Articuno, the story, it's not an RPG

I wandered round in the Seafoam Islands and then after looking everywhere, i saw it, Articuno. It was sleeping so i approached it carefully and gently let out Moltres. I told it to use Flamethrower and it obeyed me and shot out a burst of flames. It alerted Articuno and i jumped back as it spread out its huge wings at me. It was bruised a little bit but still up and fighting. I told Moltres to use Overheat and it shot out a gigantic flame at Articuno. It badly hurt it but with its last ounce of strength it shot an ice beam at Moltres but it completey missed. I had thrown an Ultra Ball at Articuno but as it was in mid-air the ice beam hit me and i was frozen solid. My loyal fire bird saw the ball capture Articuno but it knew that i wasn't able to pick up Articuno so it defrosted me with a small breath of fire and i praised it and gave it a Rare Candy to eat. It leveled up to Lv:70. I picked up the Ball and checked on Articuno. It was in a critical condition so i got on Moltres' back. It knew what to do and flew me to the nearest Pokemon Center on Cinnabar Island. I gave Nurse Joy Articuno to heal and she said that she had a spare ice field for Articuno to rest on. She told me it would take a day for Articuno to fully heal so i walked outside and approached the edge of the island. I sent out Lapras and told her to take me to Pallet Town. We arrived in Pallet Town and i gave Lapras a Rare Candy. She levelled up to Lv:50. I went to bed and rested for the next day. Night passed and i got up and went outside and sent out Pidgeot. I told him to take me to Cinnabar Island. When we arrived i gave him a Rare Candy and he levelled up to Lv:70. I arrived at the Pokemon Center and as Nurse Joy went to get Articuno, she saw Team Rocket taking Articuno. She rushed in and told me about the incident. I rushed out back and sent out Vileplume. "Vileplume, use Razor Leaf to knock down that balloon" i said to her. She obeyed, and sent out a set of leaves at the balloon. The balloon burst and crashed down to the floor. I cut out Articuno and retreived it to its ball. Officer Jenny came and arrested the rockets. I thanked everyone for their help and then returned Vileplume, sent out Moltres and flew to the Indigo Plateau. I challenged everyone and beat them easily. I then encountered Gary, my rival and also the champion. I beat him after about half an hour of battling. I had done it, i was the new champion.

[Invisible Shadow]

Not bad, Moltres. But I'm totally jealous of people having FR/LG, I'd buy it at Target but my Mom rarely takes me there.

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Moltres, what's your asl? Mine is 9/m/az, I'll be 10 on 3/31.

I never give away my age but i can tell u i'm a male and live in Wednesbury, England

[Invisible Shadow]

You gave away you're age in your profile, rofl.

[PøinŦ Çataclsym]

i guess its okay.... but if dark latias hadnt started that other one you wouldnt have done this...... not that good.

[Invisible Shadow]

At least you liked MINE.
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But it's very mean to say it sux.

Originally Posted by [DRG] Master

i guess its okay.... but if dark latias hadnt started that other one you wouldnt have done this...... not that good.

Actually, i was thinking about what to put in to my story a couple of days and i had got everything ready to start after dark latios. I'm still thinking to put into my next one, might use Zapdos. I just did my story late, after darklatios, that's why u think i had copied the idea

Animefreak, in my profile i had a little accident and put that date, but i can't be bothered to chnge it anymore

i dont really care if they are copiying me im just glad i gave em the idea lol and moltres plz dont double post as you may be banned... but you can really tell that has been made/wrote in like 20 mins and there isnt really a story to it.... no emotion in there....

actually, it took me almost an hour to actually do it ll and another 5 minutes to edit it. But i guess there is a bit of a no story to it as it is my first.

[RocKer]

u say that for every one . . .

1/10
worst one yet

Rocker, i say it because it did take me an hour to complete my storys so get of my back for Prof. Oak's (and heven's) sake.