creative Writing Contest.

[Element Lord]

ok so Im doing a creative writing contest. Whoever wants to join just write something and then post it was a word document in a post. Then I'll make a poll thread later so ppl can vote on the winner.

[HRBEK]

About how many words? Word Documents will take up more space if we are talking of really big 'stories'.

Thanks,
HRBEK.

[Antownee]

Entry:

I walked through the thick carpet of leaves, pondering my future. The sweet melody of the birds above echoed gracefully through the forest. The setting sun was drifting off to sleep beyond the horison. The air was soft and warm against my face....Then I woke the funk up and blared a Fear Factory C/d from my Radio.


Tada, easy as that

[Laguna Loire]

Entry:

Walking the ice-cold streets of New Orleans, I wondered "Where is she? How is she doing? Is she happy?" In my mind, I asked the questions which could not be answered. It...it had been seven years since she left me. On that day...in the apartment...the anger seemed engraved on her face. I'd enraged her before, but never like that day. When she packed her bags, I figured she would be back within a couple of days. But no...day after day, I sat by the phone, waiting for a call. Then I realised...she wasn't coming back...

How long has it been since she left? Ah...seventy-two days, six hours, and...well, I've lost track of the minutes...I was late for work, but I didn't seem to care. All of my attention was focused on the person I could not have...a textbook case, people tell me; "People always want the things they cannot have." Hardly a consoling thing to say to a friend, but I would probably say the same thing to someone with the same problem as me...

After seventeen minutes of pointless thought about her, I arrived at work. I hated my job. It was just...boring. Every day seems to be the same. I arrive. I sit down at my desk, enclosed inside a narrow, miserable cubicle. I make reports on the sales figures of the telemarketing company for seven hours. Then I go home and sit by the phone...not much of a life...but that's the way it goes...

As I began my work inside the cubicle, I lost track of what I was doing. Once again, all of my attention was focused on my girlfri-...ex-girlfriend. Last summer...at the park...wow, it seems so long ago...basking in the warm sun, just having fun, playing on children's swings, just for a good laugh...if we could've seen ourselves now back then...what would we do? But then someone tapped me on the shoulder, destroying my focus on the reminiscence. I looked over, and they pointed at my screen. So embarrassing...I had unknowingly typed "KATIE" all over the screen...

After I left work, and made my way home, the "KATIE" incident had provoked some thoughts in my head. I realised I had two options:

1. Get professional help. It would cost a bombshell, but perhaps I would've needed a shrink to help me...help me let go...

2. Find Katie. I had no idea where she was, but I would've given anything...just to see her face...

But what to do? Here's a hint: I immediatly tried to recall anything about her saying where she was going. Yeah...I had to find her...

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Whoosh! This thing's as boring as hell, and I've got no idea where it came from...but there we go.

[DeFJaM]

omg thats deep

[MORSN417]

i stink at writting(and thats being palite)
ao i will pass on this one

[HRBEK]

I had left home early to go to work. I was already running late because I had a massive hangover from one of the worst parties that you could imagine. I staggered down the steps and into the dark alley. In the distance I could hear several Police Sirens.

I wandered over there before remembering that I didn't come out of my house. I could not remember a thing. By the time I reached the Police Cars, I saw two body-bags being zipped up. Judging by the fact that I was outside the house where the party was held, I assumed that these deaths were probably drug-related.

I walked home wondering who could have died. When I arrived hom, I turned on the television and saw a News Broadcast relating to the incident at the party. The two people who had died were actually really good friends of mine. They put the pictures of two suspects up on screen. Graham Border was one, we have always hated each other......... Then to my horror, they put my picture up on the screen.

I didn't know what to think because I couldn't actually remember anything. Suddenly, I heard a knock on the door. I looked out the window and saw three armed Police Officers standing outside. I panicked and jumped out my bathroom window to escape. I was terrified that I had actually murdered two of my best friends.

I finally reached a Motel. I couldn't rent a room under my name, so I had to use my fake ID. "Thank God for DayleJ" I thought. I paid the man and went to the room. I hit my pockets, and to my horror, i found a knife, covered with blood. I was starting to really think that this was my doing. All seemed clear that I had murdered these people.

I quickly headed for Dayle's house. I knocked on the door, waited for a minute and he finally answered. He was stoned and hungover, so I asked him for a hand-gun, and he was too wrecked to refuse. He gave me the gun and I headed back to the Motel. I didn't even know why I wanted the gun. I guess I was scared that I may need to keep the Police away with it. I was so confused.

I fell asleep on the bed and woke up at 5:30pm...... I shot up and looked around to make sure that no Police were around. I was becoming very paranoid. I turned on the television to see if any developments in the case had been made. They were saying that the Police had some footage of the night in question. I freaked, and was convinced that I would be in the tape. They put up a photo of the confirmed killer...... It was me.

My entire World had caved in. I picked up the gun, and prayed to the mighty Liquid Snake, put the gun in my mouth, and pulled the trigger.

Hehe, I don't like being very specific!

Thanks,
HRBEK.

[~Felly~]

Hehehe, I'll type mine on a Word Document. Mine should be in withen a few days. I wanna type a good and long one. Unless there's a word count.

[HRBEK]

Lol, mine's about as deep as a Baby Pool. Liquid Snake's is actually serious.

Thanks,
HRBEK.

[Element Lord]

dude what happened to word documents? umm...ive been doing stuff (learning to skateboard) so i might not do one. ill just be ref, orchestrator

[Vipershark]

That was cool HRBEK. you should make an ending to that one. (another one) where you don't kill yourself.

HRBEK- *goes to dayle's house and rings doorbell.*
Dayle- *comes to door* whaat..... HRBEK..... is that... y-you? what do you want? *Drunk. Stammers around and studders his words.* *Drops beer bottle and cusses*
HRBEK- I need a gun. Now.
Dayle- Whatever. *Leads HRBEK to a gun case.* Here. Take your pick.
HRBEK- o.O Why do you have all these guns? Where'd you get this rocket launch- never mind. *Takes a handgun* *Leaves.*
Dayle- Whatever. *Passes out from the beer*

Lol!

[Dead Or Alive]

I made a 1300 word essy for school once. It was like a letter that I sent to a dead person

[~Felly~]

Meh, I'll just type it here.


One day, Flame (btw, that's me) was walking to school with her best friend, Ritz. "Nice day for a snowball fight, don't you think, Flame?" said Ritz. "Yeah. I hope we have one!" said Flame. They got to school and the class was having a snowball fight. "Ok, guys, pick your teams!! The team leaders are Flame and Undine!" yelled the teacher, Mr. Leslie. Flame's team consisted of herself, Ritz, Kyle, Marche, and Mewt. Undine's team consisted of herself, Guiness, Colin, Lyle, and Balmung. "Ok, five people on each team! Good. Flame's team starts. BEGIN!!!!!!!!" said Mr.Leslie. Flame's whole team threw snowballs at every person on their team. Then, Undine's team did the same thing. After that, they all started throwing snowballs at each other. Balmung threw a snowball with a rock in it and hit Mewt. "Ow.." said Mewt. He threw a snowball at Balmung filled with rocks. It hit and their foreheads were bleeding. "What's going on here?" asked Mr.Leslie. "Balmung hit Mewt with a rock, and Mewt did the same!" exclaimed Kyle. "Ok, Balmung and Mewt, stay here. Everyone else can leave. Flame, Marche, and Ritz stayed until Mewt was able to leave. "Let's go." said Mewt. They left and saw Mewt's dad. "Mr. Yarnio, you keep messing up." said the person. "I know, I know. I promise it won't happen again." said Mr. Yarnio. "I hope so." said the person. The person left and Mewt's dad, Mr.Yarnio, walked over to the four of them. "Mewt, how was school?" asked Mr.Yarnio. "Fun. We had a snowball fight." said Mewt, sounding happy. Mr.Yarnio left. "So what do you guys wanna do?" asked Flame. "I have to go home. My little sister gets outta the hospital today." said Marche. "You have a little sister?" asked Ritz. "Yeah. She has to go to hospital sometimes." said Marche. "Wow, it must be hard on your parents." said Flame. "Not really. She likes magic and stuff." said Marche. "Hey! I'm going to get a book on magic and stuff! Maybe she'll like it." said Mewt. "Cool! Marche, we'll meet you at your house when we get the book." said Flame, sounding happy. "Ok. It's the yellow house." said Marche. Marche headed to his house, and Flame, Mewt, and Ritz went to get the book. At the bookstore, Mewt grabbed the book. "It's 20 dollars." said the book keeper. "Aw, man! I only have 10 dollars." said Mewt, sounding worried. "Don't worry. Me and Ritz have 5 dollars each, so we can still get the book." said Flame. They payed for the book, and went to Marche's house. Flame knocked on the door, and Marche's mom answered the door. "Hi. You must be Marche's friends." said Marche's mom. She let them in, and took them to Marche and his sister's room. "Hey, guys." said Marche. "Have fun." said Marche's mom, smiling. "I'm Flame, your brother's friend." said Flame. "I'm Ritz." said Ritz. "And I'm Mewt." said Mewt. "Hi. I'm Kairi." said Kairi. Flame, Marche, Mewt, and Ritz sat down. Mewt layed the book down on the floor and they started looking at it. "Wow, this is so cool!" exclamined Kairi, sounding excited. "I knew you'd like it, sis." said Marche. A few hours later, Mewt closed the book. "That was so cool!" said Kairi, sounding very happy. "Well, I guess you guys should go." said Marche. "Yeah. See you tommorow, Marche." said Ritz. "Yeah, bye." said Mewt. "It was nice meeting you, Ritz and Mewt." said Kairi. They left. "Don't you have to go, Flame?" asked Marche. "I suppose I should. My sister might get worried." said Flame, sounding sad. "You have a sister?" asked Marche. "Yeah. I'll let you guys meet her tommorow." said Flame. "Ok. Bye." said Marche. "Nice meeting you, Flame." said Kairi, smiling. Flame left. That night, Mewt's book opened by itself. Everything in the world had changed. Everyone had magic powers. It was the start.. of a new life...

**THE END**

[HRBEK]

Lol, nice one Fire Element Lord. It is a little hard on the eyes though. Make a few paragraphs......

Thanks,
HRBEK.

[Vipershark]

FEL! How dare you! (Don't understand what I'm saying? Hint: Play Final Fantast Tactics Advance.)

Meh, I'm writing one.