Writing contest 2

[Element Lord]

ok since for now nobody has any credits (i dont count) this contest is open to all categories. ok go!

[Dead Or Alive]

*ahem*

[B]Louis in Muffinland: Part One (Of 3)[/B]

It was a very warm day, and Louis was reading a book (about [B]muffins[/B] *sigh*) There were all types of [B]muffins[/B]. Big ones, small ones, fat ones, chocolate ones, blueberry ones etc. Suddenly, a giant chocolate chip [B]muffin[/B] jumped out of the book he was reading. "[B]Muffins[/B]!" blurted Louis. The [B]muffin[/B] jumped into a small hole... a rabbit hole. Without realising, Louis jumped into the hole. [B]The muffin[/B] serch has begun.
He was falling... falling down the hole which was now much bigger then it first was. He saw lots of [B]muffins[/B] on the way down. But none were as delicous and big and fluffy as the one Louis had seen escaping from the book. Then, there was a large 'thump' and Louis realised he reached the bottom of the hole. Suddenly... "[B]Muffin[/B]!" The original [B]muffin[/B] was now standing in front of him...

The [B] muffin[/B] started to run. Louis followed. The [B]muffin[/B] ran to a tiny door the size of a pack of playing cards. The [B]muffin[/B] jumped... and so did Louis. He caught a small piece of the [B]muffin[/B], right before it turned into a small, miniscule [B]muffin[/B] and ran to the small door... and entered. "[B]Muffins[/B]!" exclaimed Louis. He tried to put his hand through the door. No good. He decided to eat a piece the small piece of the [B]muffin[/B] he had got. He then turned into... a [B]muffin[/B]! He was small enough to enter the door now. He ran... as fast as he could, following the [B]muffin[/B]

The room was nothing like he ever saw before... There was a giant chocolate waterfall with floating chocolate chips and mini [B]muffins[/B] in it. Everything was made of [B]muffin[/B], the ground, the plants, the table that he now saw. Louis had to restrain himslef from eating himself. There were people at the table. Louis ate more of the [B]muffin[/B] he got. It was the best he ever tasted. He turned big again, and ran to the table at top speed. "Hello!" Came a weird voice from the table. It was a weird tall man with a mad hat. There were other weird people there too. Then the man said, "Im the..." "[B]Muffins[/B]!" said Louis. "Yaaa..." said the man. "Anyway, do you want to join our tea..." "Muffin!" Louis cut in. "Yes, everything is made out of [B]muffins[/B]"... Louis shot the man dead. For Louis saw the [B]muffin[/B] at the table... he tried shooting the [B]muffin[/B], but it was too skilled...


[I]Thanky you and it's not done yet, there's 2 more parts to come in the next competition. Oh, and if you're smart, you would have realised this is based on alice in wonderland. I named it Louis in Muffinland[/I]

[Laguna Loire]

^ Lmao! Hahah, nice one man!

I'll enter this contest, just need to find time to write a story of some sort...also need to get the ideas factory in my brain workin' again.

[Dead Or Alive]

I jst edited some of it to make it longer. I have a good idea for part 2 now lol..

[Element Lord]

dude it's like a ripoff of alice in wonderland and willy wonka!
save parts 2 and three for future contests.

[Dead Or Alive]

Ya, it as differnt stories. I'm writing part 2 now.

[MORSN417]

[QUOTE=mr nobody]Ya, it as differnt stories. I'm writing part 2 now.[/QUOTE]


if u do part 2 & 3 for this contest then it might be to long.........save them

and, will it be a continueation??

[Element Lord]

like I said save part 2 and 3 for the next two contests

[PøinŦ Çataclsym]

[COLOR=DarkRed][SIZE=4][B]PIE WARS: EPISODE 1, REVENGE OF THE PIE!!![/B] [/SIZE] [/COLOR]

[COLOR=DarkRed]Once upon a time, there sat a little french kid, in America. His name was frank, or Francisco, whatever you felt like callin him. He lived in a box. yes, a PLASTIC box. not a cardboard one. Then one day, a magical pie comes and takes him away to a world full of...PIE! He is trained in the frost (force ) and is told he is a Pieful Knight, the defenders of Pie Land. He is told to attack Pastry Land, or land of the pastry (sad, isnt it?). He went there, and came back with thousands of custards impaled on his pole. yes a pole. he didnt have a pie sword or anything. Then he ate them. He got fat, and had to get suctioned. So he got suctioned. Then he had to attack Custurdia, then Muffinia, the even...Frostovia (the land were all Frostings come from.) Then finnaly, he had to attack Bakedgoodsia. The cupcake, brownie, and ice cream cake defenders where hard to defeat, but he defeated them. Then, the pies betrayed him and exploded him by feeding him to much pie. Then they found Henry, and the same happened to him, then Bob, and so on....The legend of the pie continues forevuh!

I was VERY REALLY BORED when i did this, so it doesnt mattuh what you say. [/COLOR]

[MORSN417]

wuts with food in this writting contest.......anyway, nice star wars ripoff

[PøinŦ Çataclsym]

Hey, this is completely original *stares around making sure no one from Lucas Arts is spying on him* but anyway, about the food, i dont know, we just like muffins and pie. They are natural attractions (about 200 of the 757 people in my school are addicted to one of the following: Bunnies, Rabbits, Muffins, Pie, Cheese)

[Element Lord]

its also a bit of a muffin ripoff

[PøinŦ Çataclsym]

what does PIE haf to do with muffins?

[HRBEK]

It doesn't matter! Just post a story!

Thanks,
HRBEK.

[Sesshy]

[QUOTE=Point Cataclsym][COLOR=DarkRed][SIZE=4][B]PIE WARS: EPISODE 1, REVENGE OF THE PIE!!![/B] [/SIZE] [/COLOR]

[COLOR=DarkRed]Once upon a time, there sat a little french kid, in America. His name was frank, or Francisco, whatever you felt like callin him. He lived in a box. yes, a PLASTIC box. not a cardboard one. Then one day, a magical pie comes and takes him away to a world full of...PIE! He is trained in the frost (force ) and is told he is a Pieful Knight, the defenders of Pie Land. He is told to attack Pastry Land, or land of the pastry (sad, isnt it?). He went there, and came back with thousands of custards impaled on his pole. yes a pole. he didnt have a pie sword or anything. Then he ate them. He got fat, and had to get suctioned. So he got suctioned. Then he had to attack Custurdia, then Muffinia, the even...Frostovia (the land were all Frostings come from.) Then finnaly, he had to attack Bakedgoodsia. The cupcake, brownie, and ice cream cake defenders where hard to defeat, but he defeated them. Then, the pies betrayed him and exploded him by feeding him to much pie. Then they found Henry, and the same happened to him, then Bob, and so on....The legend of the pie continues forevuh!

I was VERY REALLY BORED when i did this, so it doesnt mattuh what you say. [/COLOR][/QUOTE]


oh no you didnt talk about my custard.