Not Meant To Be

[MattiasL]

You hurt me and you don't care.
You look at me like I am not there.
My heart is broken and needs to be repaired.

It is funny that you cheated.
Do you think that, that was needed.
Even if you felt that, that is the way I needed to be treated.

I loved you with all of my heart.
But the arrow you used pierced right through it like a dart.
You let me bleed, and watched my heart torn apart.

After so many months, you led me on.
Im not sure how i fell for that con.
I guess i should have known that you would play me like a pawn.

Im surprised my friends took me back.
I pushed our friendship way out of whack.
I can't believe I let you run me like a train on a track.

I am glad my friends are trying to be there.
Because what you did to me was not fair.
I should not even let myself care.

Once a cheater always a cheater.
I hope no one lets you be the leader.
Because I feel bad that I let you go to that meter.

I thought someone would have taught you.
That cheating is something you do not do.
I guess I should have knew.

I am trying to heal.
Because of how sad you made me feel.
I feel like I am runnig on a wheel.

So now I am letting you go.
Because you made me feel so low.
Everytime I think of you I tell myself no.

Because now I finally see.
That you and I are not meant to be.
I deserve better.


I wrote this poem because the love of my life, cheated on me, and I wanted to marry her.

[Laguna Loire]

Again, this should really be in the "Get your poem rated" thread man...

However, I would give this an 8/10, great poem man, some lines really flow...however, I gave it an 8 because of the 3-line style you've used. I just don't like odd numbers...I like poems that have an even number of lines...but nonetheless, excellent poem, keep it up!

[DayleJ]

its bad in all honesty. you should of used couplets if you wanted it to continually rhyme. it has no flow you stumble over it.
Tough subject though, I guess you wanted to really get out what you wanted to say but that can be hard.

[Sister of Metal]

next time, put it in the 'get your poem rated' thread, thanks