Lugia, the story, not a RPG

I was wandering around in a tower which the name i didn't know but i did know that a rare pokemon called Lugia lived here. That's why i was there. I wasn't looking where i was going and fell down a hole. I fell into a room with a thud. I hard some pawprints. They sounded like they were moving. I knew it was a dog or cat pokemon but i had bigger problems to worry about, how to get out of the room. I tryed jumping up and it worked. I continued my journey up to the top.
After about an hour, i heard heavy breathing coming from the top of the tower. I knew it was Lugia, it just had to be, it couldn't be anything else, i was sure. I went up the stairs. I was right, there, dead infront of me was Lugia. I approached it carefully and let out my Typlohsion and Nidoking. I told Nidoking to wake up Lugia with a Mega Punch attack and told Typlohsion to use Flamethrower as soon as Lugia woke up.They both obeyed and it worked to perfection. Lugia woke up with a shock as Nidoking's fist struck it right in the face. As soon as it woke up, Typloshion sent a red hot flamethrower straight at it. It ended up badly burned but it wasn't ready to give up yet. Before i could do anything, Lugia flew straight up into the sky. I tryed to get Nidoking to hit it with a Hyper Beam but Lugia avoided it. The beam went staright on and hit a Pidgeotto. It fell out of the sky and i thought quick and sent a Pokeball at it. It caught Pidgeotto with perfection and it fell to the floor of the tower. I retrieved the ball and i put it onto my belt. I kept my eye back on Lugia and realised it had sent Nidoking flyying. My loyal pokemon had fainted. It was down to Typlhosion to get Lugia down. Lugia started to dive at Typloshion. It got into a swooping posistion. Just as Lugia was about to make contact with Typloshion, i told my fire pokemon to dodge Lugia's attack. Lugia crashed straight into the floor and fell down to the level below. I saw another trainer about to get an ultra ball to catch lugia but i already had one out. I threw it at Lugia. The trainer looked up, it was Gary. I jumped down to retrieve the ball which caught Lugia before Gary could steal it. We both grabbed the ball. I kicked Gary in the shin and he let go immeditately. I ran back up to the top and let out Pidgeotto. I gave it a max revive and it perked up. I got onto it's back and told it to fly back to the ground. I got to the ground and retrieved Pidgeotto. I ran to the Pokemon Center and gave Nurse Joy Lugia. She let it rest in a giant field. I stayedat the Pokemon Center overnight.
The next day, Nurse Joy woke me up at 8 am and told me that Lugia had made a full recovery and she handed me my bird's ball. I left the Pokemon Center and flew to Blackwater City to face the last Gym Leader. I beat her easily and went to face the Johto Leauge. I won everyone and went onto the champion. I wiped the floor with him and became the new Johto Leauge Champion.
THE END

ok thats better than your last 1 but still..... no emotion and i bet it took you about 20 mins i know you can do better....

i think ure expecting me to kill a pokemon and again, took me about an hour to complete so wil u just give me a break. I don't want to kill anything. Besides, i din't moan about ur's did i...? NO so just stop moaning about mine.

srry didnt mean it to sound like that just i know you can do better but you didnt long post that other 1 so i thought you were doing em quick... srry

well, i guess we do have a few different views about how stories should written. ay
Also, i haven't asked anyone yet cos i havn't got round it but how do u get up higher levels. e.g. Peep to Junior or somethin'

get to 100 posts to get to junior, 200- senior, 500- wizard, 1000- genie ..... summat like that

ohhhh, now i get it, thx

[RocKer]

check out the intro area . . . it's posted there

Boring story. 2/10 sorry. wasnt excited, wasnt in suspense, nuttin. U need to improve.

and dont flame, this is just my honest opinion.