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You - Poem
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[U][B]You[/B][/U] I walk this lonely street, The wind whistling by my cheek, I hear your voice upon the wind, That welcoming voice, showing me your there... Goodbye is the hardest thing to say, I try, But I always think of you, That welcoming thought, telling me your there... Who knows what will follow? Who knows when we'll meet? But I always feel your warmth In my heart, Telling me your with me... Its just you, An individual, A droplet of water in the pool Your special to me, Because you're always there... ~GrayFox ------------------------ |
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Oh ^.^ How...
Not the word 'touching' but more...'feeling'. |
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Good stuff. I don't get poems like that at my school. I have a bunch of the so called 'Fully Sick'. They couldn't write if their lives depended on it. Good stuff mate!!!
Thanks, HRBEK. |
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