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Old 01-22-2005, 10:27 AM
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Groudon the story, not an RPG

I was in the Cave of Origin, Wallace and Steven had saw that I had the Red Orb and had sent me here to do something about Groudon's drought. I was wondering along the cave. All of a sudden, Team Magma shows up with some Ultra Balls to catch Groudon.

I got on my Mach Bike and chased them, then a couple of Grunts and an Admin show up Blocking the way saying "We won't let you pass and ruin our plans! You will have to battle us first." So I dropped a Pokeball to the ground saying "Go! Blastoise!" then the first Grunt said "Go! Mightyena!" and a Mightyena came out and it used Shadow Ball. I said "Blastoise Rapid Spin!" to counter the attack.

"Now use Hydro Pump!" I said, and Mightyena fell to the ground then the grunt returned it saying "Go! Golbat!" and it came out using Wing Attack, then I said "Iron Defense!" and Wing Attack didn't leave a scratch. So I said "Bite!" Blastoise bit Golbat's body whole, then the Grunt returned his Golbat. "Now we have to face a harder Grunt." I said to Blastoise.

Then second Grunt sent out a Crobat which used Supersonic confusing Blastoise so I said "Return!" and said "Go! Latios! Use Psychic!" and Crobat fell, due to Psychic's super effectiveness, Finally the Admin was mine to battle, she had sent out Camerupt, now use Eruption, almost knocking out Latios, I said "Return! Go! Blastoise! Hydro Pump!"

Camerupt had fallen due to the attack's super effectiveness, just like Crobat.
They said "Fine, you've beaten us, but you will have to deal the Boss. So I biked to the chamber where Groudon lay sleeping. Suddenly Maxie swoops out of nowhere challenging me to a battle.

I acccepted, he sent out Sharpedo, I sent out Venusaur, I said "Use Solarbeam!" It charged quickly thanks to Venusaur's strength. It knocked Sharpedo dead. Thenhe sent Crobat, "Go! Latios! Use Psychic!" It had knocked Crobat out. "You're as weak as your employees." I said.

Then he sent out Camerupt, I returned Latios and sent out Blastoise again, "Use Hydro Pump!" knocking his team out. "Very Impressive but I have the Blue Orb!" It started to glow then Groudon woke up and battled me, I said "Hydro Pump." And Groudon went back to sleep and I caught it.

Then Maxie and the rest of the Magmas ran off and Maxie said "We shall not ever cross paths again!" They ran and I had returned to Steven and Wallace telling them the whole story then I set off to be the world's greatest Pokemon Master.

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Tell me how you like this story because it took ages to write it.
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Old 01-22-2005, 12:52 PM
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Not bad, not bad at all. But i don't know if something else was planned, but i don't think Venusaur and Blastoise are in the Hoeen region. The only way to get them on Ruby/Sapphire is to trade them from FR/LG to Colosseum then trade them from there to R/S. No offense in this post. Just stating a few things. Pleaz don't go mad at me.
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Old 01-22-2005, 01:22 PM
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Let's just say I brought them with me from Kanto. On my Journey I took them along.
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Old 01-22-2005, 01:25 PM
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OK, I can live withthat. I just thought you came from the Littleroot town in this story, not Pallet
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Old 01-22-2005, 01:27 PM
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I started in LittleRoot but travled to Kanto to catch Pokemon.
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