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A song for a heart so big...
There’s always been a song
That I’ve always tried to write But every time I’d hold a pen I’d lose my train of thought And all the words would be Drained from me and lost And everything inside you knows Says more than what you’ve heard And you can’t deny the words That speak inside of you And here is my final stance To show you all I’ve learned And tell you that I love you No matter how much we hurt Everything inside of me looks like Everything I hate You are my only hope I have for change And you are the only chance I’ll take And everything inside you knows Says more than what you’ve heard And you can’t deny the feelings That speak inside of you Just take a look at me now I’m so blind without you By my side And even though I lied To you I fell to learn to fly Just give me one more chance to see Give me everything you are And one more chance to be The only one for you © Gabriel E. Ibarra No, I don't have an official title for this, but "a song for a heart so big" is my message to the person I dedicated this to. I hope you like it.
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Its very deep, Seems to have a lot of meaning to it
Btwm Thankyou alot Neto for showing me Thomas Newman ![]() |
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Well written [N]eto. I agree with Gray Fox, very deep and hearty. Very emotional that one.....
Thanks, HRBEK. |
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Oh, Wow...
Why don't you keep that as your title?
It's beautiful, Neto. |
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That kind of name would match it.....
Thanks, HRBEK. |
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Nice one Neto, very deep and emotional...
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Who's it for??? Nah I don't want to be nosey, lol.
Thanks, HRBEK. |
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I like it, alot of heart and thought has gone in to it.
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