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Wrath of dragons
ok here are my 2 poems about dragons; the seconds a sequel:
DRAGONS ARE COMING Flash of claws, Gleam of teeth. Trail of death In their wake Dragons are coming, Utter domination. Dragons are coming, Death of the earth The red hint of blood, The darkness of death. The domination of dragons None shall rest Many warriors come to stand, All destroyed by the dragon’s hand Many seek to destroy the source, All crushed by the dragons force One warrior stands bold, Sword in hand, destroys a dragons Chaotic wrath The onset of a great battle begins, Led by the slayer of dragon skins A war rages on, the death of humanity. The dragons rule With an iron-fist Dragons are coming, A trail of death. Dragons are coming, The earth is gone. Flash of claws, gleam of teeth The dragons rest, But do not sleep…. Now the dragons rule, All is lost. They’ve taken away All we trust No warrior stands To fight this threat. All of us are doomed To death A dragon roars, Its body falls. A warrior has risen To fight bloody brawls A dragons tooth Is his sword. A dragon’s scale Is his shield He fights the intimidating Dragons roar, Destroys them all Before they soar. We all return From the world below, To see no smoke, And no dragons alive This warrior stands Noble yet even Today. The dragons finally rest…. Inspired by: Eragon and the Dragon lance series By: ‘the raving dragon fanatic’ DRAGONS RETURN The dragons have returned, Once again all is lost No warrior to protect All we trust The villages aflame, This is no longer a game The dragons have returned, And are finishing their work The dragons unleash their wrath, On the helpless town of Krath. Village set aflame, Many set to flee. This is the dawn of dragons, The real beginning. Another war rages, With no more cages The dragons are fully released, No more boundaries to hold Them back. The dragons don’t hold back Still no warrior comes, It seems to be the end. Then a piercing silver gleam, A sword covered in blood A warrior is there, Riding on a dragon. There is hope. A new alliance, Silver Dragons And man We all descend to the world below, While a war rages. The Impure Dragons have breached the last line Once again, the Earth is dominated No more wars, Yet no more peace. The dragons have Annihilated the Human race. All is lost forever By: The Raving dragon fanatic
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Last edited by PøinŦ Çataclsym; 05-04-2005 at 02:17 PM.. |
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They're both quite good mate, but I prefer the first one...Well done...
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I think the only poll option necessary was first one good, second one good. Very well written.If you have any more post them.
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ok...the second i came up with yesterday in about 5min...pretty good, eh?
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Well done. I couldn't write one in a year. Hey this is post number 600 for me. Time has flew here.
Anyway, keep it up!!! Thanks, HRBEK. |
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uh.... you should ryme more. but, they are both good
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It is called a free-verse poem mate.
Thanks, HRBEK. |
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