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Old 05-04-2005, 01:23 AM
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Wrath of dragons

ok here are my 2 poems about dragons; the seconds a sequel:

DRAGONS ARE COMING

Flash of claws,
Gleam of teeth.
Trail of death
In their wake

Dragons are coming,
Utter domination.
Dragons are coming,
Death of the earth

The red hint of blood,
The darkness of death.
The domination of dragons
None shall rest

Many warriors come to stand,
All destroyed by the dragon’s hand

Many seek to destroy the source,
All crushed by the dragons force

One warrior stands bold,
Sword in hand, destroys a dragons
Chaotic wrath

The onset of a great battle begins,
Led by the slayer of dragon skins

A war rages on, the death of humanity.
The dragons rule
With an iron-fist

Dragons are coming,
A trail of death.
Dragons are coming,
The earth is gone.

Flash of claws, gleam of teeth
The dragons rest,
But do not sleep….

Now the dragons rule,
All is lost.
They’ve taken away
All we trust

No warrior stands
To fight this threat.
All of us are doomed
To death

A dragon roars,
Its body falls.
A warrior has risen
To fight bloody brawls

A dragons tooth
Is his sword.
A dragon’s scale
Is his shield

He fights the intimidating
Dragons roar,
Destroys them all
Before they soar.

We all return
From the world below,
To see no smoke,
And no dragons alive

This warrior stands
Noble yet even
Today.

The dragons finally rest….

Inspired by: Eragon and the Dragon lance series

By: ‘the raving dragon fanatic’

DRAGONS RETURN

The dragons have returned,
Once again all is lost
No warrior to protect
All we trust

The villages aflame,
This is no longer a game
The dragons have returned,
And are finishing their work

The dragons unleash their wrath,
On the helpless town of Krath.
Village set aflame,
Many set to flee.

This is the dawn of dragons,
The real beginning.
Another war rages,
With no more cages

The dragons are fully released,
No more boundaries to hold
Them back.
The dragons don’t hold back

Still no warrior comes,
It seems to be the end.
Then a piercing silver gleam,
A sword covered in blood

A warrior is there,
Riding on a dragon.
There is hope.

A new alliance,
Silver Dragons
And man

We all descend to the world below,
While a war rages.
The Impure Dragons have breached the last line

Once again, the Earth is dominated

No more wars,
Yet no more peace.
The dragons have
Annihilated the
Human race.

All is lost forever

By: The Raving dragon fanatic
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Old 05-04-2005, 09:15 AM
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They're both quite good mate, but I prefer the first one...Well done...
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Old 05-04-2005, 12:50 PM
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I think the only poll option necessary was first one good, second one good. Very well written.If you have any more post them.

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Old 05-04-2005, 02:16 PM
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ok...the second i came up with yesterday in about 5min...pretty good, eh?
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Well done. I couldn't write one in a year. Hey this is post number 600 for me. Time has flew here.

Anyway, keep it up!!!

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Old 07-02-2005, 07:54 AM
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uh.... you should ryme more. but, they are both good
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It is called a free-verse poem mate.

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