Rayquaza the story, it's not an RPG whatever that is.

[Invisible Shadow]

I had to be careful because anyone who has ever made it to the top of the Sky Pillar and has met Rayquaza, never comes back. If I wake it now, It will burn me with Flamethrower in a second, Now Go! Gardevoir! Focus Puch to wake it up!

Suddenly, after Focus Punch it woke up and we had entered a battle, use Psychic, Rayquaza fell then kept getting back up after each Psychic attack, I said "Return!" and sent out Blaziken to use Rock Tomb, Rayquaza fell trapped under the rocks each time Rock Tomb hit. Good Job, we're going to have a new friend soon! No "Return!" I said and sent out Regice, now use Sheer Cold!

It had hit directly and Rayquaza fell, not getting up, it had et out a loud Roar, it was hurt badly, I was able to catch it but had Latios fly me to the nearest Pokemon Center very quickly, Nurse Joy had promised to put it in a huge field to lie down. She gave him medicine to make him feel much better, than I said to Rayquaza "You're sure lucky I got you to the Pokemon Center right away!"

Then it had let out a big roar to thank me, than I said "Rayquaza, are you ready to travel with me?" It had roared to say yes, I said "Return." But it roared to say "No." So I let it fly and it let me ride on it's back, and said "Rayquaza let's go get the people who disgraced me once but won't do it again, The Elite Four." So we set out on our ourney to become the greatest partners who ever lived.



The End

Wow, good story, at least u didn't kill Rayquaza, u should write more stories.

[Invisible Shadow]

I need suggestions. You know, for another story.

Groudon or Kyogre, perhaps?

[Invisible Shadow]

Hmmm..... Sounds very intresting.

[PøinŦ Çataclsym]

just to let you know, i only liked it cause rayquaza is one of my favorite pokemon.

[Invisible Shadow]

Hmm.... well that's rude, you only like it for the character.

[PøinŦ Çataclsym]

hey i dont really like pokemon anymore.... just the games.

who made theirs first cus really anaimefreaks and moltres's story are the same just different pokemon...... sorry mate its good but just like moltres's its got no point... no emotions

erm, Animefreak, I don't mean to say u've got bad spelling, but i realised only just that u've mad e a few mistakes. Check them and edit them. With those mistakes it does sound a little strange. Just so u know

[RocKer]

Originally Posted by Moltres

erm, Animefreak, I don't mean to say u've got bad spelling, but i realised only just that u've mad e a few mistakes. Check them and edit them. With those mistakes it does sound a little strange. Just so u know

^It's called a rough draft here. i dont think anyone is gonns spend time editing stories and krap to post on here

Originally Posted by x-dark-latias-x

who made theirs first cus really anaimefreaks and moltres's story are the same just different pokemon...... sorry mate its good but just like moltres's its got no point... no emotions

Agreed. Didnt get that excited feeling in my stomach. Rayquazza didnt even get a chance to fight back. Let them fight back to make it more exciting!!

1.5/10

[Invisible Shadow]

I would but uh, Gardevoir was fast and kept hitting. (I didn't think about it fighting back.)

[Miror B]

Originally Posted by Toa Nathan

not a RPG whatever that is

An RPG is a Role Playing Game where you include a sign-up sheet and you go on an adventure-type thing.

Oh, and 7/10 for the story.

[Jack]

Ok. Sorry If I'm turning into a mini-mod, but Pokemonfreak, the last post besides yours in this was January 22nd.

Don't reveive old threads