be questioned
Questions can’t be answered
Confusing trust kept disrupting our love
Until nothing can be used to stop
We have to admit our defeated hope…

The bells of the past kept ringing again
When memory came close to the end
Pictures were drawn as a card
Illusions couldn’t take off from my heart
I have nothing left to remember you…

Childhood dreams awake my soul again
The constant confusion doesn’t have an end
Past love that I’ve forgotten from my heart
Slowly grip on my shadow from the dark
I have nothing left to remember you…

Constant feast of love devours my hope
When patience bleeds affection in the cold
Solitude kept wounding my thoughts
As I wait in the sinister of the dark
I have nothing left to remember you

[Chorus]

Light rain rusts the stories apart
The black eternity cover the skies of warfare
The torn pieces of love were bleeding in the middle of the road
As the stem of trust began to fall apart

When I see the rose dying on the ground
The blood keeps flowing on the surface
As I tried to appease the wound
The childhood love I’ve seen as flown away
When I tried to catch with my bare hands
There’s nothing there to remember her…

[Chorus]

Is the wall of fate separate us?
Is the cliff of hate segregate us?
I have nothing left to remember you

[B]Out of the Darkness[/B]

I’ve been lost in here for some time now
Tryin’ to find a way out of my head
Being here is rotting me inside now
I’m probably better off dead
You can’t see it
But you can feel it
As it only lets you die alone
No use fighting it
You can’t beat it
Every day you sit there alone

I think it’s time for me to rot away
But this darkness keeps me here, so here I’ll stay
And I don’t think anyone cares to this day
And to this day I’m still rotting away

I never really could figure out how
They found a way out of this place
I never could really see how
They would find a friendly face
Don’t ignore it
Just welcome it
As leaving it alone is probably worse
You will hear it
You will fear it
But running away is probably worse

I think It’s time for me to rot away
But this darkness keeps me here, so here I’ll stay
And I don’t think anyone cares to this day
And to this day I’m still rotting away

I’m Rotting away…
(Help me out of the darkness so I can stop)
Rotting away…
(I need away out of the darkness or I’ll keep)
Rotting away…
(I’m just here)
I’m Rotting away!

and I think it’s time for me to rot away
But this darkness keeps me here, so here I’ll stay
And I don’t think anyone cares to this day
And to this day I’m still rotting away

And to this day…I still rot away…
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